poem for Trigun

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poem for Trigun

Postby churchgirl111 » Sun Nov 09, 2003 1:41 pm

This is a poem about Vash, Knives and Rem...regarding them as young.....

Metal Panic

What's that?
The sound of weeping
Their silent cries
Never to be heard outside space
A neverending vacumn

Knives
It fits to be his name
Such hatred buried within that murderous weapon
Why does he do it?
Why must he be filled with such hatred?
Why?

I hear it even now
His maniac laughter
As blood poured free from his hands
He became drunk with it's poison

Of course, I saw her as well
The only one who saw love for us
Who even loved the murderous weapon
Rem
Her voice always penetrating my memories
WIth song i shall remember
It is to her memory i have pledged
And with these bullets i shall not become like him
like knives


Hope you like it :)
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Postby Haibane Shadsie » Sun Nov 09, 2003 7:09 pm

Mmmmm. Pretty. :grin:
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Postby Razgriz » Sun Nov 09, 2003 7:40 pm

It's good. :thumb:
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Postby senjutsu » Sun Nov 09, 2003 8:03 pm

dark indeed. very interesting churchychick. A+.
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