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Postby LostChild » Thu Sep 01, 2005 11:17 am

[quote="SorasOathkeeper"]Blade walked out of Spike’s room. He rubbed the back of his neck and looked over at the side of the ship. Xzander was standing there looking over the side into the water. Blade walked up next to him and leaned on the side.

“Hey little buddy what’s up?â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu Sep 01, 2005 8:15 pm

LostChild wrote:Ya, you were a mercanairy to kill her. hehe ^ ^'

...If that was so Spike wouldn;t let Blade live...<.<

Brandon stretched from his spot in the deck now that his sunburn was gone he could acutely lay on his back. He lazily laid down socking in the sun.
“Hey you lazy bum, get you butt off my deck and follow me!â€
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Postby LostChild » Thu Sep 01, 2005 9:33 pm

[quote="SorasOathkeeper"]...If that was so Spike wouldn]a[/B]king in the sun.

“Hey you lazy bum, get your butt off my deck and follow me!â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Sep 05, 2005 1:23 pm

Yeah I havn't updated this for a while....I havn't been in the wrighting mood *except for RP's* I finally wrote a littloe more today.


After Brandon found out where to start *from the very beginning* He spent four days counting and marking down everything they had. Apparently they hadn’t counted there treasure for a long while. HE wrote the last couple of coins down in the book. He smiled at the book. He put it down and stretched.

“Now for some food!â€
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Postby Photosoph » Mon Sep 05, 2005 1:34 pm

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After Brandon found out where to start *from the very beginning* << :grin: >>He spent four days counting and marking down everything they had. Apparently they hadn’t counted their treasure for a long while. He wrote the last couple of coins down in the book, and smiled at it. He put it down and stretched.

“Now for some food!â€
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Postby LostChild » Mon Sep 05, 2005 4:20 pm

ooo... kreepie.
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat Sep 10, 2005 10:36 am

FINALLY somemore!!! I've been trying to think up a post for an RP for two and a half days and I finally got some of it done yesterday *note only some* Had to use good olf fashion pen *pencle* and paper! (sigh) But it's fun so yeah.

Later the crew sat at the dinner table, whale everyone was either talking or eating Brandon just sat there looking at his plate.

“How’s Spira?â€
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Postby LostChild » Sun Sep 11, 2005 4:02 am

[quote="SorasOathkeeper"]FINALLY somemore!!! I've been trying to think up a post for an RP for two and a half days and I finally got some of it done yesterday *note only some* Had to use good olf fashion pen *pencle* and paper! (sigh) But it's fun so yeah. :lol: oh you poor thing. welcome to the real world!

Later the crew sat at the dinner table, while everyone was either talking or eating Brandon just sat there looking at his plate.

“How’s Spira?â€
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Postby Photosoph » Sun Sep 11, 2005 9:35 pm

Whoot! S'more! :jump: Sorry, haven't been on for the last two days. ^_^"
*Is so happy Sora has written more!*
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Sep 12, 2005 1:42 pm

Random facts about the story that no one cares to hear but I'll tell them anyways. part 1


1. The first character of the crew ever to be created was Teressa.

2. Tori, Teressa and Spike started out as one person. originally her name was Teressa, the it went to Tori Teressa (last name that I don’t know* and her nick name was Spike. Then it finally split into three different people.

3. ConfusedChaos *the original creator of the crew* got the names Tori and Teressa from Barbe dolls.

4. There was originally lots more characters to the crew, including Tornado and Twister *twins* Billy, Electra, Mist and Leon. There were lots more too but I didn’t want to draw them all.

5. All the characters started off as 'magic girl' type characters. *before we knew what anime was* Each of them had a power, Spike could create spikes anywhere and shoot them out and what not. Teressa could make fire, Tori lightning, Blade had blades that popped out of his arms, Willow ...*forgot her power* Xzander could create darkness...ect...

6. Nidrith was originally a different thing in a different story of mine. It was a symbol that someone had that made them special, and powerful.

7. Spike and the crew at first had NOTHING to do with pirates.
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Postby LostChild » Mon Sep 12, 2005 8:27 pm

ROFL!!! that's sooo great. I remember a few of those, but the last few I knew nothing about! When this gets published, it'll go in the back index, right? Will we be getting more of these?
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Sep 12, 2005 10:25 pm

Um...most likly as the story goes I will post more.^^ I wrote a lot more of the story. Heres a little more.

“Do you know the name Blade?â€
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:01 pm

[quote]“Do you know the name Blade?â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:23 pm

Photosoph wrote:ConfusedChaos? Is that another username of yours?

ConfusedChaos is my neabore and has been my best friend since we were three. She created Spike and the others whin I had my own character Sambrue. She gave me the right to her characters.


~*~

Blade walked up in deck, he stuck his hands in his pocked and breathed out. He watched his breath. He sighed.

“Spira….What happened to you….â€
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:42 pm

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Blade walked up in deck, he stuck his hands in his pocked and breathed out. He watched his breath. He sighed.

“Spira….What happened to you….â€
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Postby LostChild » Tue Sep 13, 2005 11:55 pm

^ ^ coolishness. looks like photo has taken care of everything. *yawns* i've had like, three coffees today, but nothing's working! i hate, no, i loathe school...
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Postby Photosoph » Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:03 pm

Oh man. -__-" At least it ends. Yes, that day of FREEDOM! will finally come. ^_^ Whoo! (And I'm so close to it, too!!)
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Postby LostChild » Wed Sep 14, 2005 9:08 pm

... well when that day does come, college starts. then i'll end up getting a job... life bites.
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu Sep 15, 2005 10:50 pm

Ok, I kinda through this together, so there might be stuff that dosen't make since, if there is tell me and I'll fix it^^


“What’s a Nidrith?â€
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Postby LostChild » Sat Sep 17, 2005 9:08 am

[quote="SorasOathkeeper"]Ok, I kinda through this together, so there might be stuff that dosen't make since, if there is tell me and I'll fix it^^


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Postby Photosoph » Sat Sep 17, 2005 11:35 pm

LostChild wrote:... well when that day does come, college starts. then i'll end up getting a job... life bites.

Ah yes, College.... strangely enough, I'm already in College. <.< >.> But in NZ, College is what we call high school, and we just call College University.

[quote="Lost's edit of Sora's story"]“What’s a Nidrith?â€
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Postby LostChild » Sun Sep 18, 2005 9:44 pm

^^^ yeah, that.
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu Sep 22, 2005 11:39 pm

I LIVE!!!! Sorry I havn't updated this for a while. I just didn't really know where to goo from there till it hit me tonight!^^



After several days passed and nothing happened Brandon didn’t think anything would come. They docked the ship at one of the largest islands.

[I]“Docking it there will make it harder for them to find us.â€
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Postby Photosoph » Fri Sep 23, 2005 3:12 pm

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After several days passed and nothing happened Brandon didn’t think anything would come. They docked the ship at one of the largest islands.

“Docking it there will make it harder for them to find us.â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Sep 23, 2005 6:52 pm

Two figures stood on a roof, gazing down on the unsuspecting crew. To the naked eye they looked like statues up there. The first had a black cloak on, the hood covering the face, the other a dark grey cloak. They stood side-by-side.

“Looks like Spike is back.â€
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Postby Photosoph » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:22 pm

[quote]Two figures stood on a roof, gazing down on the unsuspecting crew. To the naked eye they looked like statues up there. The first had a black cloak on, the hood covering [b]his[/b face, the other a dark grey cloak. They stood side-by-side.

“Looks like Spike is back.â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:28 pm

Muwahahahaha....mystery....*.*



“I don’t care what that old innkeeper says, it’s GOING to rain!â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:50 pm

Small post, oh well.

Spike ran down the town streets, following the two cloaked figures that were jumping roof to roof. She had lost her crew a while back. She ran into an alley way watching the two when they suddenly disappeared. She ran down till she came to a clearing that was a dead end.
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Postby LostChild » Mon Sep 26, 2005 3:09 pm

mucho bueno, mi vida, mucho bueno! ^ ^ asi... me encanta, pero no me gusta es un pequeno 'post.' me gusta mucha mas largo 'post'! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!

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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Sep 26, 2005 3:12 pm

Please don't speek in Spanish here, you know I can't understand it.
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