love poems

Unleash your creative writing skills here.

love poems

Postby fairyprincess90 » Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:43 am

i write love songs and songs of heart-break
so here's one to start. i wrote this about a guy i really like.

We Should Get Together

Vs1

I look at you, what do I see,
The kind of guy I want to be (with),
You always seem to catch my eye,
You’re just that kind of guy,
I’ve liked you for oh so long,
That’s why I’ve decided to write this song,
To let you know some of my thoughts,
Even though you might not care at all,

Chorus

I think we should get together,
Cause I know I’ll love you forever,
And I’ll wait for you to open your eyes,
And I’ll wait for you to realize,
I think we should get together,
Cause I’ll stay with you through all kinds of weather,
And I’ll wait ‘til the end of time,
Yeah I’ll wait for you to finally be mine,

Vs2

I look at you, what do I see,
The kind of guy I want with me,
You stand above all the rest,
In my opinion you’re the best,
I’d walk a thousand twenty miles,
Just to see your beautiful smile,
You always seem to catch my eye,
You make me feel like I’m alive,
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:21 pm

I’m Falling

Vs1. I told myself,
This wouldn’t happen again,
I promised myself,
I wouldn’t get hurt again,
But I felt a feeling,
When I looking into your eyes,
And when I realized what it was,
I ran outside to cry,
(because I’m)
Chorus:
(I’m) Falling in love,
I’m falling to pieces,
I’m falling in love,
Yet I’m falling apart,
But let me fall,
Into your arms and show me,
That heart break doesn’t always have to come after love.

Vs.2
When I came home that night,
I cried myself to sleep.
Because that feeling I’m feeling inside,
Brought back all those memories,
I still feel the painfulness,
When he ripped my heart out from my chest,
I still feel the brokenness,
When he smashed it to the ground,
(yet here I am again)

Bridge:
What he did to me,
I must remember might not ever happen again,
But that fear is still inside,
Please erase it, erase it.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:22 pm

152 Love Letters

152 love letters I’ve written to you,
But you’ve never read ‘em, ‘cause I’ve never sent ‘em,
‘cause I’m afraid to,

I’m afraid if I tell you, then you’ll be scared away,
So I’m waiting for the right opportunity, to say,

I like you and I want you to know,
But I’m afraid if I tell you, then you’d go (away),
So I’d rather us just be friends,
Then have us never talk again,
I don’t want my feelings to get in the way,
I’d rather us be friends and not lovers any day.

152 love letters I’ve written to you,
But you’ve never read ‘em, ‘cause I’ve never sent ‘em,
‘cause I’m afraid to,

I really want to tell you, but I’m willing to wait,
If I tell you now it might not be safe.

I like you and I want you to know,
But I’m afraid if I tell you, then you’d go (away),
So I’d rather us just be friends,
Then have us never talk again,
I don’t want my feelings to get in the way,
I’d rather us be friends and not lovers any day.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:08 pm

heres two more...

GRANT

i feel so depressed, i cant go on,
wake me up when this pain is gone,
you like her, i know its true,
and you have no idea how much i love you,
i watch you from the conrner of my eye,
if you'd just love me i'd stay alive,
but for now im going to sleep,
im going to sleep enternally.

I WISH YOU WERE MINE, DEAR

you kissed me gently,
under a willow tree,
you whisphered in my ear,
that you loved me,
i ran my fingers through your hair,
and gazed into your brown eyes,
i was so happy,
that you were finally mine,
we talked about life,
we talked for hours it seemed,
but then i was suddenly awaken,
from that beautiful dream,
Oh, how i wish you were mine, dear.

comments are welcome!
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:12 pm

I THINK YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL

you're beautiful, your're amazing,
and i cant explain completly what i feel,
people say my love for you is fake,
but, i know it's real,
I refuse to live without you,
I refuse to let you go,
I'll do anything for you,
I'll do anything to let you know,
You shine so brightly,
In my eyes,
You are the brightest star,
In my sky,

i hope someday you'll feel the same way i feel about you.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby creed4 » Fri Sep 01, 2006 2:51 pm

very good
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
creed4
 
Posts: 1162
Joined: Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:40 pm
Location: Meridian

Postby martinloyola » Fri Sep 01, 2006 8:34 pm

moving all of them, I remember feeling some of those emotions myself, years ago when I was just a freshman in college
Vash: In the end...he just couldn't kill a man in cold blood. His daughter's murder goes unpunished. Call him weak, but...it saved both of us.

want to tell your fantasy or science fiction story and need help, try here :cool:

Headbangers United :rock:
User avatar
martinloyola
 
Posts: 287
Joined: Wed Mar 03, 2004 8:08 pm
Location: Plainview TX

Postby Ryupower » Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:16 pm

I'm gonna cry, especially seeing that 2nd poem...
My DA

(\_/)
(O.o) Copy The Bunny Into Your Sig
(> <) Help Him Achieve World Domination...
User avatar
Ryupower
 
Posts: 1056
Joined: Sat May 14, 2005 8:55 pm
Location: Germany, currently

Postby Kokhiri Sojourn » Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:10 pm

There's almost a musical quality to your poetry - nice.
User avatar
Kokhiri Sojourn
 
Posts: 1215
Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2003 3:48 pm
Location: Waco

Postby fairyprincess90 » Tue Sep 05, 2006 2:44 pm

im glad you like them!
i have more on the way. ^_^
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:06 pm

You Walked Away

you sat there last night,
on the steps of the church,
and played your guitar,
as i closed my eyes,

i listened to your voice,
a tear slipped down my cheek,
i looked up at the stars,
shining in the sky,

i wished this moment,
would last forever,
but the moment flew,
so quickly by,

i watched you walk away,
oh how i wished you would stay,
i wanted to scream,
please come back to me,
you walked away, you walked away.

i watched your figure,
fade away,
as you walked off,
into the night,

i just sat there,
shivering in the cold,
hoping you'd glance back at me,
praying that you might,

i wanted to call to you,
to come back to me,
never leave,
hold me tight,

i watched you walk away,
oh how i wished you would stay,
i wanted to scream,
please come back to me,
you walked away, you walked away.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Mon Sep 25, 2006 5:54 pm

I WILL NEVER LOVE AGAIN

you, are the only one i love,
though you dont love me,
i will never love again,
for i only love thee,
my heart is meant for you,
i wish you would realize,
dont be blinded,
please love me before i die,
i'll never love again,
i only care for you,
you dont return my affection,
you never do,
because my heart has been shattered,
because you love her,
i will never love again,
i will never,
you, are the only one i love,
though you dont love me,
i will never love again,
for i only love thee.

i really do love a guy... and its really hard. i know its love, because i've prayed about it and god has shown me. i believe this guy is the one i'm going to marry, but, he doesnt know it yet... i know that sounds funny, but believe me... i know.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Fri Oct 06, 2006 5:34 pm

i wrote this today... i guess i'll call it IM IN LOVE


i see you standing there,
my heart lights on fire,
for your so beautiful to me,

and when you look my way,
my soul smiles,
i can hardly breath,

for im in love, i know its real,
nothing can change how i feel,
cause im in love, and i know its true,
i'm falling head of heels in love with you,

i know i always stare at you,
you catch my eye,
i find it hard not to look your way,

and when i see you,
you always seem to,
brighten my day,

for im in love, i know its real,
nothing can change how i feel,
cause im in love, and i know its true,
i'm falling head of heels in love with you.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:54 pm

blah.... Oooh that song i wrote up a bove.... i have an awesome piano part to it... and and... sunday i was practicing it on the churches piano (cuz they have an awesome piano!) and the guy i like (grant) heard me playing it and was like "wow. thats really good. do you hav words for it?" cuz i wasnt singing cuz i lost my voice.. and i was like "YEAH!" and he said when i get my voice back i should play it for him! woohoo! that rocks!

but yeah i'd appreciate some comments on my stuff !!!! ^_^
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Mon Oct 16, 2006 4:57 pm

this is kind of a love song... kind of.

She Needs You to Love Her

lying, crying in the shadow,
she longs for you to save her,
she feels unwanted, unloved,
and you hold the key,

alone she is crying,
because shes dying for you to care,
she sits in the shadows,
and breathes in the cold air,
she screams,
because she needs you to love her,
you need to wipe the tears from her eyes,
before she dies.

alone, in a house
on a cold winter's night,
she stands there weeping,
holding a knife,

alone she is crying,
because shes dying for you to care,
she sits in the shadows,
and breathes in the cold air,
she bleeds,
because she needs you to love her,
you need to wipe the tears from her eyes,
before she dies.

will you save her,
will you even care?
she reaches out to you,
but you're not there.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby fairyprincess90 » Thu Nov 09, 2006 4:30 pm

When You Come To Me

when you come to me,
sing me to sleep,
touch my face,
breathe into me,
press me to your lips,
suck out the pain,
cover me with your love,
to keep out the rain,
hold my hand,
let me feel your breath on my face,
lead me on,
to a better place,
show me love,
take my heart,
i dont want it,
just dont break it apart,
sing to me,
sweet lullaby,
kiss me and tell me,
not to cry,
when you come to me,
you'll see the pain in my eyes,
you'll see how long i've waited,
and you'll realize,
what you have missed.
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby SP1 » Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:49 pm

When You Come to Me.

This is really nice. Lots of good imagery there.
"Those who believe will be saved...so they say. Get it?"
Sister Rosette Christopher

Sorry ladies, already married to HitomiYuriko , but it took both our efforts to come up with daughter Althaia

Please use the Haibane Renmei Lesson Plan

MOES: Can't scroll this.
User avatar
SP1
 
Posts: 861
Joined: Wed Aug 17, 2005 6:30 am
Location: Kentucky

Postby fairyprincess90 » Sun Nov 26, 2006 1:15 pm

Love Makes The Most Beautiful Music

sitting alone,
with the radio,
softly singing,
on my own,
lonely and wishing,
this house could be filled music again,
silently screaming,
is this how it's going to end,

dance with me,
fill this place with happiness just one more time,
kiss me just once,
and i swear i'll be fine,
i'm so tired of single notes,
i want a symphony,
Love makes the most beautiful music,
will you write music with me?

the fire fades,
to just a glow,
and outside these walls,
the world's covered in snow,
i twirl in the moonlight,
will you come join me?
and we will dance,
until morning,

dance with me,
fill this place with happiness just one more time,
kiss me just once,
and i swear i'll be fine,
i'm so tired of single notes,
i want a symphony,
Love makes the most beautiful music,
will you write music with me?


tell me what you think!
Image

[color="Magenta"]www.bethmarie.org[/color]

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[color="DarkRed"][SIZE="3"]My ♥ belongs to TimothyMichael[/SIZE][/color]
User avatar
fairyprincess90
 
Posts: 549
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 4:00 pm
Location: a house

Postby creed4 » Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:04 pm

Good but a little sad longing actully
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
creed4
 
Posts: 1162
Joined: Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:40 pm
Location: Meridian


Return to Writing

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 230 guests