Reeducation Chapel (Short Story)

[spiritusvult]

The pungent smell of Frankincense still hung in the air as Father Thomas came and stood behind the pulpit. Defused rays of red and purple light of the sun came in through the stained-glass window high on the back wall. With small sad eyes he looked out on the congregation. “I don’t think I need to title today’s sermon,â€

[spiritusvult]

In case it isn't clear, I would like some feedback. Please feel free to say whatever you think about this.

[spiritusvult]

Okay, for those who read this and don't particularlly care for the way I use Father Thomas as a character who's biased and needs improvement, let me say: I totally believe in the Church as it is before God. I think that often times people rage against the church, and that, of course, isn't my goal here. However, having traveled abroad, I can say that I've seen firsthand what happens when people who do not seek after the Lord gain control over the church.

That being said, it's important for us to realize that a priest or pastor is still a man and must always be willing to grow closer to the Lord. All of us, including those to whom God has entrusted to lead the Church stand before His throne by grace alone, through Jesus' blood. I think that should clear things up. If there are any questions or criticisms, please don't feel shy, it helps me learn how to more effectivily communicate the message of the Gospel, which is my ultimate end.

[SereneDolphin]

well, I liked it.

The moral of this story brings about a good point. In fact, back in the days, it was not unusual for the state to be in complete control over the church. Take a look at England-they had a whole civil war over corruption in the church!

[spiritusvult]

Thank you.