I could add it in if you feel like it has to be there.
true_noir_chloe wrote:I have to ask, because I was confused, who was whipping Cree at the beginning of this installment? Was it her aunt? I couldn't find where it was mentioned.
Kawaiikneko wrote:I try to ignore him, but… it gets so hard to push aside his mocking and teasing.
Kawaiikneko wrote:She toppled onto her sleeping mat, wasting no energy on retrieving the pillow roll from behind her changing screen. Her grimy hand groped lazily under the mat for the hole that held her precious book
Kawaiikneko wrote:Taryn story, silly! You were the one that gave me opinions on the name change remember =P And as I read back through the beginning of that one I can see MAJOR editting is needed >.<
*coughworkonyourfirststorytoocough*
Kawaiikneko wrote: To me it doesn't sound like a quote in quote "Christian" word. I don't really know any synonyms for it (that I can think of at the moment).
Kawaiikneko wrote:I agree with you about the word sustained tnc... but comfort! that's a good word too.
Kawaiikneko wrote:Colorful fringed cloths draped along the tables topped with vases filled with exotic flowers gave the room splashes of color.
Kawaiikneko wrote:…cascading flowers tumbling down around the legs.
Kawaiikneko wrote:Cree found her back tensed against the soft chair and her hands gripping the armrests as if death were running its fingers along her spine.
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