Brainstorm 1

[_bluerose_]

Hey! I have a new writer's journal online and I kinda brainstorm and work on stories there. The link is here if you want to keep up or comment ^_^ I'd love good critiquing. You can also email me. Now I did some brainstorming on a new story:

There is a guy, kinda with Kenshin's personality. His name is Zha, he's a loner. He can kick butt too! because he was trained in fighting skills since he was little. He's african american, 25, a Christian and he lives in a small village. Zha has never lived or traveled far outside of the village. One day while he's away with his dad, Zha runs into an angel! This angel (Kiao) tells Zha many things that Zha just can't believe. They travel back and the angels first prediction is true - the village has been destroyed. So Zha immediately believes the rest. Half set against God for letting it happen, half knowing the truth and leans on God for help. For Zha has been told by the angel to set out to Indonesia.

On one of the islands, he is supposed to find a lady named Taman and her daughter Tamira, the one who can save them all. Tamira knows many things with her high intellect, but being overly rational, she immediately excludes God from her life. Taman induces this b/c there aren't many Christians where they live. The enemy takes advantage of this and leads them to help with the Great Destruction. Zha has been told to witness to them and get them born-again. But will Zha make it?! On his way to the Indonesian island he runs into some friends but many foes. Could Zha be in more danger than he can handle? ^^ (don't u love those ending suspense questions).

Ok that's my really rough draft of a plot for a new story. So what cha think? Should I add anything, cut, what? I think it's good myself.

[Razgriz]

Sounds interesting!