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Postby LostChild » Tue Mar 22, 2005 6:15 pm

Chapter 4: Visions

Terrified of what had just happened, Kaylin walked back to join the others in the feast, in a dreamish wander. Draqon was the first to greet her; he had sensed something happened, and it bothered him. Draqon caught Albekcc’s attention, and motioned him to look toward Kaylin.

Upon seeing Kaylin in a daze, Albekcc Gillias to fetch water, and Draqon to see the visitors to the door, then he rushed to his daughter’s aid. Kaylin found a chair and sat, while her father checked for open wounds, and bruises. Suddenly Kaylin started to cry. Albekcc thought the tears were for Mariee, and he did his best to soothe Kaylin.

“Why did she do that?â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Tue Mar 22, 2005 6:28 pm

Lol, my bro was at your house with your bro when your Dad got a call from you*in think* So thats how he knew.
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Postby LostChild » Tue Mar 22, 2005 7:19 pm

oh. this is news to me. *yells at brian*
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Mar 22, 2005 8:59 pm

we saw broken pottery all over the floor, and weeds growing from out of holes in the wall. the sort of stuff that is there just to be there, and no one ever sees it. sort of like all the extra scenes, and characters from the LOTR movies, huh? we figured they put it all there to entertain people when they get stuck on the ride. just to make us wonder why they put it there...


Lol! Mind games. :grin:

Yay! More story. :dance: And things are just getting more interesting... @_@ ^_^
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Wed Mar 23, 2005 1:13 am

Chapter 4: Visions

Terrified of what had just happened, Kaylin wandered back in a dreamish state to join the others in the feast,. Draqon was the first to greet her; he had sensed something different, and it bothered him. Draqon caught Albekcc’s attention, and motioned him to look toward Kaylin.

Upon seeing Kaylin in a daze, Albekcc Gillias(?) to fetch water, and Draqon to see the visitors to the door, then he rushed to his daughter’s aid. Kaylin found a chair and sat, while her father checked for open wounds, and bruises. Suddenly Kaylin began to cry. Albekcc thought the tears were for Mariee, and he did his best to soothe Kaylin.

“Why did she do that?â€
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Postby LostChild » Wed Mar 23, 2005 6:55 am

oops! "Albekcc asked Gillias to fetch water." ^_^ that's embarassing!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu Mar 24, 2005 3:12 pm

lol, Your doing great!^ ^ Keep it up and POST SOME MORE!^ ^
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Postby LostChild » Thu Mar 24, 2005 4:09 pm

ya, okay. my only problem with posting more is that you'll be reading it as i write it. which cause great stress on me, and that is totally the last thing i need right now... its spring break, and i have a ton of homework. but i'm sure i'll write a bunch when i'm gone next week. then i'll post more. ^_^

besides, its a lot more fun playing tag, and having ya'll anticipate the next segment. hehehe. i'm so evil, aren't i?
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Postby Photosoph » Fri Mar 25, 2005 12:32 pm

LostChild wrote:ya, okay. my only problem with posting more is that you'll be reading it as i write it. which cause great stress on me, and that is totally the last thing i need right now... its spring break, and i have a ton of homework. but i'm sure i'll write a bunch when i'm gone next week. then i'll post more. ^_^

besides, its a lot more fun playing tag, and having ya'll anticipate the next segment. hehehe. i'm so evil, aren't i?


Yup, that's true]( *___* )<<<(^_^)
ur it! *runs and hides* *searches frantically for a place to hide* *sees Kaylin's flet* *runs up the slender ivory steps to the top of the flet* * stops and hides under a table*[/QUOTE]

So... SORA IS IT!

Psoph stares at Sora with wild eyes. She backs away slowly, fearfully, before turning suddenly and fleeing for all she is worth. Unfortunately, she has forgotten about the TFR.... aghast at her lapse of memory, she stops and looks back.
"NOOO!!! TFR!" the desperate call erupts from her throat. She throws herself back at the TFR, grabs it, and then begins to cuddle it. After a second, she looks up and remembers that Sora is it. She jumps to her feet and zooms off, cackling wildly about talking flowers and still life robots. Finally she finds herself back in Lost's bedroom, and dives underneath for shelter.
It's dark. It's lonely. It's cold. And there appears to be an old sandwich nearby. It is so old, in fact, that it has its own sarcophogas (how on earth do you spell that? Can't be bothered getting a dictionary ^^ ) centred in the middle of a pyramid built out of dust bunnies by a forgotten tribe of sandwich people.
Psoph looks around wildly. The darkness under the bed seems bigger than the size of the bed itself. How is that possible?!
Shivering, Psoph curls up into the fetal position and begins to rock back and forth.
(Lost, you don't have monsters under your bed, do you? *whimper* ...They're all in your closet, right? Right?!)
In the middle of her rocking, the button on the TFR is accidentally pressed.
'Do, do-do-do, do de, dee, do;' the music drifts from underneath the bed into the rest of the room and far beyond.

Note on the sandwich people:
The higher class sandwich are the small, dainty club sandwiches. The sandwich king in the pyramid, however, ascended to the throne after a turmoil caused by an 'accidental' ketchup spill (the ketchup was a precious artifact they had brought with them when they fled from the kitchen and travelled for many days and months for the safety of the forgotten land, spoken of with great awe: 'Lost's bedroom'. The old king slowly turned soggy, and with his last dry bit of breath, left the throne to his adopted son, a common cheese sandwich. This cheese sandwich, the one entombed, drove his people into slavery. He hated the club sandwich higher class so greatly that they were forced to go into hiding to avoid 'the wrath of the swiss'. However, one club sandwich couple fled so quickly that they left behind their daughter, who the cheese king captured and forced to be his serving girl. But unbeknown to him, each day, along with his daily three course meal of carpet fluff, the serving girl would drop a drip of dewdrop (heh, couldn't help that ^__^) onto the corner of his crust. Soon a fungul growth developed that the antibiotic couldn't do anything about (especially considering it only works on backteria... I think). The cheese king was buried, and placed in the tomb which he had forced his people to build. -Extract from this thread's Dictionary of Randomness.
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 25, 2005 12:47 pm

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! I'M IT!!!!!! *__________* *pulls out Poking Stick of Doom* BWAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! ( *_*)>- *runs around room swinging Poking Stick of Doom around head* BWAHAHAHA!!!! *sees W4J* YES!!!! ( ^ ^)>-(0_0) Your it! XP


OOC:Sorry couldn't think of anithing to do. My brain is fried from fixing my friends and my story....@_@
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Postby Photosoph » Fri Mar 25, 2005 10:30 pm

POKEY STICK OF DOOM! Lol. I like your randomness, Sora; it includes pictures!!
I like the txt pics. Hmmm.... you have given me inspiration! Let's see how this turns out...
*gets poking stick*
( ^_^)>-
*grabs arrow head*
<O(-_-)>-
*fits arrow head to pokey stick*
( ^o^)>->
*waves it around happily*
(^___^)>->)))
*throws!*
( n_n)>___________->
( '_') _________________________________________->
( -_-) _______________________________________________________->
( '_')
*arrow-headed pokey stick has disappeared*
('_' )
( '_')
( '_' )
*shrugs*
^(-_-)^
*is suddenly hit by pokey stick*
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I hadn't seen this kind of guy ( this guy: (^_^), with any expression) before I came to CAA.
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Fri Mar 25, 2005 10:39 pm

Um Photosoph you mentioned ketchup. Don't you call it the same as us Australians -sauce?

W4J hurls himself across the room to tackle Photosoph and steal one of Lost's dust bunnies, before retreating within the wardrobe nearby. And entering Narnia!
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 25, 2005 11:44 pm

Photosoph wrote:Psoph looks around wildly. The darkness under the bed seems bigger than the size of the bed itself. How is that possible?!
Shivering, Psoph curls up into the fetal position and begins to rock back and forth.
hehehe, you've never been in my room, and you know it exactly! muhahahahaha

Photosoph wrote:(Lost, you don't have monsters under your bed, do you? *whimper* ...They're all in your closet, right? Right?!)
if only you knew, if only you knew....

*runs about sora's room, looking for a stick. runs behind door and grabs the poking stick of DOOM!!! looks wyldly for someone to tag. looks at the collection of random movies scattered on desk. sees "Van Helsing," and jumps into it. runs about looking for mansal (aka: David Wenham, aka: Faramir, aka: in alliance with Aragorn, aka: Viggo Mortensen, aka: my heart-throb, aka: what does "aka"mean? the world may never know...). drops stick in awe of the actor.* you worked with Viggo!!!! *attacks. sits in awe of Wenham, one of the betterest actors in the universe! having neglected The Stick, sora cautiously stalks over, and snatches it.*

BWAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHA!!!!!!! I WIN!!!! you will all become subject to my ALL POWERFULL STICK *sound affects, like thunder and echos* or die!!! *sora sees Wenham* AHH!!! You know Pippin!!!!! *screams*

*Wenham* well, actually, i'm just a friar, so i can curse all i want; darn it! {hint, hint: quote from movie, aka: Van Helsing}

*(sora) beats the krapp out of Wenham with the POKING STICK OF DOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!* i know that you know pippin! tell! tell! tell! i know that you know that i know that you know pippin! GIVE IN THE TO DARK SIDE *air pumps sound affects* *sora puts on dark mask and cape* David, *ksha-ksha* I am you mother.

*david* what are you talking abut? i've never seen you before in my life!!!

*sora* i know that, i just had to say it! XD

*lost sneaks up behind sora, and snags Stick 'o Doom. stalks off quietly, and jumps out of the movie, leaving sora gaping in Wenham's presence. finds another movie to go jump in, after having tagged W4J, and adding a few things to her "Silver Wings" story, which, ya'll won't read until later. ^_^*
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat Mar 26, 2005 12:12 am

*looks at the ground where Stick 'o Doom *Aka Poking stick of Doom, aka: PSoD aka: who the heck cares* (stares at the ground blankly)

( '_')
('_' )
( '_' )
(T_T)

*Sora falls to her knees* MY STICK!!!! MY POOR, POOR DEATH STICK!!! WHERE O WHERE HAVE YOU GONE??? *Starts to sing the famious song "Where o where has my poking stick gone?" to the tune of "Jingle bells(don't ask....) Sora after singing sevral chous she stands up and yells" I WILL FIND YOU MY POKING STICK OF DOOM!!!!!!
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Postby Photosoph » Sat Mar 26, 2005 1:19 pm

Um Photosoph you mentioned ketchup. Don't you call it the same as us Australians -sauce?


Yup; we call it tomato sauce, or sauce. And the commonest example is the excellent Wattie's tomato sauce. Do you get that brand in Australia or is it just a NZ thing?
I've just watched too many American shows, so sometimes I call it ketchup. ^_^ Only really while writing, though; out loud I call it tomato sauce, especially if I'm asking Dad. But he goes to LA quite a lot with his job, so he'd know what I'm talking about.
And there are a lot of Americans on CAA. *points at Sora and Lost* If I called ketchup tomato sauce... would you guys think I was talking about tomato puree? Dunno. *shrugs*
*Takes out wattie's tomato sauce, flips the lid, sticks in mouth, and guzzles*. Funnily enough I had tomato sauce on my steak last night... and the potato chips. Those chips were more like wedges though.
For a long time I thought 'catsup' and 'ketchup' were two different types of sauces. But 'catsup' is just one way of pronouncing 'ketchup', right?

*Follows W4J into Narnia. On the way through the forest she tries to snags one of the coats and puts it on... unfortunately as she walks further it turns into a tree and Psoph ends up hanging by her collar on the top of a pine tree, kicking her legs in a futile effort to free herself* :?:
"Ooo... I can see you from up here!" :wow!: "And there's Mr. Tumnis... and the beavers!"


Wait a minute *checks date* It's the 27th! *throws party*
Which means... not only is it Easter... but it is also my birthday! :grin: :grin: :grin:
Seriously though; go and check my bio, if my bday's up there. Today I am 17!! ...Although I may have to wait a little longer to be 17 in America :lol:
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat Mar 26, 2005 6:21 pm

WHU-WHO!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! XD *Givs birthday pokes* ( ^ ^)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(O_O) THERE 17! AND ONE FOR GOOD LUCK!!
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Postby LostChild » Sat Mar 26, 2005 7:03 pm

SCORE!!! happie birthday!!! or, feliz cumpleanos! either way, congrats.

AHHHH!!!! Mr. Tumnis!!! i'm soooo extatic right now!!! he was my fav! i think i read those, like, a million times!!!
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Postby Photosoph » Sat Mar 26, 2005 8:12 pm

Thank you everybody! I hope you all have a happy Easter!
*rubs arm from birthday poke* ^__^ *gives everyone an Easter poke back*
(>_o)>>>>(O_O) (o_O) (0_0)

I loved those novels too. The first time, and probably the second time I read The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, I was so sad when Mr Tumnis was turned to stone. T_T He was so kind, and then he was so evil, and then he was so kind, and then he was so sad, and then he was so happy! :grin:
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Postby LostChild » Sat Mar 26, 2005 9:13 pm

i was always sad when Aslan died, and then, realizing my dream of reading a book were the main character/ hero dies, i was always like, "YES!" but then, i would feel really bad... the first time i read LOTR, i was like "SCORE!" when frodo "died" in Shelob's Lair. not that it was a good thing he died, but because i've always wanted the main good dude to die. i dunno why...

i think... *ponders thought* i think i'll kill Kaylin right before she gets her dragon. ^_^ speaking of which, did it seem like this whole book would be about Kaylin finding her dragon? i was sort of rethinking that this weekend, and i thought that it would end up being her searching for something, or going on some sort of quest after she finds a dragon. i tend to go off on tangents, and not get back to the main idea, so i was just wondering if that would seem relavent....
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Postby Photosoph » Sat Mar 26, 2005 11:11 pm

i think... *ponders thought* i think i'll kill Kaylin right before she gets her dragon. ^_^ speaking of which, did it seem like this whole book would be about Kaylin finding her dragon? i was sort of rethinking that this weekend, and i thought that it would end up being her searching for something, or going on some sort of quest after she finds a dragon. i tend to go off on tangents, and not get back to the main idea, so i was just wondering if that would seem relavent....


It sorta does seem like a big part of the book. But if you go on to write more it wouldn't feel out of place; in fact it would be all right because you've already hinted on things about her mother, and that evil lady... so I'm sure it'll be all right.

Man, this is the weirdest thing: we were talking out the narnia books today, right? Well hours after that, in fact just this evening, guess what I got as a gift: 'The Chronicles of Narnia!' O_O
If I didn't already believe it, this is just more proof that coincidence does not exist. ^__^ Too many strange (and sometimes cool) things like this happen for coincidence to be so.
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Postby LostChild » Sun Mar 27, 2005 12:10 am

rofl! that's awesome! i wish i had the set. i "borrowed" it from laura once upon a time, but she took 'em back 'cause they were a gift to her. well, i tried. ^_^


Feeling betrayed, Kaylin now got up, and showed herself to her room, leaving Draqon and Gillias to wonder at what had just happened.

Kaylin closed her door tight behind her, and looked over the piles of things she was to take with her on the Journey. She was to leave with Limbar in two days, but now there was confusion as to what was going to happen. Lying on her bed, Kaylin reached for her mother’s frozen rose.

Suddenly a vision of an elf came to her. There were no certain features that stood out about the woman to make her recognizable, and yet she seemed familiar. She was running in a field, much to the same likeness as the field in her dreams. The same hilly structure, the same flowers upon the springy turf.

Then she had turned, and was confronted by a figure clad in dark robes. It seemed to consumed her, and then left her upon the grass.

Then as quickly as it had come, the vision vanished. Kaylin’s breath was coming in short, rapid gasps. What had just happened? Kaylin had heard of elves with extraordinary gifts, when most Elves did not. Did she have this gift? Was it part of the Coming of Age?

Suddenly, Kaylin became aware that she was asking these things out loud, but she could also hear another voice asking them at the same time. The voice was pleasant and friendly, distant yet familiar. She knew that she had heard the voice before, but she did not know where from. It was a woman talking, and as she talked, another woman answered her.

The latter had a strong voice, she was well spoken, and Kaylin could tell she was older by the wisdom the chiseled the personality of her voice.

The elder woman answered the formers questions, and said that it was a gift. The gift was to see things that your heart greatly desires, but only comes after your Coming of Age, or just before the Journey begins.

So it is a gift! Kaylin told herself, and she became excited, and wanted to tell Limbar, Albekcc, and the Dragons. Then she remembered Limbar’s reactions to seeing her earlier that afternoon, and then her father’s reaction to hearing what Limbar said to Kaylin.

“Maybe I should keep this secret,â€
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Feeling betrayed, Kaylin now got up, and showed herself to her room, leaving Draqon and Gillias to wonder at what had just happened.

Closing the door tight behind her Kaylin looked over the piles of things she was to take with her on the Journey. She was to leave with Limbar in two days, but now there was confusion as to what was happening. Lying on her bed, Kaylin reached for her mother’s frozen rose.

Suddenly a vision of an elf came to her. There were no certain features that stood out about the woman to make her recognizable, and yet she seemed familiar. She was running in a field, similar to the one in her dreams. The same hilly structure, the same flowers upon the springy turf.

Then she turned, and was confronted by a figure clad in dark robes. It seemed to consumed her, and then left her upon the grass.

Then as quickly as it had come, the vision vanished. Kaylin’s breath came in short, rapid gasps. What had just happened? Kaylin had heard of elves with extraordinary gifts, when most Elves did not. Did she have this gift? Was it part of the Coming of Age?

Suddenly, Kaylin became aware that she was asking these things out loud, but she could also hear another voice accompanying hers. The voice was pleasant and friendly, distant yet familiar. She knew that she had heard the voice before, but she did not know where from. It was a woman talking, and as she talked, another woman answered her.

The latter had a strong voice, she was well spoken, and Kaylin could tell she was older by the wisdom and the chiseled personality of her voice.

The elder woman answered the former's questions, and said that it was a gift. The gift was to see things that your heart greatly desires, but only comes after your Coming of Age, or just before the Journey begins.

So it is a gift! Kaylin told herself, and she became excited, and wanted to tell Limbar, Albekcc, and the Dragons. Then she remembered Limbar’s reactions to seeing her earlier that afternoon, and then her father’s reaction to hearing what Limbar said to Kaylin.

“Maybe I should keep this secret,â€
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Postby CreatureArt » Sun Mar 27, 2005 3:09 am

*pants* ----brain hurts.


It's late at night and I've read starting reading this thread. *prods the Photosoph*. I'm really enjoying it. However, I'm only up to page 5 and I see that there are...21... ... ... pages. *dies*. :lol: I'll try to catch up. I really like your story so far, Lost, and I look forward to keeping on reading it.

Oh, and Happy Birthday Psoph! *grins mischieviously - ask her to explain.
o(~_^)^

However, until then...

*Creature joins the game of tag in some confuzzlement*.
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*But grabs the pokey stick*
o(>_O)o--

*And pokes everyone*
----------------- o(>_O)o-- ))
(( --o(O_<)o ---------------

*Before laughing maniacally*
!!!!! O(@O@)O !!!!!

*Becoming confused again*
o(@_@;)O <(????)

*Runing away*
ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM --------------- <(O_o)>
--------------- <(O_o)>
----<(O_o)>
. o(#_#)"o .

*And collapsing in the grass*
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Postby LostChild » Sun Mar 27, 2005 1:25 pm

hehehe. its a fun game, ain't it creature? glad u could join us, and i'm really glad that there is another set of eyes critiqueing my work. ^_^

btw, everyone, HAPPY EASTER!!!!
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Postby Photosoph » Sun Mar 27, 2005 4:05 pm

Yay! CA joined the thread! ^_^
Explain? Well, W4J knows, but CA and I are twins, which means our birthdays fall on the same day! (There are some twins who, either because of a long labour or because of being born near midnight, have birthdays on different days).

Happy Easter! Don't eat too much chocolate. I did. That, + birthday cake, did not feel nice afterwards. Hmm... strange, I used to think there was a gag smiley. Oh well, I'll try it even though I can't see it on the clickable smilies list: :gag: .
I didn't eat too much but I did eat a lot.
Bonne Pacques! Happy Easter! (In French)

Pokity pokes Sarah, and waits for however is 'it' to start roaming around.

Oh, wait a minute...
i think... *ponders thought* i think i'll kill Kaylin right before she gets her dragon. ^_^


NOOOOOooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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W4J hurls himself across the room to tackle Photosoph and steal one of Lost's dust bunnies, before retreating within the wardrobe nearby. And entering Narnia!


Wait a minute... I'm it? Hmmm....
*stares around evilly from the top of the tree. Then, too bored to actually get down, go out of Narnia and find someone, she opens up a portal in the Narnia/CAA webspace and yanks a CA on a poking spree out.
"YOU'RE IT!" Psoph yells overly loudly. She then lets CA drop.
"Don't worry, there are plenty of talking birds around..." she starts to console the falling CAA member. "Oh wait..." unfixes herself from the tree top and begins to fall down, curling up into a ball to make herself go faster. Soon she catches up with CA. "Here you go!" she whips a party hat out, places it on CA's head, and pulls a party popper (not a party pooper, :lol: ). The resulting string flies upwards and entangles the only talking bird in the area, who had been on its way to rescue CA. Psoph is silent for a long moment.
Then, "Um... maybe Mr Tumnis will break your fall?" she suggests. Then she yawns, stretches, and grabs a nearby branch by its tip.
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD

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Postby Anna Mae » Sun Mar 27, 2005 4:17 pm

Happy birthday, Photosoph and CreatureArt. Also, happy Easter to everyone.

Good story, LostChild. I am slightly confused with what is going on with Limbar and/or the vision thing, but that is not necessarily a bad thing. Keep up the good work!
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]

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Postby LostChild » Sun Mar 27, 2005 7:05 pm

coolness. well, i must get back to homework, before too late. so i'll ttyl. ^_^ have a fun rest of the weekend!
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Postby CreatureArt » Sun Mar 27, 2005 10:35 pm

Thank you, everyone. *sings happy birthday to self even though it was yesterday :lol: *falls through the air with party hat*
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