Endure

[Tigerchu]

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I've started making (with God's Help) this manga. It's going to be 19 pages I think, and I'm about half way done.

The page I uploaded, page 1, was edited on Paint(A little )

Plot: Girl meets boy. (without giving too much away). I want to get "True Love" into it. Not the messed up wordly view.

Rating: G(maybe PG)

Language: None.

Fighting: No one gets hurt from fighting, but a boy gets an attack thrown at him and dodges it. The main character boy likes martial arts, but practices on a bag.
"Imaginary" people are practiced on.
In the sports part, the main girl is seen hitting the ground, she's not seriously injured, though.

Nudity: None.(No "vital parts". There is cleavage.)

Sexuality: One couple in the beginning are "implied" to be a bad couple. This is to compare the "bad couple" with the main girl, who is "waiting".
There is also a girl in the snowy place of sport that is hardly wearing anything, but her "vital's" are covered up. This is to scare the main girl, which then leads to a positive scene.

bad religion: None.

Constructive criticism welcomed.

[Esoteric]

You have a very interesting art style, very nice. I wish you luck in your efforts!

[Syreth]

Yeah, I too think that your style is nice, with your unique approach to anatomy and portraits. It will be interesting to see the finished product and find out where your story is going.

[Tigerchu]

Thanks for the positive comments:), Esoteric, Syreth.
I still need to work on anatomy:)? What do you mean "unique" approach to anatomy:), Syreth?

[Syreth]

The figures in the top-right of page one, for example, have very long and somewhat bulky torsos. I don't think it's a bad thing, though, to experiment and stretch proportions a bit. I mean, just look at Tsubasa. They all have small heads! Point being is that these things can make your style distinct and interesting.

[USSRGirl]

I agree. Your art style has a lot of character to it. It was a bit hard to follow because there's no text. Are you going to add text later or just leave it as a silent manga? Silent is kinda cool and artsy... oooh like Gon. I have a guess as to where you're going with the 'true love' thing too.

[ChristianKitsune]

you have a very good start, tigerchu! like the way your panels move really eye capturing.

I would advise, however that you need to keep your character designs as consistent as possible. Some of your anatomy is a little...strange, but that might just be your style.

Keep it up! I look forward to more!