hey eveyone,
i don't know about everyone else but it's happened alot to me, i come up with some lines that sound like if they would be part of a poem but i can't think of the rest, well i wanted to post them anyways
serena
for those lines that almost make a poem.......
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serena - Posts: 48
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serena wrote:"it's these bitter tears that run down my face
that whisper the story of my sorrowful fate"
i don't know what do you guys think?
I like them. They could make a good poem if you could think of more to say.
I also find i can think of lines that would make a poem but cant think of enough. It can be frustrating at times.I wish i could think of more lines to help you but im out of ideas right now. For some reason i need to be in a certain mood to write poetry. Weird eh?
Absence is to love as wind is to a flame. It extinguishes the little, it ignites the great.
Life is a test. It is only a test. Had this been real life you would have have been instructed where to go and what to do.
When i argue with reality I lose.....But only 100% of the time.
Once you've decided on a course of action, only you can finish it. As long as you remember that, there's nothing you can't accomplish.
Life is a test. It is only a test. Had this been real life you would have have been instructed where to go and what to do.
When i argue with reality I lose.....But only 100% of the time.
Once you've decided on a course of action, only you can finish it. As long as you remember that, there's nothing you can't accomplish.
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Kura Ookami - Posts: 766
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definitely weird, but its good to know that i'm not the only one.
[color=Blue]tomorrow is a brand new day
if it doesn't kill you it'll make you stronger"[/color]
"When you come to the edge of all you know and are about to step into the unknown, faith is knowing that there will be something firm to step on or you will be taught how to fly"
"though i walk through the valley of the shadow of death i shall fear no evil for thou art with me" psalms 23
if it doesn't kill you it'll make you stronger"[/color]
"When you come to the edge of all you know and are about to step into the unknown, faith is knowing that there will be something firm to step on or you will be taught how to fly"
"though i walk through the valley of the shadow of death i shall fear no evil for thou art with me" psalms 23
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merrick - Posts: 29
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I like them.
When I feel blue, I start breathing again.
Asdvadz hedut ullah! (W. Armenian, "May God bless you!")
It's cosplay, get used to it.
"A hero need not speak. For when he is gone, the world will speak for him."
"One of the nice things about diseases of the brain is they tend to slip your mind." Colbert
Asdvadz hedut ullah! (W. Armenian, "May God bless you!")
It's cosplay, get used to it.
"A hero need not speak. For when he is gone, the world will speak for him."
"One of the nice things about diseases of the brain is they tend to slip your mind." Colbert
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Jaltus-bot - Posts: 1822
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today you left the world behind
and left me here to wonder why.
Why did you have to go,
and leave me here cold and alone?
I should be happy, that I know
you're in a better place now
were there's no suffering and no pain
and you're surrounded by God's love and grace,
but it's just one thing that makes me cry,
I never got to say goodbye.
i don't know guys, what do you all think?
and left me here to wonder why.
Why did you have to go,
and leave me here cold and alone?
I should be happy, that I know
you're in a better place now
were there's no suffering and no pain
and you're surrounded by God's love and grace,
but it's just one thing that makes me cry,
I never got to say goodbye.
i don't know guys, what do you all think?
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serena - Posts: 48
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Thats really pretty...and really sad, keep up the good work!.
My Website [online comic]
Do you find your self worried alot of the time about things that don't always make sense?
Are you experiencing any of these?
• Persistent feelings of sadness, irritability or anxiety
• Overreaction to irritations
• Loss of interest in activities previously enjoyed,
• Sleep too much, or sleep too little
• Unexpected loss or gain of weight
• Tiredness or restlessness
• Slowed movement, thought and/or speech
• Guilt, low self-esteem, feelings of worthlessness
• Inability to concentrate and poor memory
• Loss of motivation
• Feelings of hopelessness
• Suicidal thoughts and/or behavior
• Withdrawal from relationships, anti-social behavior
• Physical aches and pains that seem to have no other cause
If you have a few of the symptoms on this list, you may be suffering from a form of clinical depression there are many sites that offer advice and help.
Do you find your self worried alot of the time about things that don't always make sense?
Are you experiencing any of these?
• Persistent feelings of sadness, irritability or anxiety
• Overreaction to irritations
• Loss of interest in activities previously enjoyed,
• Sleep too much, or sleep too little
• Unexpected loss or gain of weight
• Tiredness or restlessness
• Slowed movement, thought and/or speech
• Guilt, low self-esteem, feelings of worthlessness
• Inability to concentrate and poor memory
• Loss of motivation
• Feelings of hopelessness
• Suicidal thoughts and/or behavior
• Withdrawal from relationships, anti-social behavior
• Physical aches and pains that seem to have no other cause
If you have a few of the symptoms on this list, you may be suffering from a form of clinical depression there are many sites that offer advice and help.
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mai - Posts: 432
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That's beautiful serena!
Exactly! If I sit down and try to write a poem, I often can't do it. I have to have the right inspiration.Kura Ookami wrote:I also find i can think of lines that would make a poem but cant think of enough. It can be frustrating at times.I wish i could think of more lines to help you but im out of ideas right now. For some reason i need to be in a certain mood to write poetry. Weird eh?
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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pieces of my autobiography
my life at 15
There's times in this so troubled world,
in which i doubt my own existence.
What I feel may not be real,
and what I see is naught but dreams.
The night is unbearably cold,
I fell depressed an all alone.
I've been forsaken by the world.
A blade, two cuts, the red blood flows,
it all goes dark as my eyes close.
The morning comes, I'm still alive,
I open my eyes to see the light.
the warmth surrounds me and I feel loved.
Happiness fills me for now I know,
that no matter what, i'm loved by the Lord.
this poem is about a time in my life that was really messed up, and i'm glad that i was able to overcome it and move on. i realized that to attempted suicide is just a call for help and i was so lost that i didn't realize that god was with me all along
"I am the Alpha and the Omega, the begining and the end, what was, what is, and what will be."
---the book of Revelations
"Wherefore, my beloved brethren, let every man be swift to hear, slow to speak, slow to wrath." -James 1:19
Translation: Listen much; speak little; stay cool.
borrowed from:Quiet Hood sig
Translation: Listen much; speak little; stay cool.
borrowed from:Quiet Hood sig
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serena - Posts: 48
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Serena, you got talent. I'm pleased to see that you are posting more stuff here. Keep up the good work. 
That's what I think.
That's what I think.When I feel blue, I start breathing again.
Asdvadz hedut ullah! (W. Armenian, "May God bless you!")
It's cosplay, get used to it.
"A hero need not speak. For when he is gone, the world will speak for him."
"One of the nice things about diseases of the brain is they tend to slip your mind." Colbert
Asdvadz hedut ullah! (W. Armenian, "May God bless you!")
It's cosplay, get used to it.
"A hero need not speak. For when he is gone, the world will speak for him."
"One of the nice things about diseases of the brain is they tend to slip your mind." Colbert
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Jaltus-bot - Posts: 1822
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I agree!
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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