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GodSent: Christian Fiction

PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:33 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Disclaimer: This is purely Christian Fiction. This story has angels in it, and I am not sure this is really how they act. I don't claim this is how things really are in heaven. This is just a fun way that I imagined them acting. If you have any advice about them please let me know!

That said, please enjoy I will be posting two chapters at a time! Thanks!

(apparently my character size is ginormous..please bear with me as I post these two chapters...and please don't let the size scare you! I am trying to make this story as fun as possible)

Teaser:

Darcy is an average high school girl, with problems just like everyone else. She has parents that often to busy to pay attention to her, she doesn’t make friends well, and her nonpopular status leaves her often spending time alone. One day she cries out to God to send someone that would be her friend.
God answers her prayers, and sends one of his angels, Nathaniel, as a guide. Nathaniel finds he has his work cut out for him, and living as a human won’t be easy. Will Darcy change and blossom into the flower God created her to be?

God Sent Characters: Main Characters

Darcy Calloway
Age: 17
Appearance: Shoulder length black hair, with green eyes. Not the most attractive..but not ugly either...
Height: 5'6
Accessories: Cross Necklace that her mom gave her.
Bio: Darcy is really lonely, her parents do love her, but they are constantly working to meet ends meet. All she wants is a friend.
Personality: majorly meek. She hates seeing others in trouble..but she is also really shy and it takes a lot of courage for her to say what’s on her mind. She is also very lonely and has few friends.

Nathaniel

Age: ???? (looks 18 as a human)
appearance: Humanoid angel form (Because I just don’t know what angels REALLY look like): Long blond hair, white robes and white pants. White wings.
Human: Short blond hair, bright blue eyes.
Height: 5'9
Bio: Nathaniel is an Angel, who receives an order to help Darcy. He is sent to earth as a human to help her not feel so depressed about herself. In Paradise he is in a band called “The Band of Angels.â€

PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:34 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Chapter One: Darcy’s Dilemma


“Good morning, Tennison City It’s Monday morning and you are listening to TENI Radio, this is your host Andrew Dalton. Now for the announcements. The Tennison High Timber Wolves begin their classes today—“ â€

PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:37 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Chapter 2: Nathaniel’s Charge


Nathaniel stretched His wings as he sat up from basking in Paradise. “Lord, you sure know how to make things beautiful.â€

PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:39 pm
by ChristianKitsune
“You all did well.â€

PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:47 am
by Destroyer2000
Awesome story.

PostPosted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:54 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Thank you!! more is coming soon!

PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 6:19 pm
by Sakura15
EEEEEEEEEE!!!! This is so awesome!! I love it Onee-chan!! I can't wait for more!

I love how you describe everything, it's awesome.

PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 6:32 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Sankyuuu Sakuraimotochan!!

Updaaaaaaaateeee

PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 6:38 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Chapter 3: The Devious Plot

Gabriel sighed as he looked over The Lord’s Creation. His face was tight with concern as watched the world below him.
“You seem troubled my friend.â€

PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 6:42 pm
by Sakura15
ooooo! and the plot thickens!!

Bah, forget it demons..you will never win :P :lol:

PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 10:02 am
by Destroyer2000
Nice...very nice.

PostPosted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 12:33 am
by ChristianKitsune
Chapter Four: Confrontation and Answered Prayers

Nathaniel’s eyes opened suddenly and he sat up from his bed. He had a feeling that something wasn’t right. Something dark had just been here. He shivered and rubbed his hands on his arms. “Wow..being human sure has it’s draw backs.â€

PostPosted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 5:03 am
by Sakura15
Yaaay! more of the story!! ^-^ good job!!

PostPosted: Mon Jul 03, 2006 11:18 am
by allpayedatcross
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! YYYYEEEEHHHHHAAAHHHHH!!!

I hope to see the DB in this!

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:27 am
by ChristianKitsune
^_^ I am glad you like this!!

but what is DB?

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 4:24 pm
by rocklobster
I like it. Good job so far. BTW, did you know that all the angels mentioned in the Bible have names ending in "el"? The el means "of God."

PostPosted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 7:47 pm
by allpayedatcross
DB...DEMON BUSTERS!!! I would love to see like when the demons are about to do somethign arch angles coming down and attacking.....but ANYHOW.....>.>.....Yeah I like this story! XD.

PostPosted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 10:48 am
by ChristianKitsune
O_O really I didn't know that Rocklobuster... All but one of my angels ends with that!..oooh

See I thought I was getting repetitive...^^;

APATC, I was actually planning on doing something like that...

BIIIG UPDATE! *large Chapter)

PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 4:23 am
by ChristianKitsune
I am sorry for the size of this update (two posts long) I dunno if you guys consider that a good or a bad thing ^^; um...yeah.. I hope you enjoy this one!!

Chapter Five: Adjustments


The bell signaling the beginning of the school day rang, and students rushed in before the end of it’s chime. Teachers glared at the students and to their dismay, handed the disgruntled delinquents their tardy slips and sent them to their seats.
Darcy, however, was early as usual, and was one of the only students who wasn’t late. Her classmates glared at her and whispered to each other. She felt like melting into her seat and disappearing.
After a few minutes the principal walked in with the boy that Darcy saw earlier. She sat straight up and listened as he was introduced.
“This is Nathan Lyte.â€

PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 4:24 am
by ChristianKitsune
As Nathaniel neared his next class, he felt someone grab him by the shoulders. With a cry he was slammed against the locker. His eyes widened with the shock of the pain he was feeling from his shoulders, face, and back. He hadn’t felt anything like this before. Another downside to living amongst humans. Nathaniel lifted his eyes to see the one responsible. But with his face plastered to the cold metal surface of the locker he couldn’t see much. That, and it seemed the boy was wearing some sort of mask.
“Lyte is it?â€

PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 8:58 am
by Sakura15
WooooT!! awesomeness!!! ^^ the size of the update is awesome! XD

PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:20 pm
by kaze
yay thanks for the double update~

PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:59 am
by ChristianKitsune
thank you both for reading!!^_^ Next chapter will be finished either this weekend or early next week.

thanks for sticking with me... I hope to do some art for this story soon...

PostPosted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:38 am
by allpayedatcross
ME LIKE!!!! ^_^!!! The size of the update was perfect!!!

PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 6:17 am
by Nami
*stares* :wow!: I loved it CR-chan!! I was so sucked in I barely noticed my mom talking to me!!! Keep up the great work!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:17 pm
by ChristianKitsune
Thank you guys for reading this!! I hope to have some written by the end of the school week!!

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:44 am
by ChristianKitsune
(LOOOONG Update guys.. this chapter is like 4 pages long on my word processor page...please enjoy! and I aplogize for waiting so long. I have been designing the charcters and I just got sidetracked with school as well.)

Chapter Six: Friends?

Darcy approached her locker as the bell rang, signaling the end of the school day. Amidst the happy chatter of her classmates, she found herself distracted. That Nathaniel guy was a strange person, how was he able to pick up on her emotions so fast? She sighed and pulled her messenger bag on her should and shut her locker.
“I must have been obvious today,â€

PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:45 am
by ChristianKitsune
~***~

Darcy pushed aside the curtain and watched as Nathaniel placed his hands in his pockets. What is wrong with me? He probably wanted to talk or something. Why is it, that I keep doing this? I’m so pathetic! She thought to herself and closed the curtains and walked up to her room.

~***~
Nathaniel sighed as he opened the door and stepped inside. “Ok. I think I should give her a bit more time. I might be rushing things a bit.â€

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:41 am
by Destroyer2000
Awesome update. You have a bad tendency to leave us wanting more, you realize that?

PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:51 am
by ChristianKitsune
^^; I am sorry!!! I hope that is a good thing Destroyer!! I hope to have this updated by the end of the month..but...I am gonna be a little busy...so we will have to see...