Untitled Story - Chapter 1

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Untitled Story - Chapter 1

Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:24 pm

Here is a story I am working on. Inspiration/Ideas come from Urasawa Naoki's 20th Century Boys and Monster. It a freaky, suspenseful type thing. But it's just the first chapter ^^;;

J.B. was always a good man, his full name being James Brandon Willington. We became friends back in middle school, and we continued to be friends since then, but he was always more of the popular side of the crowd, especially among the girls. Luckily he considered me to be his best friend. So I was usually top priority. When he'd be invited to a social gathering the same day I invited him to play at my house, he'd always tell his buddies “Sorry, I have plans already.â€
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Postby meboeck » Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:30 pm

I already told you this, but this story is freaky in a cool way. I can't wait to read more.
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Postby Linksquest » Thu Mar 16, 2006 7:32 pm

haha you used the word plethora! That's MY word! XD. Whoa... that IS scary. Yea, the one JB guy definately reminds me of johan... scaryness. The whole concept of the boy that no one could see except for other children was a really brilliant concept and i can't wait to see how you develope it with the character living in the real world (or in the main characters mind). Kudos to you... and i am proud of your attempting to do more than video games and anime watching! HE ACTUALLY TOOK TIME TO DO THIS! O.O! YAY! keep it ups!
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Postby jon_jinn » Thu Mar 16, 2006 8:08 pm

nice...very nice.
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