Postby heero yuy 95 » Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:17 pm
Hey, carneman! I see that you are online. Since you told me that you are interseted in Ghost in the Shell, you could make it a cyberpunk story. Maybe you can have a hot female android chick, with an arm that turns into a machine gun! It's a bit cliched, but still cool. how about this, your story features (insert name), a teenager struggling through high school, and he's about to work up the courage to tell the girl that he likes his secret feelings for her, But just then, some heavy industrie company, which provides weapons and such for the local military, produces two combat androids, a male and a female variation. But through some twist of fate, the female variation ends up in the main character's hands( you'll have to come up with why and how on your own, or else I'd just be writing a story for you) This female android seems to have the capability to think independantly, and even more importantly,holds information on the company's dastardly scheme! The company, soon realizing this, sends out to kill the hero, but this guy also happens to be pretty handy with a submachine gun, and the android has his back. So eventually the company rolls out the heavy artillery in a variety of futuristic tanks and the other android(the male one, be sure to make him awesome-cool!). Somehow have the high-school girl(one the hero likes) helping him somehow. ugghhh... yeah, that's all I can come up with. As for names, your on your own, but i think rito and Lauren are fine names, IMO you should just keep them.
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