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Postby Kawaiikneko » Tue Sep 06, 2005 4:16 pm

Me: VILAMAR!!! *flyingtackleglomps*
Vilimar: =_= Please get off me *grrr*
Me: Do you want to lose your arm again? <3

XDD (this has absolutely nothing to do with linda's story btw...) Love the new part I haven't read yet. *excitement*
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Postby insanewitapen » Tue Sep 06, 2005 4:22 pm

Kawaiikneko wrote:Me: VILAMAR!!! *flyingtackleglomps*
Vilimar: =_= Please get off me *grrr*
Me: Do you want to lose your arm again? <3

XDD (this has absolutely nothing to do with linda's story btw...) Love the new part I haven't read yet. *excitement*


>XD ahh the memories..the chats...*cackle* *types*
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Postby insanewitapen » Tue Sep 13, 2005 4:20 pm

GOMEN GOMEEEEENN~! T_T my computer died...and that just kinda killed my typing mood...I dont know when I'll start again...but I will keep going! @_@/ http://insanitywithapencil.deviantart.com/ my journal will explain everything about my dead computer @_@;
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Sep 13, 2005 6:54 pm

Gah! Windows ate my message! T_T

Man, I hope your computer gets fixed soon; it's so annoying to have a crashed computer. Our computer usually has a yearly expirey date... at the end of which it either gets a virus/crashes/gets too old, and is either modified, reformated, or sold.
It's cool to see some of your pics too. ^_^ Yes, another artist/writer! *Grin.* It must be cool to be able to illustrate your novels. ^_^ Or the characters from them. I know I saw the pic you did of the city, but I didn't realise you could draw people so well.
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Postby insanewitapen » Thu Sep 15, 2005 3:21 pm

[quote="Photosoph"]Gah! Windows ate my message! T_T

Man, I hope your computer gets fixed soon]

@_@....thats alot of comps to go through X3 and thankyou~ Yeah I've only recently started illustrating rooms and cities for my story...*has one now she wants to scan..but yeah* I luv drawing ^-^/
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Postby Photosoph » Sat Sep 17, 2005 11:18 pm

Yes! Another drawer! It'll be cool if you get to scan it in. ^_^
All the best with your story related writing/drawing!
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Postby insanewitapen » Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:35 am

I hath typed!!! >o</ XD I luv your new avatar photosoph

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Postby insanewitapen » Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:37 am

>o</


“Call it off,â€
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Postby insanewitapen » Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:38 am

O.o wow I think I typed too much

“Th-the idea crossed my mind many times because of your characteristics but,â€
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Postby insanewitapen » Thu Sep 22, 2005 5:39 am

I have more after this but thatw ould be a bit too much ^_~

Arys slammed the book shut and let her head fall onto the table. That’s just sick! She had put down the Legna book she was reading and started Nomeds: The Conquering, since she found herself curious about them after what had happened. That proved to be a big mistake for her mental health. Her mind could only handle so much of these kinds of books. The thought that the Nomeds that were after her were under the command of such a demon sent a cold tremble down her spine. She looked up from the table as she heard her name being called.

“Go get ready,â€
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Postby Photosoph » Thu Sep 22, 2005 11:17 pm

hath typed!!! >o</ XD I luv your new avatar photosoph

Yesh, thou hath typed! :jump:
Excellent; I've read all of the first post and, as usual, really enjoyed it. And as usual, I'll probably read a bit at a time rather than everything at once. You sure have posted a lot; well done! Things keep progressing along well; I especially liked the way you described the tension when they were hiding. It was cool how Kain, usually so hostile, showed another moment of empathy by gripping Arys's hand. ^_^
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Postby insanewitapen » Fri Sep 23, 2005 5:42 am

[quote="Photosoph"]Yesh, thou hath typed! :jump:
Excellent]

>X3 muwahaha yes, he cant completely hide the softy that he once was ^_~ I shall await for you to finish ^o^/
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Postby Photosoph » Fri Sep 23, 2005 6:20 pm

>X3 muwahaha yes, he cant completely hide the softy that he once was ^_~ I shall await for you to finish ^o^/

Hmm... 'softy that he once was'? Sounds like a clue to me. ^_^

Very cool! Yeah, I can understand that it's hard to write those sort of parts; especially when you realise the allegory and everything... if what I'm saying makes sense. o_O

As I said -very cool writing! you're still bringing the characters and plot through well, and I enjoyed this part too. ^_^ I's just like to point out one thing, though:
On the paper was a surprisingly clear picture of himself, followed by details about which section he may live on, the reward for turning in any information, and his danger level. So Alexander decided to put a bounty on his head. As he read further there was a long list of made up charges against him, except, of course, the ‘kidnapping of Miss Arys’. They would defiantly have to leave by tomorrow afternoon.

It's just that in the sentence 'a long list of made up charges against him, except, of course, the 'kidnapping of Miss Arys', when I first read it I though it meant that they had all his charges down except the one of kidnapping Arys. I think it's just the word order that confused me; I did understand it after I read a little further. It's not a huge thing, but I just thought I'd mention it.
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Postby insanewitapen » Fri Sep 23, 2005 6:58 pm

[quote="Photosoph"]Hmm... 'softy that he once was'? Sounds like a clue to me. ^_^

Very cool! Yeah, I can understand that it's hard to write those sort of parts]

yeah about the made up one. I allready fixed that. it is confusing. ^^
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Postby insanewitapen » Sat Sep 24, 2005 6:55 am

More~ X3

Arys adjusted the gun in her belt uneasily, she still felt awkward having it. Swallowing hard she pulled out the bladed staff Kain gave her and held it out in front of her. He grinned his approval and asked her to try to hit him.

“You want me to what?â€
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Postby insanewitapen » Sat Sep 24, 2005 6:59 am

Ban shot up from bed as he felt the floor below him rumble violently. A loud crash then filled his ears as he leapt out of bed. He glanced over at the digital clock on his dresser, which read 11:36. Ut?!! They’re still goin at it?! Grabbing a robe and slipping it over himself, Ban ran out of the room. They would wake up all of Toquor if this continued and besides, Kain shouldn’t be pushing her this hard. He ran to the back and flung open the door only to be hit by a large burst of night breeze. As his teeth chattered Ban wobbled over to the right wall. As soon as Ban pulled open the basement door he had to shield his eyes from a sudden burst of light.

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Arys’s eyes widened and she threw herself to the side. A screech left her throat as a bright blade of light slashed her leg. The process of learning to fight with out knowing magic was long over. It was now matter of dodging and staying alive until the teacher said class was over. Clumsily, she rolled head over heals onto the ground to dodge another attack. She didn’t even try to get up, she was deadbeat. Arys had tried to get him to stop many times already but the only answer given was ‘You said we’ll take a couple more hours’. His immaturity was sometimes mind boggling. I’m starting to doubt he was once the Captain of the Guard of an entire nation. Her body ached all over with burns, cuts, and bruises. It was a miracle she managed to stay conscious this long.

“I said stay alert!â€
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Postby insanewitapen » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:03 am

Temorth yawned as he walked along the sidewalk on the third level square for the second time. Nothing new was on the lips of the gossipers last night about the infamous search for Kain and Arys. Hopefully he would find something this morning that would be good news. From the corner of his eye he saw a nicely sized group of Nomed Officers chatting about something. Cautiously making his way over towards them he listened in.

“He’s calling the search off?!â€
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Postby insanewitapen » Sat Sep 24, 2005 7:07 am

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Postby Kawaiikneko » Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:58 pm

MWAHAHAHAHA!!! *glomps you-know-who* I'm so excited for the next part~
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Postby insanewitapen » Fri Sep 30, 2005 5:58 pm

>o</ yes tee XD *is typing away* ...photosoph where hath you gone?!! @.@;

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Postby Kawaiikneko » Sat Oct 01, 2005 2:37 pm

I'm just popping in here to say I LOVE LIZAK AND ALEXANDER!! *glomps them both and promptly gets killed*

well darnit... I'll get you for that!! *goes off to get my scythe*
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Postby insanewitapen » Sun Oct 16, 2005 1:35 pm

>XD *holds lizak and alex back from trying to kill you again*

I praying for your hand photosoph! come back soon so you can read ;3


Edit: waaah ma story ish dead XD photosoph come back~
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