XD thankyou and o.o;;; that was NOT on purpose XD (the repeated watch thing) o.o; I fix! ^o^/
Lol!dunn dunnnnn DUNNNNN *coughcough* ^_^;
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Photosoph wrote:Whoot! I've managed to read more. Very exciting... and again, the story is progressing well. The only other thing I'd comment on is that Arys (I'm guessing it's her, anyway....) suddenly driving a forklift to Kain's aid seems a little out of place, unless you put a few more details in. Other than that, though, it was cool. And like the other tips, they're just little things to go back and look over later. ^_^
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Kawaiikneko wrote:*poke* Get on aim... its a weekend...
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
Arys was too tired to argue. Resentfully she walked over and picked up her staff. This next hour was going to seem like a decade.
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
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