Robowars.....CONTINUED!!!!!!

[heero yuy 95]

May 23, 2075, saw the end of the long, drawn-out war between the U.S.F. and the Legion Empire. After having successfully driven all Legion forces from the Earth and defeating them in a final battle at Moon Colony L-7, the final stronghold of the Legion Empire, the U.S.F. has returned peace to Earth and space. Two months have passed since the war. At a house in the suburban Granite City, JC, a former mercenary and hero of the war, sleeps peacefully in bed and dreams. "OH NO!!! Giant Robots are attacking the city!", cried a horrified citizen. The city was indeed in great peril as a hulking and immmense metal figure stood raining destruction and chaos on the city at its feet. The booming of its massive machine gun and particle beam cannons struck terror into the hearts of the people of Granite City as buildings crumbled and were reduced to heaps of rubble. A formation of jet fighters dispatched by the military to counterattack were reduced to scrap metal in the blink of an eye. Suddenly, a lone figure perched atop a building screamed at the great towering robot. "Stop right now!" he commanded and his voice showed no fear. Just then another towering figure rose from the rubble just behind this lone person. It was Super Gunmech Z, the most powerful combat robot ever assembled! The figure now stood on the shoulder of his towering mecha. "Super Gunmech Z, attack!" Just then JC heard a voice, it was his alarm clock telling him to get out of bed. "Wake up, bum! You're gonna' be late for work!" JC realized that what his alarm clock told him was all too true. "Oh'm'gosh! I AM gonna' be late". JC scrambled out of his bed and quickly changed out of his pajamas and into his working clothes. "To the El Camino!" he cried as he hopped into his 1976 Chevy El Camino. He then drove off to work. Little did he know, trouble loomed off in the distance.
End of part one.

This is based off of a manga I am working on at home. It is part space opera and part 1970s' mecha spoof. Sort of like action/comedy. Tell me what you think and be honest. Please tell me what you liked and disliked and whether or not you think I should continue putting "Robowars" submissions into the writing section. All of your opinions are greatly appreciated. Thanks.

[heero yuy 95]

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