forgiveness

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forgiveness

Postby Althaia » Thu Feb 22, 2007 7:26 pm

heres a sorta poem/letter from god i made hope you like it:

forgiveness
all those i see
i forgive

all those i don't see
i forgive

all the ones that cannot see me
i forgive

and the innocents
that cannot help
being in the wrong place
at the wrong time
i forgive
all those guilty of crimes
i forgive

all the sick
i forgive
and all the well
i forgive

well please comment helpful critic apperciated and i decided to make my poem in a rainbow to represent Gods Promise to Noah
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[color=cyan]† [size=84]smile Jesus loves you[/SIZE][/color]

procastinators unite.......................tommorrow

[color=palegreen]So in times when all your hope is gone
And you go through life afraid
In your heart there lies a hopeful song
That is there to guide the way
And all the hurt and all the pain
You soon will learn was not in vain
For all your prayers, they will be heard
They'll come to pass through faith [/color]

[color=palegreen]~When you Believe from Prince of Egypt


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