poem of love

[Guardianking500]

this is a poem i hope will help people
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in the time
a heart
was broken
even though i was hurt
forgiveness flowed
through my heart and soul
i fought through
what other want to accept
to blame others
for what happens
but then a light
shining in the distance
guides me to
enlightenment
and then i feel
what is always there
the love i feel
for the one
i cannot hate
she means so much
that i calm
the storm within
and make peace
with heart of love
so i may once again
be complete
in this time.

[[GMOD]Vedicardi]

Though lacking the use of a shift key, it's not half bad. =D

[Mr. SmartyPants]

I would recommend combining certain stanzas into one.

Example: instead of
"in the time
a heart
was broken"

Make it
"In a time a heart was broken"
or
"In a time that a heart was broken"

[Dunedan]

This poem intrigues me because it reminds me of my own poems... not in style, but in cause and theme. Except yours responds to the dilemma with hope and faith and mine only with cyicism, bitterness and resignation.

But hey, I gotta be me.

I liked it by the way... and I agree with Mr. Smartypants and Vedicardi... combining stanzas and capitalizing would make it flow a lot better visually.