Summer Rain and Spring Breeze

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Spring

Postby dduk » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:19 am

UPDATES::

04/19 ::: posted 2 teaser pages here in order to find out how the execution and setup is, rest of chapter will be posted in entirety once completed

04/07- currently working on '"Spring chapter 1:Contract"
I'm expecting to complete the first chapter this month so around late April or early May.

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Description:
These 3 titles were originally the chapters but with the upcoming edit i'm doing, these pretty much summarize the 3 arcs, Spring, Summer, Autumn, and Winter arcs, winter arc is tentive as im not sure i wanna do that story, its sorta like an addon. Unlike before, each of these arcs are composed of a few chapters except for maybe the winter arc which might be just 1 chapter.

Spring Arc:
This story was written 5 years ago by a friend of mine. It was originally 100% romance but since romance is sorta eh for me, i had to incorporate some comedy. This is my version of his story, I changed a lot of stuff (nearly everything) but kept the 2 major pts, how it Starts and Ends.

Summer Arc:
Fei, Sora and his whole grade Devision go on a planned school trip to another country when old memories of Yin's past re-emerge..

Autumn Arc:
Back from the Summer trip, Misfortunes are brought forward..

Winter Arc (new):
Sora's friends test Fei's character in order to determine how accurate Sora's view of him is..

Spring Arc, Summer Arc, Autumn Arc and Winter Arc comic/manga by InG (changed my nick..)


Ratings
Spring Arc Genre: Romance/comedy
Summer Arc Genre: Tragedy/Romance/comedy
Autumn Arc: Drama/Romance
Winter Arc: Comedy/ Romance
Age:13+
Violence: 1-4 - There actually might be something im juggling around in my head that may occur during the autumn arc..
Language: 3 - hmm.. not sure about this one, so 3 just in case
Sexual Content: 5 - its a romance, so relationships is the focus, there's kissing so i'll put 5
Bad Religion: 0 - no religion here

read from left to right ^^ (i might change this in the last arc just to test it out hehe)

:::OLD ARCHIVE OF SPRING:::
Spring Breeze: Spring Breeze page 1

Summer Rain: Summer Rain page 1

Last Autumn: Last Autumn page 1
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Postby Felix » Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:22 am

Oh, YAY! ^_^ Alright! Good job on finishing them! I'll read the rest of summer rain right away.

Edit: I finished it o.o I want more! You're gonna do more, right? Or like another one or something? When/if you do, please update! I really like it and I wanna see what happens next.

[Spoiler=Summer Rain]I can't believe she died! That's so sad.. but hey, I guess this means Yin and Akira will be able to make up again[/Spoiler]
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Postby Felix » Wed Jun 28, 2006 6:28 am

o.O Edit? Dumb computer *kicks it*
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Postby Gypsy » Wed Jun 28, 2006 11:57 am

W00t! New webmanga! I love it so far - the penciling is so soft and detailed, and I could almost hear that chime in the opening page. This is so getting bookmarked. ;)
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:10 pm

I love this! This is awesome!

Good work!

Summer rain doesn't seem to be completed. What happens next? I must know!
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Postby dduk » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:37 pm

Mr. SmartyPants wrote:Summer rain doesn't seem to be completed. What happens next? I must know!


lol its done, the chapter summer rain is done, but the entire novel isnt, therefore the cliffhanger ^^
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:41 pm

dduk wrote:lol its done, the chapter summer rain is done, but the entire novel isnt, therefore the cliffhanger ^^

ToT Hurry it up pleeeaaseee
It's getting good!
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Postby everdred12a » Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:18 pm

Oh... so it's not supposed to be done yet? I read Spring Breeze a long time ago, but I didn't start Summer Rain because it wasn't finished... Now I wanna go read it xD

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Postby Felix » Thu Jun 29, 2006 12:23 pm

Yes, read it. It's gooood! *bookmarks page* I'll be waiting for the update :]
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Last Autumn

Postby dduk » Thu Jun 29, 2006 4:33 pm

I already finished the first page of the 'last' chapter and posted the box for it in the archive

lol im hoping ill have it done in a few months instead of 1 yr like summer rain

thx again for everyone who read it^^
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updated

Postby dduk » Mon Jul 03, 2006 10:10 am

comic has been updated and the first 5 pages of the last chapter "Last Autumn" have been released
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Postby meboeck » Mon Jul 03, 2006 10:39 am

T.T So sad...
*insert poem, quote, or witty comment here*

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Postby Felix » Mon Jul 03, 2006 1:04 pm

Ooh I love it! Hind is such a jerk! ;-; I want to kick his Hind end!
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to fin or not to fin?

Postby stripe man » Mon Jul 03, 2006 2:42 pm

Wow these are realy good. Don't mean to rush you but try to finish quickly. or i'll be doing this. :bang: or :hits_self or :comp:
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Jul 03, 2006 4:22 pm

I love this web manga. It is really good.
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Postby Takuya » Thu Sep 14, 2006 6:26 pm

WHY MUST YOU GO LEFT TO RIGHT LIKE A CRAZY PERSON?! XD Just kidding.. though I do perfer Japanese format for manga... o.o...


Spring Breeze 11 won't load!!!!!!!!
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Postby Takuya » Thu Sep 14, 2006 7:42 pm

*READS SPRING BREEZE* ^^ XDXDXD Yin's nuts...

*READS A FEW PAGES OF SUMMER RAIN* XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "STOP YELLING IN MY EAR!" XDXDXDXD!!!!!!!!!!!

EDIT:

*READS THE REST* .... *HEAD SNAPS BACK BACK* OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OoO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU!!! H-.. SH-... WHA?!?!?!

EDIT:

*READS THE FIVE PAGES OF LAST AUTUMN* Great artwork... everything's so much better... I'm planning an anime and game of my own so I suppose this could be in the production plans... o.o...
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Postby jon_jinn » Fri Sep 15, 2006 3:41 pm

good job. this is a really good manga. however, i will be patient and won't tell you to hurry up so you won't feel you need to finish it faster.
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Postby Takuya » Fri Sep 15, 2006 7:14 pm

*CRIES* [SPOILER=don't read this spoiler unless you've either read the manga or wanna find out now...]POOR YU'ANN!!!!!![/SPOILER]
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Postby PureAnimeFan » Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:17 pm

OMG I just read it this is AWESOME STUFF!!!

Post more as soon as possible PLEASE!!!
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Postby Peregrine » Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:49 pm

I just read spring breeze. It's awesome! The only problem is that my computer won't let me read the summer rain, so now I'm left hanging. :bang:
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Postby wingedfox » Wed Nov 29, 2006 6:22 am

I wanna know what happen's next !!! Hurry!!!
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Postby heero yuy 95 » Thu Nov 30, 2006 5:27 pm

I wanna know what happen's next !!! Hurry!!!


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Postby Peregrine » Thu Nov 30, 2006 5:31 pm

me too! now that my computer is coaperating.
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Postby dduk » Sun Apr 08, 2007 12:59 am

I'm planning to finish writing this comic this year (hopefully)
i haven't done anything with this comic in awhile because i wanted to get better with my artwork and have a more consistant drawing style, when i did this back in 04 i didnt really have a set style i drew in at all haha
well now i feel like im getting more consistant with the way i draw and im planning on some script modifications; im also gonna redraw the whole comic starting from spring breeze
tho the way it'll work now is the whole comic will be called Spring and have 4 arcs, with the 4th arc being tentive.

ill post the remake as soon as i get it finished, the story now has modifications to reduce the cliched'ness and to expand the overall story, so it might be longer this time around

i have another story in my head i wanna do but i feel like this is a test that in order to make it to the next story i need to finish Spring =J

thanks everyone for reading the prescript for spring and sry for making ppl wait so long for the updates that never came,
i plan to have it all done by the end of summer, ill force myself to do it heh :thumb:

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Postby Peregrine » Mon Apr 09, 2007 2:37 pm

Yay! I hope you finish it fast! Good luck.
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Postby USSRGirl » Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:20 pm

Wow. LOVE your artwork. A bit late commenting on this I know. XP Hope the revisions will be even better. Haven't read 'em all yet, but I did enjoy drooling over the awesome art style.
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