earthbound rpg

[diton 13]

episode 0 prelude

long ago....so vey long ago....
it was said that a boy would lead victory over the starmen and there leader.then it was said that the demon giygas would die at the hands of another.it was said that another would fight of evil form another time.all came true the last proficy stated that the 3 boys would team up and destory the greatest threat to christianaty yet."for you see 4 psychics there be one diffrent from the other three.hate flows through their vains so shall it begin again.


our story begins in the town of onett.with a sophmore boy named ness.

[diton 13]

teacher: ok class take out your textbooks and turn to page 200.
ness:pk mind control.
author:this is a diffrent form of writing based on the earthbound game please note that all critizim will be ignored.
teacher:ness did you read my mind again??
ness:no.
teacher:very well.now lets read about william shakesp...
ness:...hello?hello?anybody here?i am ready to learn.said ness as a moving blanket enters the room.
blanket:ness!thanks goodness your alive!
ness:talking blanket!!!!pk rockin!!!
blanket: noooo don't hurt me!
ness:all right what do you want.
blanket:paulie has been kidnapped!!
ness:WHAT!!!??!?PAULIE MY GIRLFRIEND IS KIDNAPPED.said ness as a strange a appered on the floor.whats that a doing there.
blanket look out!!
demon:RAWR!!
ness:what the heck?where did he come from?
blanket:lets team up to defeat him!
author;yay battle time!time for a little time space change!as i said that the sky turned multi colored and everyone went to a diffrent dimention.
ness:whats this?
blanket i don't know what the author did but lets team up to stop this freak.by the way a spell was cast in your sleep and now you lost all your psis except for pk life up a and pk rockin a.i personaly i know pk fire.
ness:who cares fight!NESS DOES PK ROCKIN A.INFLICTS 3 DAMAGE.
blanket:BLANKET DOES PK FIRE INFLICTS 3 DAMAGE.
demon:DEMON SCRACHES NESS FURIOUSLY INFLICTS 10 DAMAGE.
ness:why am i so weak?
blanket:its the demon here take this holy baseball bat.it should give you strengh it is powerful agansit demons but psi is weak aganist demons.
ness:NESS BASHES DEMON INFICTS 1000 damage.
demon:DEMON DIES.
author:aww over already.
blanket:SHUT UP DITON!!
ness: our author is wierd.

[Radical Dreamer]

Did you mean to post this here in the writing forum, or are you trying to toss around ideas for an RP?

[Mr. SmartyPants]

Your RPG is damaging the glory that is Mother. D:

[mechana2015]

rpg?

Rocket propelled grenade?

[diton 13]

no i am not i m writing a story i tried to make a rpg but no one would join.

[diton 13]

episode 3
a old hope.

mom:ninten...ninten?cmom sweetie wake up.
ninten:ok mom.hey oh no not again.said ninten as a lamp stared at him from the other end of the room.
lamp:i am back!!!!with new psi powers!
blanket:wait!
ninten:is my blanket talking to me?
blanket:yes!i am blanki of the four blankets.but just call me blanket
lamp:RAWR!!
author:yay more fighting!
blanket:BLANKET DOES PK FREEZE. INFLICTS 5 DAMAGE
ninten:NINTEN BASHES.INFLICTS 10 DAMAGE.
lamp:i didn't even get to attack.LAMP DIES.
author:well that was undecint.i am going back to bed.

[diton 13]

blanket:WAKE UP WHAT ABOUT US!!!?!?!?
author:in conclusion blanket tells ninten to find ness,lucas and do.the end.for now.i would like to let everyone know i hate critizim and will ignore it this is my first story i get my info from this website.blame it for the story. http://www.starmen.net.

[Mr. SmartyPants]

Don't blame starmen.net or else Reidman, Tomato, ROFISH, and SimonBob will eat your innards. =(

[diton 13]

but starmen inspiered me.so technechly yeah i can blame them.

[Fish and Chips]

I blame you for ruining a good thing.

[Mr. SmartyPants]

Fine then, Diton. I'm gonna get ROFISH to PERMABAN YOUS.

[LadyRushia]

Uhhhhhhhhhhh. **falls through a plot hole**

Ouch. Maybe you could add some more details so people could understand the story. The more you can make the reader understand what you're talking about, the more responses you'll get.

[diton 13]

actully its ok fine don't bann me.give me time all i will be back though!!

[RidleyofZebes]

Anyone need one of these? ^_^;;

[diton 13]

yeah thats me i am going to yo yo.com to make video games i will make a fan game it won't be as sucky cause its a video game.

[Fish and Chips]

yeah thats me i am going to yo yo.com to make video games i will make a fan game it won't be as sucky cause its a video game.

Because who ever heard of a sucky video game?

[diton 13]

exactly...HEY!!!ok look i know i may have damaged the glory that is mother but it took guts....and...i wanna become an author so i need to start praticing ok. ps i know i need a lot of praticing.but hey i am willing to do the work!

[Mr. SmartyPants]

You confuse me. =(

[LadyRushia]

You want to be an author, but you don't accept criticism. . .

The only way you can improve is if you listen to what other people have to say about your work.

[CrimsonRyu17]

I'll be glad when you people realize he's just here to spam.

Oh, I so went there.

[USSRGirl]

o.o


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You confuse even me...

[chibiphonebooth]

You want to be an author, but you don't accept criticism. . .

The only way you can improve is if you listen to what other people have to say about your work.

PFFTTAHAHHAAHHAHAHHAAHAHAHAH

[Radical Dreamer]

Closed, because this thread is going nowhere fast.