A worship song

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A worship song

Postby meboeck » Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:06 pm

I wrote this at my youth group's fall retreat this past weekend.

Pour

Verse 1:
I can feel Your presence Lord
I know You're in this place
But I feel so dry
Oh Lord I'm so dry
You have given me Your Spirit
You offered me life
So I will not deny
No I will not deny

Chorus:
I am ready
I am open
I am willing
Pour

Down into me, O Lord
Pour down into me

Verse 2:
I will come before You
I'll lay down my empty soul
Come and fill me now
Come and fill me now
I don't want to leave Your presence
I want more of You
Pour Your Spirit down
*insert poem, quote, or witty comment here*

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Postby Linksquest » Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:49 pm

So awsome,
It would be cool if we could sing that in Zone some day!
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Postby Kaori » Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:54 pm

Did you compose music for this song also, or just the words? The lyrics do look very appropriate for a worship song; they seem as if they would be fairly memorable, which has its advantages.
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Postby purplemoose » Sat Oct 22, 2005 7:48 am

Yay ^.^ it good write a guitar and BASS (i love bass) part for it ^.^
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Postby creed4 » Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:11 pm

Nice, Keep it up
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