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Hey guys!
For awhile, I have wanted to finish my book, I stopped when my grandmother became sick last year and haven't picked it up since her death...here is the opening sentences to Hope Springs Eternal...tell me if I should go on or delete.
Chapter 1

Ryoko's Leave

Ryoko ran though the rugged forest : jumping trees and tripping , scrapping herself badly, with blood running down her arms and legs , yet she ignored the

pain . One thing raced through her mind :

Ryoko : “ I just want to get away !â€

[quote="Phantom_Sorano"]Hey guys!
For awhile, I have wanted to finish my book, I stopped when my grandmother became sick last year and haven't picked it up since her death...here is the opening sentences to Hope Springs Eternal...tell me if I should go on or delete.
Chapter 1

Ryoko's Leave

Ryoko ran though the rugged forest : jumping trees and tripping , scrapping herself badly, with blood running down her arms and legs , yet she ignored the

pain . One thing raced through her mind :

Ryoko : “ I just want to get away !â€

Go ahead and post more of your story.

an intriguing opener... I would like to see more.