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Otaku10 wrote:Awesome new poems faithfighter! I especially liked "Take it all away". It's a very touching poem, keep up the good work. ^_^
[SIZE="7"][color="MediumTurquoise"]Cobalt Figure 8[/color][/SIZE]UC Pseudonym wrote:For a while I wasn't sure how to answer this, and then I thought "What would Batman do?" Excuse me while I find a warehouse with a skylight...
martinloyola wrote:wowowowowow I just read one...then I read the next one....I just couldn't help myself I had to read em all!!! I especially like "Teach me" the line about the obvious is really cool
Very good, as I said before, glad I inspired you Faith. In th e first line of the 3rd stanza, it says "me eyes" did you mean to put that or did you mean "my eyes"?
AnimeHeretic wrote:very well done
martinloyola wrote:see, i think you hit a homerun with Teach Me, it speaks well, has anice organization and flow
I like teach me It is nice and I prayed that before.
[SIZE="7"][color="MediumTurquoise"]Cobalt Figure 8[/color][/SIZE]UC Pseudonym wrote:For a while I wasn't sure how to answer this, and then I thought "What would Batman do?" Excuse me while I find a warehouse with a skylight...
SnoringFrog wrote:All good poems faith, great job.
[SIZE="7"][color="MediumTurquoise"]Cobalt Figure 8[/color][/SIZE]UC Pseudonym wrote:For a while I wasn't sure how to answer this, and then I thought "What would Batman do?" Excuse me while I find a warehouse with a skylight...
SnoringFrog wrote:So short, but still so powerful. That's a great poem, Faith. As always, good job and keep up the good work!
faithfighter wrote:dream
Close me eyes
& to my surprise
My dreams are where I want to be
Simply cause you are there with me
If you don't tell me this is fake
Then I will be happy till I wake.
a peom I wrote for school so not one of my best...
creed4 wrote:I understand it seem to me that my work suffers as well when I'm forced to write and not exclaim my heart. I liked when as well Made me think of a passaged in 1 Peter "Cast your cares upon Him for he Cares for you." Good job Faith.
[SIZE="7"][color="MediumTurquoise"]Cobalt Figure 8[/color][/SIZE]UC Pseudonym wrote:For a while I wasn't sure how to answer this, and then I thought "What would Batman do?" Excuse me while I find a warehouse with a skylight...
Wow. Very, very good poem, faith. IMO, it's the best you;ve posted here.
So ture, so deep, you've shown quite a bit of understanding. Very good poem
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