poem: Summer Storm's Sunset

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poem: Summer Storm's Sunset

Postby Mithrandir » Mon Sep 08, 2003 3:14 pm

summer sunlight slowly fades
behind these clouds – so soft arrayed!

simple silver – storm’s sunset
a beauty, wonder. silhouette.

twilight’s tears, tickling, trickling down.

far flung feather’s, phoenix’ fires
hear the pluck of heaven’s lyres!

tease with breeze among the trees,
this lulling pull of heaven’s ease

ah sanctus! thunderous, wondrous rain.
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Postby Razgriz » Mon Sep 08, 2003 6:49 pm

Very cool, I like the rhyme.
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Postby EireWolf » Mon Sep 08, 2003 7:19 pm

It's beautiful!

ah, sanctus!

I love it.
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Postby Mithrandir » Thu Sep 18, 2003 4:29 am

Thanks all! I may have to post some more. When I get around to organizing it.
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