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Postby zelda » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:00 pm

I love writing poetry! And I want people to see them! And I cant count on everyone coming to my site, so why not show them here!

Oh! you can show your poems here to if you want! :angel:

Here's a poem I wrote to start with: :eyeroll:


The Door

I Kept seeing this door. When ever I went to this Mysterious place the door
Disappeared. Why I do not know. Six times I tried to open the door, But each
time it kept fadding away. Finely the seventh time it opened!
There was Ice Cream the size of Mountains! There was a Christmas Tree
the size of a Skyscraper! There was dancing Cheetahs, and pigs the size of mice!
O so much to tell! There was Unicorns and Dragons, and all sorts of al things!
And When I woke up it was all a dream.
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Postby Magekind » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:04 pm

Uhh.... interesting poem... I guess...
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby zelda » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:06 pm

Uh, Thanks :bootout:
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Postby Magekind » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:12 pm

Sorry. I guess I'm just used to something with just a wee bit more depth. Carry on. One of these days, you'll write something that anybody can relate to. I'm sure there's a lot of people who find what you have written to be amusing, as you apparently do.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby zelda » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:22 pm

Thats ok! :hug:
I'm not really good at a lot of depth. :waah!:

Here's another one This one has no depth at all

A Friend

A freind is some one you can lean on. A friend is Trust worthy. A friend is loyal.
A Friend will never let you down.


It's more of a simple one
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Postby Magekind » Tue Mar 08, 2005 3:59 pm

Very good. That's getting much better. It may not have a lot of emotional spark, but it definitely sends out a message. Philosophical, one might say.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby zelda » Tue Mar 08, 2005 5:56 pm

Thanks! :hug: :hug: :hug:
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