Death to Self.

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Death to Self.

Postby wilson1112000 » Sun Jan 16, 2005 3:56 pm

This is a story that is ment for a competition. I would be honered if you would tell me how you, fellow members of Christian Anime Alliance, like this. I hope you enjoy, and that this will give glory to our God.











Death to Self
By Charles Wilson




My mind has been clouded by hate and malice. My heart feels hardened and heavy. I felt like a great, numbing pain is in my soul. I can not live with it! The darkness has stacked to surround me, cutting into my consciousness.
The enemy has captured me, and I have no hope. What can I do? What can I do?!
This is the most I have been desperate. I cannot think and can only feel guilt now. Where is the answer?
Then I remember it. Something my friend told me. Close your eyes and pray. I did just that. “Lord, here I am! A foul fool! My heart feels pain; my mind is becoming maddened by my sins! Come back to me, and forgive me, my Lord! I do not deserve it, but please forgive me!â€
Praise the Lord your God with all your heart, all your soul, and all your might, for that is what we were created for.
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We've got to speed things up in this hotel. Chef, if a guest orders a three-minute egg, give it to him in two minutes.
If he orders a two-minute egg, give it to him in one minute.
If he orders a one-minute egg, give him a chicken and let him work it out for himself.


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You decide.
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Postby c-girl » Sun Jan 16, 2005 7:15 pm

>^.^< That's very good Wilson! You were very descriptive! Good job!
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Postby wilson1112000 » Sun Jan 16, 2005 7:18 pm

Thanks!
Praise the Lord your God with all your heart, all your soul, and all your might, for that is what we were created for.
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We've got to speed things up in this hotel. Chef, if a guest orders a three-minute egg, give it to him in two minutes.
If he orders a two-minute egg, give it to him in one minute.
If he orders a one-minute egg, give him a chicken and let him work it out for himself.


Groucho in A Night in Casablanca (movie)
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Chinese Finger trap: noun 1. A puzzle that is supposed to test ones ability at problem solveing. or 2. The manifistation of Satan in a cardborad tube.

You decide.
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Postby SilverFang » Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:52 pm

you did a very good job on that story. you will do a very good job at the speech meets. I give it 2 thumbs up. I would give you more but I only have 2 thumbs. lol.

keep up the good work. now I just wont to here you read it. well until then.
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Postby SereneDolphin » Sun Jan 30, 2005 12:31 pm

Good luck with the speech contest. This is awesome. Spiritually realistic, since I think that it could be the story of someone out there.
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Postby wilson1112000 » Sun Jan 30, 2005 12:37 pm

Thank you, Dolphin. And you to, Spartan. I had some changes made to it, giveing the main charicter a little more of a discription on his past. I will probably have to edit this to match the newer version. It all depends on if anyone else is willing to listen to the restless rambleings of a crazy man.
Praise the Lord your God with all your heart, all your soul, and all your might, for that is what we were created for.
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We've got to speed things up in this hotel. Chef, if a guest orders a three-minute egg, give it to him in two minutes.
If he orders a two-minute egg, give it to him in one minute.
If he orders a one-minute egg, give him a chicken and let him work it out for himself.


Groucho in A Night in Casablanca (movie)
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Chinese Finger trap: noun 1. A puzzle that is supposed to test ones ability at problem solveing. or 2. The manifistation of Satan in a cardborad tube.

You decide.
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Postby Anna Mae » Mon Jan 31, 2005 1:22 pm

An interesting writing. I enjoyed reading it.
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“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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