Bel Canto de Myth POLL # 8

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Bel Canto de Myth POLL # 8

Postby Gypsy » Tue Dec 16, 2003 1:11 pm

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Postby true_noir_chloe » Tue Dec 16, 2003 9:20 pm

I picked #1 because I want to see Shine and Ezekial get together. I almost picked #4 because of Shine's personality; but, I think #1 is more interesting. ^_^

I wouldn't think #2 or #3 fit the personality you've given Shine, but then you're the one in control.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Icarus » Wed Dec 17, 2003 1:14 am

I did #2, as my inner ginger bread man was shouting "Don't trust him." Obviously, I disagree with Chloe, as I view only three as incongruent with the personality that you've revealed. But, 'tis your story. As it is tied right now, corral your friends and tell them to vote.
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Wed Dec 17, 2003 8:18 am

Icarus is right. Number 3 is the only one incongruent with her personality, so I would easily accept #2; but, I'm staying with #1.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby shooraijin » Wed Dec 17, 2003 12:45 pm

Boku wa "san bangoo" ga hoshii n deshoo ... kedo ... :red:

[size=-2]... I actually did pick number 3 ...[/size]
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Postby Icarus » Wed Dec 17, 2003 1:31 pm

shooraijin wrote:Boku wa "san bangoo" ga hoshii n deshoo ... kedo ... :red:

[size=-2]... I actually did pick number 3 ...[/size]

No worries, mate. That is the reason for the polls existence, to see what the audience prefers. Myself, I am just a book worm with ideas.
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