Billy Crunch and the Mysterious Darkish Void

[Esoteric]

that's cool! (Yay, another fan, although be prepared for some pseudo-random style changes near the end.)

Could you post/have you posted somthing you've written in the writing section? id love to read it!

Aww, poor microbilly! <sniff> Eh, aw well. Nice update, lots of fun to read! With the rangers back aboard their ship, it sounds like we're coming to a conclusion. Oh, and Dunedan has already posted something in the forum...Lawn Knomes: a cautionary Tale. I've read it, it's hilarious! His writing actually is a little like yours...in a different sort of way...

[TurkishMonky]

I apologize most vehmently for the long delay in this chapter, but i've had a bad case of writer's block recently. However, i am glad to inform you that that is over, and i have been able to start writing again. I'm still working on the story, but i'll post the first half at least.
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Chapter 9: A New Antacid.

Billy, Zeoks and Yubbles marched through a much-too-small entryway, into a small cave. In this cave sat four more armed Snaffly Commandos, and an angry looking Sbefy. Zeoks, however, was much too lost in thought at that moment to pay any attention to his surroundings. Seeing this, Sbefy spoke up to Billy, ignoring the space analyst.

“Where are you meeting your crew to plan to rid this planet of Snafflys? We know that you are interested in the technological marvels of Mothercomputer. So tell us your plans for getting us out of your way.â€

[TurkishMonky]

Just as the PAC-74 came to the probable spot where Mothercomputer’s base was, an enormous sandstorm rushed upon the ship, blinding its occupants while composing a nice windy tune. Some of the rangers liked the melody so much they began to wave their fingers in the air to the music. After a minute or two however, the sand blew away, ending the music and leaving the ship in the middle of nowhere, with no planet underneath them.

“It seems the planet is trying to escape from this particular wormhole,â€

[Esoteric]

hehe, good. I don't really have any input right now, but I'm wondering what happens next.

[TurkishMonky]

This chapter kind of was the climax (if there ever was a build up to begin with.) however, be warned: the next last chapter will have some strange twists in it