Rurouni Kenshin poem if he had recieved Christ

Postby **churchgirl111** » Sun Oct 26, 2003 7:51 pm

this poem is Kenshin if he had recieved Christ...clearly shown in last stanza

Days past

Scar
everlasting reminder of days past
where the world was shrouded in blood
where it flowed down every street corner
every home

crimson red scar
a permanent mark
horror filled, without mercy
dawned a sword with ambition
exited a sword, dipped in red
hopes of peace
dubbed with destruction
Can there be reconciliation?

With this sword i pledge
Innocence shall no longer be the victim
by this scar i pledge
that no blood shall be spilt from my hands
It was already spilt enough on a cross
where one man bled enough to cover us all

Postby **Locke** » Tue Oct 28, 2003 5:44 pm

that i must say is a buetiful poem about the wandering samories past

i must aplaud u child! jolly good job!

Postby **churchgirl111** » Tue Oct 28, 2003 6:59 pm

Domo Arigato

Appreciate it...keep an eye out for more...

Postby **Saint** » Tue Oct 28, 2003 8:13 pm

That is nice... and i tell you Kenshin would have had a much better life if he did accept Christ. Samurai X: Reflections is just too sad... poor Kenny just couldn't do it on his own.

Postby **Azier the Swordsman** » Mon Nov 03, 2003 8:09 am

Yeah, I've always wondered what the show would be like if he had recieved Christ. No matter how many people he protects to make up for his past, on Jesus can truly wash away sins.

Postby **Iapetus** » Mon Nov 03, 2003 9:16 pm

*cries* That was awesome! Short but sweet... I always felt terrible for Kenshin and how he carried his guilt everywhere.

Never thought of writing fanfiction poetry about a character accepting Christ before. I've written fanfiction poetry, as well as a poem of my own conversion, but never thought to do both at once (well, not mine but theirs)...

-Iapetus

Postby **churchgirl111** » Sun Nov 09, 2003 11:47 am

Thanks everyone!!!

Postby **Yeshua-Knight** » Thu Jan 13, 2005 9:01 pm

hope ya don't mind, i'm gonna take your poem and put it on a good kenshin pic i have and post it in here

Postby **girlninja** » Fri Jan 14, 2005 10:15 am

^^ /bow i'm flattered Yeshua ^^ oh just so ya know ^^ Churchgirl111=girlninja i had to change my sn for 2 reasons lol my comp crashed and i can't remember my previous password and no longer have access to it LOL so yea >< but really i'm flattered /bow domo ^^

Postby **jazz** » Fri Jan 14, 2005 10:22 am

oh wow, that is so beautiful. thank you for sharing it!

Postby **Yeshua-Knight** » Fri Jan 14, 2005 10:05 pm

here ya go folks, enjoy,

Postby **jazz** » Sat Jan 15, 2005 1:16 pm

wow, that looks so awesome! the writing and the picture go so well together. . . . such a beautiful poem... sigh.

Rurouni Kenshin poem if he had recieved Christ

Rurouni Kenshin poem

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