Aldean Chronicles - Episode 29: The Walking Dead

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Aldean Chronicles - Episode 29: The Walking Dead

Postby starwarsboy90 » Sun Oct 09, 2005 1:29 pm

Hey Everyone,

Here is the latest Episode, Episode 29: The Walking Dead. This Episode basically introduces a brand new minion of Ketral's, Seth of Adorous. He wields a Deviant Weapon and uses a power ring, nothing Ayden Argadon, Sakura and their traveling companions can't handle, right? Well, the difference between him and all of Ketral's other minions, is that he is her first Soldier of Death, the undead. Can Sakura, Ayden and the Twins overcome this new villian? Find out in Aldean Chronicles - Episode 29: The Walking Dead...
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Postby starwarsboy90 » Thu Oct 27, 2005 10:19 am

Opinions are of course appreciated.
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Postby Dunedan » Thu Oct 27, 2005 8:45 pm

The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Postby shooraijin » Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:53 am

Definitely not appropriate, Dunedan. Watch it.
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Postby starwarsboy90 » Mon Oct 31, 2005 10:39 am

Opinions of people who read the work are appreciated. Don't diss for no reason, not unless you desire to be treated the same, especiall you, Dunedan, since you obviously haven't read any of the material. Thanks for mediating, Shoorajin
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Postby Dunedan » Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:50 pm

I'm sorry, I wasn't attacking you. I was being sarcastic, a pattern I often fall into. I'm sorry for offending anyone and I have edited the post. For the record, starwarsboy90 is the next Hemingway, and you should all read his stuff.
The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Postby starwarsboy90 » Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:01 am

Lol, ok, not that kind of opinion others,lol. So, what's CBFC anyways?
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Postby Dunedan » Wed Nov 02, 2005 10:29 am

Oh, its the Chris Burkett Fan Club. Long story, kind of, but one day I was just sitting next to my friend Chris, and since I really respect his sense of humor and smarts, I told him he should have a an club. So I started emailing random people and telling them about my plans to take over the world. Those plans eventually involved android hobos and lawn gnomes, which prompted me to write a story, which is in this forum. The current resting place for the CBFC is on my xanga, which is in my sig.

I haven't actually read all of your story, but from what I have read I like your style. And if you drew that guy on the front, your drawing style reminds me of one of my friends. Rock on.
The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Postby Hitokiri » Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:53 pm

One question - from what basis do you derive your names from?
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Postby starwarsboy90 » Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:51 am

What basis? Hmmmm, good question. Personally, it's either pure randomness or it actually has something to do with the story/theme. Metaphors and name meanings I suppose is the key, but who knows,lol.
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Postby Hitokiri » Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:59 am

I think it would be intresting for your characters to have some meaning behind thier names - subtle to the point no one can se ethat but it's there.
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Postby starwarsboy90 » Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:38 am

Well, a couple of them do. However, as the series progesses, more and more characters are added to the series, while some of the characters die, like Daine for example. Nice Avatar, where did you get it?
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