Sorrow Song
By Kati Su S
Book One: Legend of the Lost
Chapter One: The Legend
Authors Notes (that you probably won’t read, even thought you really should): I wrote again... yes…. my friends convinced me to write again. Anyway, it probably won’t be very good, sorry in advance. I’m a terrible writer, even though in 8th grade my dream was to become one. I still kind of wish I could… but I’m gonna be honest with myself: I’m lousy. ^_^;
Anyway – This first chapter is just the behind the story legend that’s really cheesy and boring but important anyway. Its won’t all be this boring, so keep reading.
Also, Solorurans are quite a bit like elves in appearance. Tall in, size, pointy ears and a sort of ‘bright’ look about them, if you know what I mean. ^_^
Caiti (Caitix is singular) are a race that can turn from human-cat hybrids to full cats at will. Their hybrid forms stand about as tall as a normal human, and walk on two feet. However, they have cat ears and a tail, and are covered from head to tow in fur.
Humans are, well, humans. ^_^
And, last but not least, Soralens look much like humans, only with gigantic eagle wings that vary in color.
Hopefully I’ll fit these descriptions into the story for all those lazy bums that don’t read this (which would be most of you).
I’m probably going to do a map soon or later too, so you and I both don’t get lost, LOL!
Yes, yes, there will be four books. And I already know how it will end… so, yeah, now all I have to do is be hard-working. Bleh. x.x
Okay, so I’m gonna shut up now, but be warned that a lot of important information may be conveyed thru these notes, so don’t skip them and then complain that you don’t understand something!
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In the beautiful Kingdom of Haven, there lived a race of people called Solorurans. They mostly kept out of the way of the other races in the kingdom, and lived in a small valley called Soloris. There, they spent their time raising and taming dragons, which they used for hunting, building homes, transportation and, well, pets.
However, outside the valley, dragons where much frowned upon, seeing as wild ones were vicious and quite likely to attack humans unprovoked.
The humans, most of all, distrusted the Solorurans because of their use of dragons. Not a day passed in the capital of Rice without someone using the name “soloruranâ€
Sorrow Song: Book One
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CobaltAngel - Posts: 1950
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I agree it looks like this will be great.
I am a brother to dragons, and a companion to owls.
-Job 30:29
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Me: YAY! *glomples* I KNEW YOU'D START WRITING AGAIN! XD
Coby: *can't breath*
Me: OOPS! *loosens her grip* SORRY! ^.^;;
Coby: *can't breath*
Me: OOPS! *loosens her grip* SORRY! ^.^;;
[color="DimGray"]I don't believe that I would die if I saw you face to face;
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
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*joins Archy in glomping Coby* That was wonderful! But what a cliffhanger. Oh, don't keep us in suspense too long! Write more!!!!
In a world shrouded in mystery, the winds of change begin to blow.
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CobaltAngel - Posts: 1950
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OOH! GREAT STORY! ^^ Thank you for writing a story about me!
Coby:
Me: Ok. It's not about me so, it's still good ^^;
Coby:
Me: Ok. It's not about me so, it's still good ^^;
Luke was here.
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Sorrow Song
By Kati Su S
Book One: Legend of the Lost
Chapter Two: The Meeting
Authors Notes: Uhm… yay! I made it to the actual story! XD BTW, its rated PG13 for a reason… you have been warned. ^_^;; (I get a bit graphic with the violence, and they’re one of my characters that might make a few inappropriate comments, but I guess we’ll just wait and see how thickly PG-13 I end up making it. LOL, OMG, I’m practically writing a paragraph inside these pareses! XD)
Another Thing – You’ll here ‘Soloruran accent’ mentioned in this chapter. They’re pretty close to French accents – I suppose, but don’t go Dracula on me and start adding ‘V’ every which way. Image the accent but without all that. That’s basically what a Soloruran accent is. ^_^ They are most prominent among Solorurans from southern Soloris.
And yes, I am aware that “The Great Warâ€
By Kati Su S
Book One: Legend of the Lost
Chapter Two: The Meeting
Authors Notes: Uhm… yay! I made it to the actual story! XD BTW, its rated PG13 for a reason… you have been warned. ^_^;; (I get a bit graphic with the violence, and they’re one of my characters that might make a few inappropriate comments, but I guess we’ll just wait and see how thickly PG-13 I end up making it. LOL, OMG, I’m practically writing a paragraph inside these pareses! XD)
Another Thing – You’ll here ‘Soloruran accent’ mentioned in this chapter. They’re pretty close to French accents – I suppose, but don’t go Dracula on me and start adding ‘V’ every which way. Image the accent but without all that. That’s basically what a Soloruran accent is. ^_^ They are most prominent among Solorurans from southern Soloris.
And yes, I am aware that “The Great Warâ€
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CobaltAngel - Posts: 1950
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Widdle ran quickly through the forest. Though it was night, you could hardly tell because the lush trees blocked out the dark blue sky from view. The 13-year-old Soloruran fit in with the night. He was wearing all black, a black tank top and baggy black pants, as well as having the blackest shade of black hair a person could have.
He was proud of that, having such a dark black for hair color. No one else he had ever known had believed him that there were multiple shades of black hair, and that most were not quite black. He’d even seen a reddish black color once.
He gritted his teeth, remembering that had made him remember home – his sisters and his mom and dad. He began to breath heavy and reached for his sword. The earth around him all seemed to be whispering, “They’re dead, they’re, dead.â€
He was proud of that, having such a dark black for hair color. No one else he had ever known had believed him that there were multiple shades of black hair, and that most were not quite black. He’d even seen a reddish black color once.
He gritted his teeth, remembering that had made him remember home – his sisters and his mom and dad. He began to breath heavy and reached for his sword. The earth around him all seemed to be whispering, “They’re dead, they’re, dead.â€
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CobaltAngel - Posts: 1950
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That's great, Coby! More, please!
In a world shrouded in mystery, the winds of change begin to blow.
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"I'm a warrior-hero-adventurer-goddess who CAN'T SWIM, okay?!?!" ~Skye of Lynlora, from the video game Darkened Skye
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SWEET! That was wonderful!
Luke was here.
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Swing!
*timidly raises hand* Um, if I might suggest something, when you describe his appearance, you may want to go a bit lighter on the black. As is, you used it about four times in two sentences. *looks around sheepishly, and shuts up.*
*timidly raises hand* Um, if I might suggest something, when you describe his appearance, you may want to go a bit lighter on the black. As is, you used it about four times in two sentences. *looks around sheepishly, and shuts up.*
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