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Worship Song

Postby PolarHeat » Wed Jul 09, 2008 10:06 pm

I wrote this during a youth retreat that our church had. It's not finished but this is what I have so far. Please feel free to reply what you think.

I stumble, I trip, I fall
Trying to answer your call
I turn and walk away
You wait for me anyway

How can your love
Be so rich and strong
When I deserve nothing of it
Out of everything
Why choose me
I'll never be able to earn it

But you choose me anyway
So what can I say
But holy
Heavenly King
You are worthy


I'm working on getting music and the rest of the song with a friend of mine.
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Postby ST. Attidude » Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:46 am

Nice lyrics! :)

It actually sounds like a lot of today's contemporary worship songs, probably even better than some of it!
(Seriously, it does...For some reason, I'm not the biggest fan of the contemporary stuff...)

I hope to hear the music soon.
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Postby fairyprincess90 » Wed Jul 23, 2008 9:23 am

aww neat! i like that alot! great job! what do you have in mind for the music?
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Postby PolarHeat » Thu Jul 24, 2008 9:12 pm

Well. I am so glad that other people enjoy the lyrics. Thank you so much. I gave what I have written to a close friend from church who is really good with worship things like this. He is going to be helping me finish this song and add music to it. I'm crossing my fingers and praying that it will be good.

fairyprincess90 - I have a couple of tunes for the verses and chorus and bridge. But other than that. I have no musical talent. LoLs. I do hope that I can work it together with him.
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