Something Else I Wrote

[CAAOutkast]

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THE QUEST TO WEAKEN SIN BEGINS-----------HAVING TESTED THE LIMITS OF HIS POWERS,STEVE DESIDES TO TRAIN HARDER TO GO BEYOND THEM.BUT AS HE TRAINS HARD AND MAKES SOME TIME FOR HIS 3 HOUSEMATES,HE SENCES AN EVIL AND FAMILIAR PRESENCE,
SO STEVE AND THE OTHERS DECIDE TO CHECK IT OUT. WHEN THEY GET THERE THEY SEE A GIANT STRONGHOLD.THE HEROES SENCE A MAJOR EVIL FORCE. STEVE CLAIMS THAT HE KNOWS WHAT THE STRONG HOLD IS..HE TELLS THEM HE'LL EXPLAIN WHEN THEY GET HOME.ON THE RIDE HOME STEVE THINKS ABOUT THE STRONG HOLD AND THAT HE CANT BELIEVE IT WOULD APPEAR THIS SOON.AT HOME THE GIRLS ASKS STEVE ABOUT WHAT HE KNEW ABOUT THE STRONGHOLD.STEVE EXPLAINS THAT THE STRONGHOLD IS A BASE OF EVIL AND THAT THE OCCUPENTS ARE THE LORDS AND MASTERS OF VICE AND SIN.AND IF THEY ARE DEFEATED THE EVIL ONES WILL BE DEALT A DEATH BLOW AND THAT SIN WILL GREATLY WEAKEN. STEVE THAN TELLS THEM THAT HE MUST GO ALONE .THE GIRLS ARGUE ,BUT STEVE TELLS THEM THAT THEY WOULDN'T FULLY UNDERSTAND .HE THAN EXPLAINS THAT THIS IS A SPIRITUAL AND BATTLE AS WELL AS A PHYSICAL ONE.HE ALSO TELLS THEM THAT THIS ISN'T THEIR FIGHT . AFTER A SHORT CONVERSATION ABOUT THE MISSION THE GIRLS AGREE TO STAY BEHIND. AFTER SHOWERING AND EATING STEVE LEAVES ON HIS MISSION WITH AMARA DROPPING HIM OFF AT HIS DESTINATION. AFTER STEVE SAYS HIS GOODBYES,AMARA DRIVES OFF.STEVE LOOKS AT THE STRONG HOLD AND TELLS HIMSELF THAT THERE'S NO TURNING BACK.
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FEAR FACTOR------------------ON HER WAY BACK HOME AMARA STARTS TO HAVE DOUBTS ABOUT LEAVING HER FRIEND TO BATTLE ALL ALONE. MEANWHILE, STEVE WALKS UP TO THE FORTRESS AND IS STOPED BY THE DEMONIC ENTRENCE GUARDS.STEVE TELLS THEM TO LET HIM IN OR THEY'LL BE SORRY.THE GUARDS JUS' LAUGH,BUT STEVE TELLS THEM THAT HE WARNED THEM AND TRANSFORMS INTO MAGNA PALADIN{by shouting magna paladin power,suit up}.
MAGNA PALADIN BEATS UP THE GUARDS AND BUSTS INTO THE STRONGHOLD.THE ENTRANCE LEADS MAGNA PALADIN INTO THE COURTYARD. MAGNA TELLS HIMSELF THAT THERE IS NO TURNING BACK NOW. DEEP INSIDE THE STRONGHOLD THE MYSTERIOUS LEADERS ARE WATCHING MAGNA PALADIN ON A VEIWING GLOBE AND COMMENTING ON HOW STUPID HE IS COMING ALONE BUT THAT HE IS EASY PREY AND THEY WILL FINALLY BE RID OF HIM SOON.THE LEADERS ALERT THE "GUARDIANS" TO DEFEAT MAGNA PALADIN. BACK IN THE COURT YARD,MAGNA PALADIN IS LOOKING AROUND WHEN HE GETS GREETED BY LORD FEAR,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLD GUARDIANS AND HIS MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF FEAR{horror,terror,nightmare,and phobia}. AFTER INTRODUCTIONS,FEAR AND HIS MINIONS BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN.
AFTER A ROUND OF FIGHTING,THE PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS AND BEATS FEAR .FEAR DECIDES TO USE SOME OF THE POWERS GIVEN TO HIM BY THE SPIRIT OF FEAR...AND HE DOES.FEAR SUMMONS UP MAGNA PALADIN'S INNER FEARS{fears that he can't do anything without his friends,that he may be nothing without his armor,and that he has a fear of trusting people},MAKING HIM DEFENCELESS. AFTER MINUTES OF STRUGGLING WITH HIS FEARS,MAGNA PALADIN STARTS TO ADMIT HIS FEARS. HE ADMITS THAT HE DOES HAVE A FEAR OF TRUSTING PEOPLE BECAUSE,THANKS TO SATAN,SOME PEOPLE NOWADAYS ARE VERY UNTRUSTWORTHY AND WILL BETRAY YOU SOONER OR LATER IN LIFE. HE THAN ADMITS THAT HE HAS TO HAVE HIS FRIENDS BY HIS SIDE BECAUSE, AGAIN,THANKS TO SATAN THE WORLD HAS BECOME AN UNPREDICTABLE PLACE AND THAT HE NEEDS HIS BUDDYS TO AID HIM.HE THAN TELLS THE DEMON THAT GOOD FRIENDS ARE HARD TO COME BY.PALADIN THAN TELLS FEAR THAT HE NEEDS HIS ARMOR FOR PROTECTION AGAINST THE DANGERS OF THIS WORLD.PALADIN QUICKLY KILLS LORD FEAR AND MOVES ON INTO THE FORTRESS. MAGNA PALADIN FINDS HIMSELF IN THE MAIN SECTOR.
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HELL'S STRONGHOLD----------------BACK AT STEVE'S HOUSE, THE HEROINES ARE PLANNING TO AID STEVE,HOTARU ARRIVES AND AFTER HEARING ABOUT STEVE'S MISSION,SHE DECIDES TO JOIN HER COUNTERPARTS. MEANWHILE,MAGNA PALADIN IS IN THE MAIN SECTOR OF THE STRONG HOLD,WHEN HE IS GREETED BY N.V.YUSS,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLD GUARDIANS AND HIS MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF JEALOUSY{merciless,hate,relentless,rage,and murder}. AFTER INTRODUCTIONS,N.V.YUSS AND HIS MINIONS BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN.AFTER A ROUND OF FIGHTING,THE PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS AND BEATS YUSS .N.V. YUSS DECIDES TO USE SOME OF THE POWERS GIVEN TO HIM BY THE SPIRIT OF JEALOUSY...AND HE DOES.YUSS SUMMONS UP MAGNA PALADIN'S INNER JEALOUSYS....MAGNA PALADIN SHAKES IT OFF{because he hardly has any jealousy in him}AND KILLS N.V.YUSS. THE HERO MOVES ON TO THE NEXT ROOM, SECTOR 1.
IN SECTOR 1,MAGNA PALADIN RUNS INTO BONDAGE MAN, ONE OF THE STRONGHOLD GUARDIANS AND HIS MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF BONDAGE{compulsive sinner,spiritual blindess,addiction,anguish,and the first servent of corruption}. AFTER INTRODUCTIONS,BONDAGE MAN AND HIS MINIONS BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN.
AFTER A ROUND OF FIGHTING,THE PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS AND BEATS BONDAGE MAN . BONDAGEMAN DECIDES TO USE SOME OF THE POWERS GIVEN TO HIM BY THE SPIRIT OF BONDAGE...AND HE DOES. BONDAGE MAN SUMMONS UP MAGNA PALADIN'S INNER BONDAGE...BUT IT FAILS. PALADIN TELLS BONDAGE MAN THAT HE HAD ADDICTIONS AND OTHER BONDAGES IN THE PAST,AND THAT THEY ARE GONE NOW...EXCEPT FOR HIS HATRED FOR THE FORCES OF HELL. AFTER MAGNA PALADIN KILLS BONDAGE MAN,HE MOVES ON TO THE NEXT ROOM, SECTOR 2.
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SLIPPING OFF THE KID GLOVES---------------- MAGNA PALADIN IS IN SECTOR 2 OF THE STRONG HOLD,WHEN HE IS GREETED BY KING PRIDE ,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLD GUARDIANS AND HIS MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF PRIDE{haughty,witchcraft,arrogance,gossip,self righteous,self deseption,obsinant,control freak,mocker,and scorn}. AFTER INTRODUCTIONS,KING PRIDE AND HIS MINIONS BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN.AFTER A ROUND OF FIGHTING,THE PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS AND BEATS PRIDE .KING PRIDE DECIDES TO USE SOME OF THE POWERS GIVEN TO HIM BY THE SPIRIT OF PRIDE. PRIDE SUMMONS UP MAGNA PALADIN'S INNER PRIDES...AND WHEN THAT FAILS{because paladin hardly has any pride},KING PRIDE SUMMONS A SUPER MONSTER CALLED THE JAHOVA HATER. THE MONSTER ATTACKS,AND SOON LOSES.MAGNA PALADIN KILLS THE MONSTER AND KING PRIDE..HE THAN MOVES ON TO SECTOR 3. DEEP INSIDE THE STRONGHOLD THE MYSTERIOUS LEADERS ARE WATCHING MAGNA PALADIN ON A VEIWING GLOBE AND COMMENTING ON HOW FORMATABLE HE IS AS AN ENEMY AND THAT HE MUST NOT INTERUPT THEIR PLAN TO INTENCIFY SIN. THEY THAN TELL THE "GUARDIANS" TO STEP UP THEIR ATTACKS. MAGNA PALADIN IS IN SECTOR 3 OF THE STRONG HOLD,WHEN HE IS GREETED BY DECEPTOR ,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLD GUARDIANS AND HIS MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF LIES{gossip,slander,hypocrisy,cults,accusation,progressive teacher,flattery,superstition,vanity,and self love }. AFTER INTRODUCTIONS, DECEPTOR AND HIS MINIONS BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN.AFTER A ROUND OF FIGHTING,THE PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS AND BEATS DECEPTOR . DECEPTOR DECIDES TO USE SOME OF THE POWERS GIVEN TO HIM BY THE SPIRIT OF LIES...AND HE DOES. DECEPTOR TELLS THE HERO THAT HIS FRIENDS DON'T REALLY LIKE HIM AT ALL AND THAT THEY JUST FEEL PITY FOR HIM...PALIDIN PONDERS THIS AND FOR A COUPLE OF MINUTES BELIEVED THAT WAS TRUE..BUT HE REALIZES THAT IF THE GIRLS WERENT HIS FRIENDS THEY WOULNT BOTHER LIVING WITH HIM AND THAT THEY WOUDNT BE A TRUE TEAM.. PALADIN TELLS DECEPTOR THAT HE HAS GOOD FRIENDS AND THAT HIS{deceptors}LIES ARE PATHETIC.MAGNA PALADIN KILLS DECEPTOR AND MOVES ON TO SECTOR 4.
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OCCULTIC RUMBLE---------------------MAGNA PALADIN IS IN SECTOR 4 OF THE STRONG HOLD,WHEN HE IS GREETED BY CLAIR VOYANT ,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLD GUARDIANS AND HER MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF FAMILIARARITY{horoscope,astrology,yoga,fortune teller,and occult}. AFTER INTRODUCTIONS,CLAIR VOYANT AND HER MINIONS BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN.AFTER A ROUND OF FIGHTING,THE PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS AND BEATS YOYANT .CLAIR VOYANT DECIDES TO USE SOME OF THE POWERS GIVEN TO HER BY THE SPIRIT OF FAMILIARARITY....VOYANT SUMMONS UP THE POWERS OF THE OCCULT TO BATTLE,SHE FAILS IN THE END. .DEVA DIVINE,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLDS GUARDIANS AND HER MINIONS,THE DEMONS OF DIVINATION{enchanter,warlock,witchcraft,stargazer,magik,psychic,and soothsayer.},ARRIVE TO STOP THE HERO.AFTER PALADIN KILLS THE MINIONS,BOTH CLAIR VOYANT AND DEVA DIVINE COMBINE THIER OCCULTIC POWERS TO BATTLE MANGA PALADIN.AT FIRST THE HERO HAS A DIFFICULT TIME FIGHTING THEM,BUT BY SUMMONING THE POWER OF CHRIST HE IS ABLE TO BEAT AND KILL THE DEMONIC DUO.MAGNA PALADIN MOVES ON TO SECTOR 5...WHICH IS EMPTY. AS THE HERO IS TAKING A REST, THE MYSTERIOUS LEADERS ARE WATCHING HIM ON THE VEIWING GLOBE AND COMPLAINING ABOUT HOW HE KILLED CLAIR VOYANT AND DEVA DIVINE IN A HANDYCAP BATTLE.ONE OF THE LEADERS WAS GONNA SUMMON THE GUARDIAN OF ANTI-CHRIST TO BATTLE MAGNA PALADIN,BUT THE OTHERS OBJECTED AND THAN EXPLAINED THAT THEY WILL GIVE THE HERO A STRONGER HANDYCAP INSTEAD.

[CAAOutkast]

A DEADLY TRIPLE THREAT----------------------------IN SECTOR 6,MAGNA PALADIN IS BATTLING THE DEMONS OF ERROR{post-modernism,newage movement,and cults},LEAD BY PROFESSOR HUBBERD,ONE OF THE STRONGHOLDS GUARDIANS.AFTER SEEING HIS MINIONS KILLED,HUBBERD TRIES TO INJECT SOME NEWAGE THINKING INTO THE HERO...BUT IT FAILS AND THE BADGUY ENDS UP GETTING KILLED .THE HERO MOVES ON TO THE 7TH SECTOR.IN SECTOR 7,MAGNA PALADIN GETS ATTACKED BY THE DEMONS OF SUDUCTION{prostitution,hentai,porno,and,lap dancer,stripper},WHORDOM{super porno,lust,fornication,dissatisfaction,money hungry,unfaithfulness,worldlyness,and mega feminist},AND PERVERSION{hyper lust,sexual perversions,polygamy,swinger,filthy mind,pedophile,adultry,giga lust,and incest}.AFTER KILLING THE DEMONS,THE HERO IS CONFRONTED BY,SUCCUBUS X{leader of the demons of whoredom},MISS HENTAI{leader of the demons of suduction},AND A.C.K.{leader of the demons of perversion}.THE 3 INTRODUCE THEMSELVES AS 3 OF THE STRONGHOLDS STRONGEST GUARDIANS .AFTER ALL OF THE TALKING IS DONE,THE FIGHTING BEGINS.THE EXSAUSTED HERO HAS PROBLEMS WITH HIS OPPONENTS. SUDDENLY, THE SERAPHIM SCOUTS APPEAR AND SAVE THEIR LEADER.ONCE THE GIRLS KILL THE ENEMIES,THE WEAKEND MAGNA PALADIN SCOLDS THEM FOR DISOBEYING HIS ORDER.AFTER A SMALL ARGUEMENT,MAGNAPALADIN DECIDES TO LET THE GIRLS FIGHT ALONG SIDE HIM{because hes to hurt to fight alone anymore. }.AFTER MOVING THROUGH 2 EMPTY SECTORS,THE HEROES ENTER THE ANTI-CHRISTS OUTSIDE ARENA. THE MYSTERIOUS LEADERS ARE WATCHING THE HEROES PROGRESS ON THE VEIWING GLOBE AND START COMPLAINING ABOUT HOW THE SERAPHIM SCOUTS INTERFERENCE AND HOW THE ODDS ARE NOW STACKED IN THE HEROES FAVOR. THEY THAN PUT THEIR SATANIC HOPES ON THE FINAL GUARDIAN,THE GUARDIAN OF ANTI-CHRIST.
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[CAAOutkast]

This is A special series I've been working on.It's an unofficial sailor moon sequel. If you wanna know the origins of this team or would like to know more about this series,let me know.

I hope you like it,
Steve

Oh,and Sorry for the Caps,I copyed and pasted it from one of my personal documents. I don't feel like re-writing it at the moment. oh forgive me for using the american names of the sailor senshi.

Amara is Haruka,Michele is Michiru,Trista is Setsuna,and Hotaru is still Hotaru.

[CAAOutkast]

Ya'll hate it dont'cha. Maybe If I start the series from the begining. and this time there will be no caps.

steve

[mastersquirrel]

I haven't read completely through it, but I'm kinda wondering why everything seems to run together. I can't remember the term for the tense you're using, but it's use all the way through really bugs me when I'm trying to read it.

I'll try to give an example to explain myself.

HAVING TESTED THE LIMITS OF HIS POWERS,STEVE DESIDES TO TRAIN HARDER TO GO BEYOND THEM.BUT AS HE TRAINS HARD AND MAKES SOME TIME FOR HIS 3 HOUSEMATES,HE SENCES AN EVIL AND FAMILIAR PRESENCE,
SO STEVE AND THE OTHERS DECIDE TO CHECK IT OUT. WHEN THEY GET THERE THEY SEE A GIANT STRONGHOLD.THE HEROES SENCE A MAJOR EVIL FORCE. STEVE CLAIMS THAT HE KNOWS WHAT THE STRONG HOLD IS.

The way this set of sentences is structured seems to rush through important parts, such as when Steve senses the evil and when they arrive at the stronghold. There really isn't any description to kinda pull the reader in.

Also, the last sentence, this is the tense I was talking about. "Steve claims that he knows what the stronghold is." The way this is written makes me think that it's like a summary of something bigger. I'd expect it to actually be written more like: " 'I know what this stronghold is,' Steve said. "

The rest of the story seems to use your tense throughout, which makes me not really want to read the rest.

Sorry for all the critiques.

[CAAOutkast]

I haven't read completely through it, but I'm kinda wondering why everything seems to run together. I can't remember the term for the tense you're using, but it's use all the way through really bugs me when I'm trying to read it.

I'll try to give an example to explain myself.


The way this set of sentences is structured seems to rush through important parts, such as when Steve senses the evil and when they arrive at the stronghold. There really isn't any description to kinda pull the reader in.

Also, the last sentence, this is the tense I was talking about. "Steve claims that he knows what the stronghold is." The way this is written makes me think that it's like a summary of something bigger. I'd expect it to actually be written more like: " 'I know what this stronghold is,' Steve said. "

The rest of the story seems to use your tense throughout, which makes me not really want to read the rest.

Sorry for all the critiques.

Thats Ok,I have to Re-Write the entire thing anyway{it's all in caps after all}.
The format I writen this Proto-type story is what I like to call "Super Summery".It's A long Summery.

Anyway,A good writer needs to be critiqued,so that he or she can do better next time.

Thanks for the critiques and God Bless,
Steve

[mastersquirrel]

Oh! So this was meant to be a summary? Well in that case then that's fine. I guess this was meant to give you an idea how the finished product would end up, and in that case then this is fine.

Sorry, I didn't realize that this actually was a summary.

[CAAOutkast]

Oh! So this was meant to be a summary? Well in that case then that's fine. I guess this was meant to give you an idea how the finished product would end up, and in that case then this is fine.

Sorry, I didn't realize that this actually was a summary.

No Problem. One Day I'll explain this series from the begining.

Steve

[CAAOutkast]

Here's An Original Series By Me. I'll Give ya the Introduction First and If ya like it,I'll post the Episodes. BTW,If your A Fan Of Super Sentai You'll Like This.


The Story Of Ultima Ranger:
Long,long ago,the planet Eltar was a beautiful and peaceful planet. the planet had a guardian{zeldah} who watched the planets people from her tower in the sky.zeldah was a great protector and when times of crisis arrived,she used her powers to combat evil as the ultima white ranger.20 years have passed and zeldah's eldest son,linck,had taken over as guardian and keeper of the white ultima power..while her youngest son,tallon,had taken over his fathers position as king of the flayr kingdom as well as keeper of the red ultima power.the planet had 5 more kingdoms and each ruler owned their own ultima power. the blue ultima power was owned by king hermis of the aquwar kingdom;the black ultima power was owned by king zuise of the thundra kingdom;the keeper of the green ultima power was queen aphrody of the metyl kingdom; queen endimia of the chibah kingdom had the yellow ultima powers;and queen lena of the usa kingdom was the keeper of the pink ultima powers.the planet also had 2 wise sages,jor borgon and his older cousin farooq dronon..the kings and queens of the planet came to these 2 for guidence and wisdom.100 years later,both sages,now old men,were placed into life suspension capsules to keep them alive...being inside of the capsules made both sages look like giant heads on the outside.50 years later,dronon ran for guardian of eltar and lost to a young man named shiro,who was the decendant of king tallon.dronon angry and disappointed suddenly disappeared..forever. however,50 years later,dronon returned with an armada and attacked planet eltar.shiro,the guardian assembles the eltarian royals to battle the threat.the royals morph into ultima rangers and beat dronons forces.with armada impaired,dronon leaves the planet.200 years later,eltars enemy planet,zeosapia invades and starts a ranger war,a war where zeosapian rangers battle eltarian rangers for supremisy.10 years after the zeosapian invasion,eltar was once again at peace...until dronon returned and attacked with even deadlier forces.the rangers{the ones that faught in the ranger wars} defended eltar,but died in the prossess.after dronon's minions steal the morphers,he decides to kill everyone on eltar using his psychic powers...and he does.but befor he leaves the planet,borgon,who survived,kill dronons forces with his psychic powers and gets 6 of the 7 morphers back. dronon escapes with the green morpher. borgon wasn't the only surviver of dronon's onslaught..delta 18,borgon's assistant,and the children of the eltarian royals,7 small babys that are future eltarian royals.borgon,wanting a better life for the babys,decides to send them to earth.where they will live in peace.after borgon sends the babys to earth in a space capsule,he decides to leave eltar as well.days later,the capsule lands on earth and on the stoop of a california adoption center...where they individualy get adopted.borgon land on earth and sets up a command tower in an uncharted deserted island. meanwhile on zeosapia,dronon and his new minions get word that the eltarian royals have survived and are livng on earth.so,dronon and his minions leave for earth to get the other morphers from borgon and hunt down the eltarian royals. dronon manages to find one of the royals and kidnaps her from her home..after killing her parents. instead of killing the now 2 year-old child,dronon decides to have her raised in his image. fearing that his men aren't ready to tackle borgon yet,dronon decides to leave planet earth and return another time to search for the other 6 eltarian children. 25 years later, with his forces stronger than ever,dronon returns to earth to complete his mission.

Not Bad Huh,
Steve

[Warrior 4 Jesus]

Thanks for getting rid of the all caps. Why did you do that in the first place? Please also learn to use paragraphs, to give the reader's eye a rest every now and then.

[CAAOutkast]

Thanks for getting rid of the all caps. Why did you do that in the first place? Please also learn to use paragraphs, to give the reader's eye a rest every now and then.

Right.

Steve

[CAAOutkast]

1) Ultima Evolution: while searching for the eltarian royals,borgon and delta sence that dronon has returned with an ultra powerful army.after talking about the threat,they continue the search for the royals...suddenly they find 6 of them.Collage gym teacher Gabrielle O'Conner{a caucasian who is outgoing and bright},Mechanic Alundra Flair{a caucasian who is a tough girl},local Radio DJ,Hakeem Johanson{an afro-american who's hip and layed back},Martial Arts Teacher Keno Kato{an asian who is smart,shy,and kind},Amature Model,Michael Hickenbotom{a caucasian who is a cocky fun-lover},and Martial Arts Dojo Owner Shawn Whitman{a caucasian who's just,kind-hearted,and brave} all get teleported from their everyday jobs by borgon.at borgons tower,the people wonder where they are.borgon gives the people a breif explaination about their origin and tells them that they are chosen to defend the planet from dronon. the 6 don't buy it and leave the tower. dronon senses that the royals are on borgons island and sends his general[scroob] along with his grunts[the drones] to kill them. as the 6 roam around the island figuring out a way to get back home,they get attacked by dronon's forces.at first they think that the villians are just some fools in costumes trying to scare them,but soon they find out that the villians are real.when the 6 relize that they cant win,borgon teleports the ultima morphers to them. michael is given the red morpher,shawn is given the white one,alundra is given the yellow one,keno is given the blue one,gabby is given the pink one,and hakeem is given the black one. after transforming into the superhuman street fighting task force aka the ultima rangers,the heroes continue battling the villians and are amazed at the powers that were given to them.after beating the villians,the 6 report back to borgons tower...where they are congradulated by borgon.and even though they don't believe that they are the eltarian royals,the 6 choose to remain rangers.

2) Attack Of The 60-foot Eye Ball: dronon decides to fight the ultima rangers using a giant eye monster called,Giga Eye.meanwhile,the 6 return to their everyday jobs. when the giant monster attacks Los Diablos {the city that the rangers livein..don't let the name fool ya,it's a friendly and peaceful california town that respects and practices law and order},borgon summons the rangers and tells them about the threat.borgon also tells the team that the only way to kill a giant monster is to use combat vehicles known as zords.he than explains that he modeled the zords out of the animal kingdoms greatest fighters,the dinosaurs{dangerous animals that can fight are the zord theme in ultima rangers}and that when the t-rex or the dragon combine with the other zords they will create the ultima megazord or the war dragonzord.after borgon,gives the rangers their zords,they leave for battle.the rangers summon the zords{red gets the t-rex ultima zord,blue gets the tricera ultima zord,black gets the mammoth ultima zord,yellow gets the sabre tooth cat ultima zord,pink gets the ptera ultima zord,white gets the dragon ultima zord} and battle the monster in them. when they lose the first round,they combine the zords to create the ultima megazord. the rangers kill the monster in their ultima megazord.

3) Chemical Carnage:dronon decides to pollute earths air and water by using chemicals{both liquid and gas}.dronon sends his minions to get the chemicals from the chemical plant.meanwhile,the team is hosting an anti-pollution rally in the community.the heroes leave the rally when borgon tells them about
dronon's latest scheme. at the chemical plant the rangers arrive and see the badguys exit the plant with the chemicals. after a fight,the badguys fail to get away with the chemicals.dronon,angry about the rangers stopping him,decides to send a mutant warrior to retreive the chemicals.the rangers battle the warrior at the plant,but lose.the warrior leaves with the chemicals.dronon's thugs pour the chemicals into the water and spray it into the air..poluting both elements.dronon decides to get more chemicals to use in the construction of his monsters as well as make some chemical weapons.rangers,back at borgon's base,get informed about the monster and get ultima weapons{red gets the ultima sword;blue gets the ultima spear;black gets the ultima axe;yellow gets the ultima daggers;pink gets the ultima bow;white gets the ultima sabre}.the heroes get alerted{via alarm and veiwing moniter}about another c-plant raid by dronons men.they then get another alert about the air and water being poluted by the chemicals. the heroes leave for the chemical plant to stop the badguys while borgon and delta create an anti-polution machine to clean up the air and water.the rangers arrive at the chemical plant and battle the monster.with the help of their weapons the rangers beat the monster and prevent another chemichal theft.the monster grows{wia dronon's telekenetic powers}and the rangers summon their zords to battle it. meanwhile borgon and delta finish the anti-polution machine and send it out into the world.the machine purifies the air and water.

Sny question's Cause I'm open.

Super Sentai Forever!