And now for the storyline!!

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And now for the storyline!!

Postby ZiP » Tue Apr 06, 2004 4:23 pm

Well this is the storyline to the manga idea:



In the year 2495 Intergalactic space travel was mastered recently. But only of late has a new alien race been discovered. A science crew stumbled upon the aliens by accident and discovered hostility among them. Only one science officer came back alive. He spoke of the aliens, they were human sized, with big blue eyes that glowed in the dark, the were strong and fast too
but they were extremely hostile. They captured the ship and he managed to escape. The whole incident was kept under wraps, and security tightened. The foolish government left the planet alone only guarding it.
2565 was the year it happened; the aliens had mastered space travel. The defenses guarding the planet were wiped out, and the aliens fought to take over with the ships they had captured. The war was settled in 2 months. 1/10 of Earth’s forces had been destroyed in the war, and many inhabited planets had been destroyed by the aliens meaning that many humans died. The government was forced to release the truth.
The people of Earth and other planets were angry. A man named Christopher Hitchcock led the rebellion against the government, and they had eventually gained control… Now it was the Hitchcock government was in control. He was a good president of Earth, tighter laws were enforced, and the drug dealers, “cargoâ€
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Postby cbwing0 » Tue Apr 06, 2004 4:27 pm

The story looks good so far. It should be interesting. :thumb:
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thats quite the mix

Postby Chapel » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:20 pm

Ok lets do the rundown, we have the irresonsible captain Tyler, Captain Harlock, Galaxy express, and Robotech, pluss a little on the side of Cannon God Exxxion. So the visuals of this will be quite the concept team. Not to mention the muti planet system plus the designers of ships, weaponry. Style designers for clothes, and creature tech. Are you sure you have the team capapble of such a product. I know I'm on it n all but this isn't a meat and potatoes story this is a dual galaxy battle field. Just wondering how prepared you really are for such a feet.

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Postby Vampi » Thu Apr 08, 2004 7:14 am

Hey...don't undermine us. You don't know what we're be capable of...then I again, I don't either. Well, I know my own and Krescent's abilities..... Krescent should have the clothes covered well if her brains don't blow out...

"...which doesn't really happen when it comes to clothes." -Krescent Moon


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Postby Hitokiri » Thu Apr 08, 2004 8:28 am

I'm quite expiereinced I guess in dealing with armory and ships and also space stuff. heck, I'm working on a sci-fi manga right now besides this one!

I spent a month and a half period of studying how to draw spaceships, guns, weaponry, etc. Guns aren't that hard to draw. You just have to draw in the nesscaries (trigger, barrle, handle of course) and then go from there.

I can't wait to work on the character designs :)
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Postby uc pseudonym » Thu Apr 08, 2004 1:15 pm

Alright, that's cool. If I'm made a writer, I'll see what I can do with this...
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Postby ZiP » Thu Apr 08, 2004 4:35 pm

Plan's changed a little:


I'm gonna give you concept faces krecent, and let you make the changes to the clothes, and make bodies, and touch up the hair, then im gonna give it to you Hitokiri, and let you touch up.
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"Love has nothing to do with what you are expecting to get, it's what you are expected to give -- which is everything."
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Postby Mave » Fri Apr 09, 2004 7:32 am

Don't mind me, I'm not in the team but I'll be watching out for you guys. :)

I hope you guys find good concept artists for the ships and mechanic stuff coz I can't do stuff like that. But we have a few members who can do it such as Shinja (I think). Can't remember off my head but someone did a very good renderation of mecha in the art thread as well.

BTW, is there any Christian intention with this manga? Or there any specific messages you want to convey in this story? Just wondering. ^^
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Postby KrescentMoon » Fri Apr 09, 2004 8:12 am

ZiP wrote:Plan's changed a little:


I'm gonna give you concept faces krecent, and let you make the changes to the clothes, and make bodies, and touch up the hair, then im gonna give it to you Hitokiri, and let you touch up.



ooooookie dokie~! now......meep ._. year 2495....*thinks of how fashion would be like in the future* *lightbulb blinks over head* a-Ha! mweheheh.....

now, looking at what's given, this manga will take a heck of a lot of work.
*is happy that she doesn't need to come up with the storyboard.....or anything from scratch* my brain WOULD explode then...... :sweat:

btw, what's the comic's title?

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Postby ZiP » Fri Apr 09, 2004 9:31 pm

we still need a name.
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Postby KrescentMoon » Fri Apr 09, 2004 9:33 pm

Why not the title having to do with the ship's name? i mean..it is sorta about the Clarity isn't it?

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Postby ZiP » Sat Apr 10, 2004 6:18 am

hmm, yeah but what would it

"Adventures of the Clarity: (episode name)" or somtihng like that?
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Postby Lochaber Axe » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:24 am

I will thinking of something more original like, Vacuum Clear, or vice versa if you want to be totally adjective-noun correct. Just some thoughts...
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Postby KrescentMoon » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:29 am

something more original........erm..........

"Clarification?" -Vampi

or

"Clarification Please"

it's morning. tired. brain not functioning properly. hungry.......^^;;;

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Postby Vampi » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:33 am

I made those suggestions but don't hold me accountable....

it's night. tired. brain not functioning properly. bloated...........
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Postby ZiP » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:37 am

lol
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Postby ZiP » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:38 am

Inspiration! how about "Impaired Judgement"?

yo krecent and vampi, yall might want to get an AIM S/N, its free, and it would defnitly help us coordinate sutff.
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Postby KrescentMoon » Sat Apr 10, 2004 7:57 am

;_; i can't find the register section........see! i'm a dunce in the morning!

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Postby uc pseudonym » Sat Apr 10, 2004 2:18 pm

I'd be in favor of something more along the lines Lochaber Axe suggested, but beyond that I would suggest simply "Clarity." The title "Impaired Judgement" wouldn't be bad, either.
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Postby Lochaber Axe » Sat Apr 10, 2004 4:07 pm

We might be able to come up with a better name once their is concept drawings for UC and me. With these drawings, he and I could start creating the crew and other characters unless there is no need for it. Right now, all I want to know is if this is going to be a serious manga or more comical one.
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Postby KrescentMoon » Sat Apr 10, 2004 4:47 pm

i believe it's going to be a serious one.....erm, btw, ZiP, i added you into AOL....and i would like to know the rest of my co-workers please. X3

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Postby ZiP » Sat Apr 10, 2004 4:57 pm

This si going to be.. a seriously comical manga in otherwords, it will be serious in some parts, but ocasioanaly there will be funny parts
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Postby KrescentMoon » Sat Apr 10, 2004 8:37 pm

XD seriously comical, lol.
erm.....anyway.....of course, like all (well, most) stories do. (evangelion has comedy! and it's one of the most depressing anime i know in existence!)

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Postby ZiP » Mon Apr 12, 2004 2:45 pm

Hey, did you get my pm, saying you could go ahead and make the characters krescent?
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Postby KrescentMoon » Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:57 pm

yes i did, right now i'm occupied with catching up with my studies...but i did add you on AIM.........but i haven't seen you on yet....

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Postby ZiP » Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:01 pm

*frown* i get on every hour at least, whats yours ill add you?
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Postby Hitokiri » Mon Apr 12, 2004 6:58 pm

soo um ZiP...what will I be cleaning up exactly?? Just confused in what tune ups I have to do with the characters.

I havnt noticed if we have thought of a name for the anime but I though "Calirty" sounded fun or how bout something in the lines of "Project Clarity" or "I Christed Thee Clairty :lol: "

anyways I'm on the team so feel free to Im me :)

As for my scanner situation, I have 2 ways of getting my stuff scanned 1) my friend who can but she's not very dependant (as in he fails to email me my pictures at times) and 2)m my school has a scanner though I just need a place to store my pictures....maybe make a thread in the Art Corner.....hmmmm...

so anyways, Zip PM me of what I axactly have to do, k :)
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Postby ZiP » Tue Apr 13, 2004 1:02 pm

Hitokiri wrote:soo um ZiP...what will I be cleaning up exactly?? Just confused in what tune ups I have to do with the characters.

I havnt noticed if we have thought of a name for the anime but I though "Calirty" sounded fun or how bout something in the lines of "Project Clarity" or "I Christed Thee Clairty :lol: "

anyways I'm on the team so feel free to Im me :)

As for my scanner situation, I have 2 ways of getting my stuff scanned 1) my friend who can but she's not very dependant (as in he fails to email me my pictures at times) and 2)m my school has a scanner though I just need a place to store my pictures....maybe make a thread in the Art Corner.....hmmmm...

so anyways, Zip PM me of what I axactly have to do, k :)


well lets see, waht i meant at first was touch up my work since im not pro drawer or anything but nows actually i need you to do make offs of Krescents, give me ideas of anything that would do to add to the person (once i send you everyones prof). that basicaly it, any suggstions feel free to IM/PM me

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"Feelings, emotions, they are good, but they cannot be Love's foundation. When of Love, these things last. When of romance, these things end."

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Postby KrescentMoon » Tue Apr 13, 2004 3:50 pm

ZiP wrote:*frown* i get on every hour at least, whats yours ill add you?


((i sent you a PM yesterday telling you my AIM sn........did you receive it?))

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Postby ZiP » Tue Apr 13, 2004 5:37 pm

got it, your on nwo but away, ill get back to you. hopfully you get on before i get off.
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