new manga: concept art

Postby **Shinja** » Mon Sep 13, 2004 1:27 pm

ZiP wrote:that's good, couple of things though,

1, that glove thing and his arm is cool, but could you make from wrist to where
it was, the whole arm length, makes it seem femalish.

2, he seems slightly adolecant (can't spell it) looking, try adding five o'clock shadow,

3, relating to number 2, something else about his face doesn't seem old enough,
maybe it's his eyes, or the shape of his face.

also, here's an idea for his gun, it should look something like a colt 45 pic below

hope that helped,
ZiP

sweet the colt 1907 good choice

though you might also like the colt long slide with full dust cover

Postby **KrescentMoon** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 3:15 pm

Eh...I'm drawing from time to time with a long interval between....More work -__-;; And you still didn't get to me on Nikki, ZiP.

Vampi~ <3 your Hisharo and <3 your Chip. They're both so good. <3 *shuts up now and buggers off to English*

Postby **Vampi** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 1:40 am

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:56 am

I didn't actually mean a character sheet, but it's very cool. Could I request that ZiP consider this as a possible final form for Chip?

Postby **Vampi** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:18 am

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:20 am

It's actually already been covered by the new drawing. Don't worry about it. If you really want to know (it's pretty inconsequential) PM me so that we don't clog up this thread too much.

Postby **KrescentMoon** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 12:32 pm

Yes, I agree with UC. Vampi's Chip is by far my favorite, and most practical (in most senses). Fashionable clothes, unique, he doesn't look that much of a geek (but hedoes look like a comp-addict), and I like the hair.

EDIT!!!: I think I lost my Clarity sketches.....

To Write Love on Her Arms · Postby **ZiP** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 1:16 pm

Alright, that will work, I'll host it and the put it by his character info.

Postby **ZiP** » Sat Sep 18, 2004 10:24 am

Krescent,
have you done sketches of Clarity?

Vamp, I guess I need to assign you to another character,
let's see... I think you could definatly do James,
if you could do it in the same format as Chip, that would be great to.

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Sat Sep 18, 2004 10:28 am

I would like to see the design of the Clarity as soon as possible, even if it's just a sketchy drawn in one minute. At the moment I have no concept of its design whatsoever.

Postby **ZiP** » Sat Sep 18, 2004 10:38 am

same here, my artist search isn't going so well,
out of five people i've asked:

3 haven't got back to me,

1 said she was busy with her own manga

the fifth one is considering it, but i don't knwo how seriously she is.

and the fact still remains, we haev no background/mecha artists.

Postby **Hitokiri** » Sat Sep 18, 2004 5:18 pm

Im sorry that I havn't posted in thtis topic for a while. I kinda forgot about it :red:

I've been very busy on my own manga plus not having a scanner doesn't help either.

Looks like it's going good though

To Write Love on Her Arms · Postby **ZiP** » Wed Sep 22, 2004 1:43 pm

Hey guys, sorry for the lack of post,
been majorly busy and stuff,
anyways, I don't know what the deal is but I really need to look at the story,
so if UC or loch could get it off for me ASAP, thanks.

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 5:46 am

Sure. I have to edit the first issue's script, but then I could send it to you via PM by tomorrow (theoretically). Or, if you respond before then, I could send you the unedited copy if you really wanted it.

To Write Love on Her Arms · Postby **ZiP** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:00 pm

I'll wait for the edited copy, (unless, you mean screencapped, but I'm guessing you don't), I just need to have a look at it.

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:09 pm

It is good you posted again, I had nearly forgotten about this. I should be able to get the edited copy to you tomorrow.

Screencapped?

To Write Love on Her Arms · Postby **ZiP** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 5:54 pm

Screencapped = written per screen what should be shown

E.G.

UC stared out of the window

(Screencapped) "screen 1: UC standing in fornt of window, staring. (no text)"

Postby **Vampi** » Sat Sep 25, 2004 2:46 am

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Sat Sep 25, 2004 7:17 am

I see what you mean. That, I call a final storyboard, and I do it in a slightly different style than you do. What I'll send you (hopefully momentarily) is simply what everyone says and everything that happens.

Vampi... I wish I could help you more in this regard, and you certainly have the right to ask. But it isn't as if Lochaber and I have developed the entire story to the point where we know how each character will develop. If you need something more specific please PM me and I will give you what information I can.

Postby **Vampi** » Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:50 am

To Write Love on Her Arms · Postby **ZiP** » Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:59 pm

Hmm. I think you kinda got it, but he looks like he's thin, plus he has blond hair.
His hair should be short, brown but not really spikey.
and he should have to eyes, he's not quite a pirate.

Postby **Vampi** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:51 am

Postby **KrescentMoon** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:00 am

ZiP wrote:Krescent,
have you done sketches of Clarity?

Do you mean the ship? Why, yes of course. Drawing with no idea whatsoever of how you want it to look like, indeed!

.....but really, heck no.....>>;;

Anyway, here are some pictures of sketches. As to why most of the pictures are yellow: my lamp has a yellow light bulb.

1. Nanny....just hairstyle sketches...clothes aren't that important. in the comic, i believe we should vary the clothing. not like the passengers will be wearing the same thing every day...

2. Kim Valentine. Hairstyle taken from a certain tv star...;p

3. Just some random sketch of Hisharo with a couple of my own jots. Obviously, it's not done. I don't spend much time on my drawings.

4. Nikki Lyric. Yes, you don't have to tell me--her anatomy is warped. Wait, distorted is a better word....yes...but anyway, i imagined Nikki to be a "born to be wild" type of girl. Adventurous, daring, and different. That's why she's a pilot, is it not? No ordinary girl would want that position...

Postby **Vampi** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:16 am

Postby **KrescentMoon** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 2:33 am

Indeed so (Nanny)...Well, my Nikki is pretty (in her own way. not the cute pretty...like Yohann pretty)...but not that sweet. I find it hard to imagine a 'pirate' ship's pilot to be 'nice'. They just don't fit...
And I wanted to make Kim practical. Her shoe design was taken from one of my aunt's shoes. they're soooo comfy! Good to walk around in and they're heels...that don't wear your feet out..so yeah...

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 7:31 am

Don't worry too much about Nikki's motivations. Lochaber and I have that covered.

Postby **Vampi** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 7:49 am

Postby **uc pseudonym** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 8:00 am

I would like to have that information as well. The Clarity is a somewhat important part of the story. Whatever the design is, it would have to function relatively well within an atmosphere (hence: streamlined), because it participates in a chase scene in the first chapter.

Also, I would like to truly apologize for not getting such things to you, Vampi. If I could use a disk at this terminal I would send them now, but alas such is not permitted. I should be able to remember it within a few days.

Postby **KrescentMoon** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 11:03 am

Let's watch AXN, folks! XD (you know, the space shows like Andromeda and stuff....hehe...heh...heh...^^;; )

((Vampi: ok ok, dude ._. I was expecting that...aaah, i've been drawing her all wrong! not gorgeous enough! XD ))

To Write Love on Her Arms · Postby **ZiP** » Mon Oct 04, 2004 1:19 pm

Problem is... I don't know what i want the clarity to look like :sweat:

!

Help?!

maybe... a sort of bird shape with wings up in the air.

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