true_noir_chloe wrote:However, I love to read both shonen and shojo, or even better the ones which have the developed characters of shojo and the awesome action (tempered and not overdone) like shonen.
true_noir_chloe wrote:I'm overly opinionated and so is UC.
true_noir_chloe wrote:However, I love to read both shonen and shojo, or even better the ones which have the developed characters of shojo and the awesome action (tempered and not overdone) like shonen.
KarateGirl wrote:Im sorry, i didnt mean to offend anyone on this topic. I didn't mean to slam on battles, i belive he sould continue writing the story the way he feels it should be, every fight should be what he sees and the fighting does work into this story because of the nature of the surrounds... Again, im sorry. I am also looking forward to the next part of the story.
-KG
uc pseudonym wrote:My eyebrows raised reading that. Not bad, though, not bad at all. You are definitely improving, and your paragraphing is just as it needs to be. I'm eager for more of this... and for the combat, when it is time for that.
KarateGirl wrote:WOAH! Ok, i didnt see that coming! I thought it was totally real too, but good thing it was a dream kinda thing....i was like "what?! Noo!" but yeah, good element there, violent, yes, but it kinda gave a look into Zion's head. Very cool
*want more story!!!*
-KG
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