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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Mon Aug 07, 2006 5:28 am

Hmm...
I went a few places with this.



"Rough Landing, Fire In the Bomb-Bay Doors, Marty We're Going Down!"
*OR, a lovely little poem that has absolutely nothing to do with the title.*

*OR, a lovely grand title that sadly mistook this poem for a John Wayne movie.*

*OR another useless attempt to get a laugh out of people by inserting subtitles that have absolutely nothing to do with the poem, like this:


*Blue People.*


*You See what I mean?*



*Absolutely Dispicable.*

*And Now, on with the Show!*




*Just a Moment...*



*Waiting...*


*AND THERE!*


*No, wait...*


*Oh, this is rubbish. I'm leaving and going to bermuda!*


And presumably, the Author does just that.


...



The End.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Mon Aug 07, 2006 6:11 pm

the fact that no one has yet commented on this tragic assault on the oculars strikes me as one of the great tragedies of humanity.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Mon Aug 07, 2006 6:14 pm

Sorry, I've read it but I just don't understand what your trying to say.
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Mon Aug 07, 2006 8:00 pm

that fact is one of the few things that give me hope for this generation.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Anna Mae » Sun Aug 13, 2006 1:27 pm

I am still confused by the esoteric nature of your comments. I would enjoy further explanation. Your formatting of the poem is also odd. What's with all of the asterisks?
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[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:

“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Sun Aug 13, 2006 8:49 pm

I'm sorry.




But the Existential qualities of this poem prevent me from explaining it.


You know, I could be revealing ultimate truth to your tiny, tiny, tiny minds.



Or I could just be jerking your chain for giggles.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby QtheQreater » Sun Aug 13, 2006 10:01 pm

*laughs*

I like it...

And I shall put some of it in my signature...haha!
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