Hmm.. that was cool! ^.^ can't wait for the nest chapter!
Ja!
"SherlockHolmes+RurouniKenshin"
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"And now these three remain: faith, hope, and love. But the greatest of these is love." -1 Corinthians 13:13 
I have a Deviant Art! http://keiko-mukisune.deviantart.com/
I have a Deviant Art! http://keiko-mukisune.deviantart.com/
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Vash is a plant - Posts: 182
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You're great! ^_^
Heart of Sword's Rhapsody
Money, get away
Get a good job with good pay and you're okay
And all and all you're just another brick in the wall
Shoutin’ in the street gonna take on the world some day
But Bismallah will not let me go
Because I'll see you on the dark side of the moon
Tommy used to work on the docks
Union's been on strike
Bright eyes burning like fire
And exposing every weakness
However carefully hidden by the kids
Who will love a little Sparrow
Who's traveled far and cries for rest
Spare him his life from this monstrosity
I've seen a million faces and I've rocked them all
And if the band youre in starts playing different tunes
We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you!
[Pink Floyd fan listening to Queen and hugging trees which is also known as taking care of God's creation with a pair of headphones on listening to Nightwish as loud as possible while writing a novel on a computer in the middle of a field filled with Wolves.]
[Bassist...finally learning Money]
Money, get away
Get a good job with good pay and you're okay
And all and all you're just another brick in the wall
Shoutin’ in the street gonna take on the world some day
But Bismallah will not let me go
Because I'll see you on the dark side of the moon
Tommy used to work on the docks
Union's been on strike
Bright eyes burning like fire
And exposing every weakness
However carefully hidden by the kids
Who will love a little Sparrow
Who's traveled far and cries for rest
Spare him his life from this monstrosity
I've seen a million faces and I've rocked them all
And if the band youre in starts playing different tunes
We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you!
[Pink Floyd fan listening to Queen and hugging trees which is also known as taking care of God's creation with a pair of headphones on listening to Nightwish as loud as possible while writing a novel on a computer in the middle of a field filled with Wolves.]
[Bassist...finally learning Money]
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Heart of Sword - Posts: 2201
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Chap.8
Watson was horror-struck. Before the cry for help left his lips, Holmes burst into the room with Her Majesty’s Royal Marines close behind.
“Don’t touch a thing!â€
Watson was horror-struck. Before the cry for help left his lips, Holmes burst into the room with Her Majesty’s Royal Marines close behind.
“Don’t touch a thing!â€
"Foul Beast"
Jesus is the Lord of the Kings
I love hypper people
"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."
"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."
"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."
the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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starstoryteller - Posts: 172
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WoW that is awesome!!! much more story type that i like!! i cant wait for the next chapter....so dont be lazy any more!!!!
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ssj2gohan61 - Posts: 769
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hehehe... rivals.. yea..
"And now these three remain: faith, hope, and love. But the greatest of these is love." -1 Corinthians 13:13
I have a Deviant Art! http://keiko-mukisune.deviantart.com/
I have a Deviant Art! http://keiko-mukisune.deviantart.com/
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Vash is a plant - Posts: 182
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This is for *hope *gives her a kenshin plushie*
Chap. 9
He stood in the battlefield reliving the hell in which he had fought. The sounds of death shrieks and battle cries mixed in a cacophony of horror. Each night he experienced anew all that had happed in the Revolution.
Everyone idolized war as the most glorious path to take, but they were wrong. He was one of them, thinking that he had taken the right course to Destiny. The Shogun wanted to gain power and wealth for his own purposes, while the Emperor – the living god – used his power and wealth to bless the people. This is why Kenshin Himura picked up his sword and became Hitokiri Battosai. But he soon found out it was not all black and white. Many warriors had divided loyalties. Various Samurai lords stood with the Shogun, and others with the Emperor. Some did what they thought was right; while others fought for there own ambition. No matter what the reason, blood was shed. Kenshin wondered what the point of it all was.
He looked down at his hands as they begin to shake. Blood – it was all over his body.
He ran and ran across the dreamscape hoping for relief and forgiveness, then Wham!! Kenshin slammed into a wall; his body went slack. He just lay there hoping for the dream to end.
“Uhh…â€
Chap. 9
He stood in the battlefield reliving the hell in which he had fought. The sounds of death shrieks and battle cries mixed in a cacophony of horror. Each night he experienced anew all that had happed in the Revolution.
Everyone idolized war as the most glorious path to take, but they were wrong. He was one of them, thinking that he had taken the right course to Destiny. The Shogun wanted to gain power and wealth for his own purposes, while the Emperor – the living god – used his power and wealth to bless the people. This is why Kenshin Himura picked up his sword and became Hitokiri Battosai. But he soon found out it was not all black and white. Many warriors had divided loyalties. Various Samurai lords stood with the Shogun, and others with the Emperor. Some did what they thought was right; while others fought for there own ambition. No matter what the reason, blood was shed. Kenshin wondered what the point of it all was.
He looked down at his hands as they begin to shake. Blood – it was all over his body.
He ran and ran across the dreamscape hoping for relief and forgiveness, then Wham!! Kenshin slammed into a wall; his body went slack. He just lay there hoping for the dream to end.
“Uhh…â€
"Foul Beast"
Jesus is the Lord of the Kings
I love hypper people
"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."
"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."
"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."
the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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starstoryteller - Posts: 172
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wow that is very good!!! its getting much better every chapter like ducky said!! hurry up and write more haha jk take your time it may not be as good if its rushed writing
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Chap. 10
Senor Arturo Aragon sat at his desk looking over the cargo manifesto that he had to complete before he set sail for Spain. “That impertinent Mr. Holmes!â€
Senor Arturo Aragon sat at his desk looking over the cargo manifesto that he had to complete before he set sail for Spain. “That impertinent Mr. Holmes!â€
"Foul Beast"
Jesus is the Lord of the Kings
I love hypper people
"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."
"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."
"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."
the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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starstoryteller - Posts: 172
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Dang I'm stuck so you...dont let it die...Please>.<
"Foul Beast"
Jesus is the Lord of the Kings
I love hypper people
"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."
"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."
"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."
the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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starstoryteller - Posts: 172
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After a LONG periode of writers block here is chapter 12 
Enjoy ^^
Tsubame smelled the fresh morning air as she took the chopped fire wood into the house. It seemed peaceful and serene. She never suspected that her day would be filled with adventure.
“Tsubame, can you come here, please?â€
Enjoy ^^
Tsubame smelled the fresh morning air as she took the chopped fire wood into the house. It seemed peaceful and serene. She never suspected that her day would be filled with adventure.
“Tsubame, can you come here, please?â€
"Foul Beast"
Jesus is the Lord of the Kings
I love hypper people
"...art can teach without at all ceasing to be art."
"Love may forgive all infirmities and love still in spite of them: but Love cannot cease to will their removal."
"If I find in myself a desire which no experience in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that I was made for another world."
the words of C.S. Lewis "Jack"
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starstoryteller - Posts: 172
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WOW this story is turning out great!!! keep it up!!
Love is that feeling you get when a girl looks at you and it feels like your driving a car at high speeds and experience a sudden drop. You know what i mean? That sudden sinking feeling you get in your stomach? Yeah, that's love. Leave's you speechless everytime.
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