a story (haven't thought of a name yet)
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:08 pm
I'm working on this story and I wanted to know how the plot sounds so far give some feedback if you please ^__^
(it's set in a place that is advanced beond us like scince fiction/fantasy; something like shadow runner) A group of merchs ( people who take on jobs from others two steel something from a high up place or things like that) are given a mission to infultrait this company's headcorders retreave a chip, and give it to them. In return of corse they receve a large sum of zen (there currancy). As they are going through there mission (wich is far more dificalt then anticipated) they finally arive to where the chip is located but instead of a chip they find a girl in a large capsule with a bar code on the back of her neck(along with the numbers 10,21,13) .They dicided to forget about the mission and save this girl. with much dificulty they escape from the companys headcoders. They learn that this girl has no memories and dicide to take her in and find out more about that company and what they are doing.This results in them being hunted down by the company and the people who gave them the mission; both trying to get the girl. So the merchs try to keep the girl safe and find out her imortance to all there people.
that pretty much all I have so far! ^^;; I'm sorry that it's not the best dirscription but I just came up with this now. So tell me what you think ^^
(it's set in a place that is advanced beond us like scince fiction/fantasy; something like shadow runner) A group of merchs ( people who take on jobs from others two steel something from a high up place or things like that) are given a mission to infultrait this company's headcorders retreave a chip, and give it to them. In return of corse they receve a large sum of zen (there currancy). As they are going through there mission (wich is far more dificalt then anticipated) they finally arive to where the chip is located but instead of a chip they find a girl in a large capsule with a bar code on the back of her neck(along with the numbers 10,21,13) .They dicided to forget about the mission and save this girl. with much dificulty they escape from the companys headcoders. They learn that this girl has no memories and dicide to take her in and find out more about that company and what they are doing.This results in them being hunted down by the company and the people who gave them the mission; both trying to get the girl. So the merchs try to keep the girl safe and find out her imortance to all there people.
that pretty much all I have so far! ^^;; I'm sorry that it's not the best dirscription but I just came up with this now. So tell me what you think ^^
