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True Love

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:33 pm
by DaughterOfZion
poem from when i was younger so its probably not as good as the poem i posted on caa before.

i am true love
giving hope to those who feel me
healing those who need me
giving life to those alone.

I am true loce
iam caring
never straying
pure and true ill never leave you.

I'm that eternal promise
that first sweet kiss
the realization that someone
loves you for who you are.

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:42 pm
by fairyprincess90
cute. ^_^ luff it!

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:50 pm
by DaughterOfZion
:) yaaay! thanks beth!

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:23 pm
by Anna Mae
I assume that in the first line of the second stanza you mean love instead of loce?

Other than that, cute.

PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 4:15 pm
by DaughterOfZion
*takes imagenary tour group through thread* as you can see the writer cannot type or spell.
i could fix it but then i couldnt type what i just did.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 5:56 pm
by fairyprincess90
i still like it alot!

PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 6:02 pm
by DaughterOfZion
thank again beth.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 7:10 pm
by Linksquest
Aww! I like it a lot! you did a very nice job with giving examples of what you think true love to be. Great work! :thumb: