State of the World

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State of the World

Postby Miss WWE 2007 » Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:59 am

Here's some of the hip-hop lyrics I wrote, this song is called "The State of the World"

We're walking in a land full of sin and corrosion
Everytime you turn around there's another explosion
Like 9-11, an abandoned baby outside of 7-11
I look toward Heaven
Will he live to be 7...?

And everyone wants to be a star
Have spreewheels all shiny on their fancy cars
Their silver necklaces
Scream 14 karats,
Trying to determine their future in Cleo's tarots...
They try to cover up who they really are...
Steady staying drunk behind the County Bars...

We're walking in the valley of the Shadow of Death
Never realizing when we'll take our last breath...
We're stubborn,
We take our lives for granted
Unaware of the sins in our souls we have planted

Disappointing
This is our worlds testimony
Tell why teens are already in matrimony
Inexpierienced making babies
Instead of learning about bieng gentlemen or ladies
Hey maybe it could even be worse
Their first vehicle may be a hearse
How sad...
How did it happen?
Someone dial up the number...for the nearest Chaplin...

Jesus walks and He talks with me everyday, Protecting my soul and paving my way...in the dark clouds I see a tomorrow, a time out of bondage, a time out of sorrow...I know I gotta go through somethings, but with faith and determination, I'll make it through all things...Trust in God and hold my head up high, reach to be greater, try to touch the sky

See it's time for us to cancel out all hesistation
Put down our pride and pray for salvation
We're living in time of tribulation
Acting out a part in our world's revelation
Dear Lord, please bless all nations
Free us from our tension and desperation...

Dear God I pray for our souls to be filled
All those in sickness...let them be healed
Bless us and keep us when we go through
That we'll keep our minds and our focus entirely on you...
"I wanna heal, I wanna feel what I thought was never real
I wanna let go of the pain I’ve held so long
(Erase all the pain till it’s gone)
I wanna heal, I wanna feel like I’m close to something real
I wanna find something I’ve wanted all along
Somewhere I belong

I will never know myself until I do this on my own
And I will never feel anything else, until my wounds are healed
I will never be anything till I break away from me
I will break away, I'll find myself today

"-Linkin Park (Somewhere I Belong)


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Postby itch » Tue Jun 12, 2007 3:38 pm

Good job :thumb: I'm not really into hip-hop, but the rhyming is catchy.
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Postby itch » Tue Jun 12, 2007 3:41 pm

You've skillfully pointed out some seriously important truths. :wow!:
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Postby The Liar XIII » Tue Jun 12, 2007 4:57 pm

I absolutely Hate Rap and Hip-Hop... I'm a really Heavy Metal guy..
But I love the lyrics.
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