Alright here's a play that I am writing. These are the first two scenes:
-Scene 001-
A kid named Matthew sits in his room talking to himself about his homework, and how frustrated he is on it.
Matthew: “I can’t figure this problem out!â€
Another Day in Life
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Another Day in Life
"So it begins" - Theodon, King of Rohan
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Heaven's Cloud - Posts: 563
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I don't know, but I will be writing more in a short period of time.
"So it begins" - Theodon, King of Rohan
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-Scene 003-
Matthew’s Teacher: “Did anyone finish their war assignment?â€
Matthew’s Teacher: “Did anyone finish their war assignment?â€
"So it begins" - Theodon, King of Rohan
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Heaven's Cloud - Posts: 563
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I think you have a great idea. I think it would be great if you were a little more descriptive on where everyone is in the story. I'll pm you later since I'm about to log off. Good job so far.^-~
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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