Psyco wrote:I was thinking of using the "yin yang" simbol as it represents the balance of good and evil.
Psyco wrote:The theme:
So origonally God created earth and heaven but hell was created by satin (who was an angel that wanted Gods power and tried to steal it and managed to get some).
Psyco wrote:Eventually satin tried to take over heven to controll everything. But God sent the archangle Michael to kill satin with the flaming sword of judgement. satin was not destroyed but was split up into 8 evil deamons which were imprisioned in earth. Hevel (the current name for the big planet with heaven and hell on it, needs a better name) turned into half good and half evil as satin has turned alot of angels to evil.
Psyco wrote:The story:
Now 2040, the 8 deamons that were origonally satin are going to escape and it is up to 5 people to stop them. These 5 people have powers that let them controll one of the 8 elements (fire, water, wind, electricity, ice, etc..). The 8 deamons are powerless untill they get to the elemential necklaces that let them turn into there deamon form. Though the 5 people get there powers form there dodrines (creature that holds the elemential charge and flots next to the person).
uc pseudonym wrote:There's really no way Satan could steal some of God's power. However, it'd be very easy for you to make him one of the most powerful beings in Heaven, which would give him a good reason to be powerful.
uc pseudonym wrote:You're going to run into trouble with Satan creating Hell. It strikes me that things work much better if God creates Hell in the first place for the sake of balance. That's biblical, anyway.
uc pseudonym wrote:But, apparently, it is good by the time the story starts? How exactly does that work? Or is there something I don't understand?
uc pseudonym wrote:Satan and flunkies are on Earth at the moment, causing problems. Hell really isn't run by them at all. Who exactly you want to have running it is your decision.
uc pseudonym wrote:Sounds like a plan. Have you thought about exactly where the dodrines come from?
uc pseudonym wrote:By the way, I have no actual artistic ability or anything to do with the actual creation of manga. When I offered help, I meant in regard to story and other such things.
uc pseudonym wrote:So what do you think?
The big plot error that I have found is that God is all powerful so he could just stop it, need to think of a reason for God not to get in the way.
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