Poetry by the Magekind

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Poetry by the Magekind

Postby Magekind » Sun Nov 07, 2004 2:56 pm

Yes, I probably should use my old thread, but it's gone and forgotten by now. Instead, I will use this new thread to put my poetry into CAA.

First, a little interview with the intellect:

To Try To Write

In the darkness, deepened hiding
Stays my mind, seeks now to write
Of the things bear worthy writing
Of the things seen in the light.
Seeking out the grandest beauties
Searching for most subtle thoughts
Short reprieve from daily duties
Taking creativity in spots.
Making words, forming pictures
From one taken, lets one live;
Judging numbers, quoting scriptures
One is life, one must give.
Yet now I think I've lost my line
But I'll just quit, and we'll be fine.


A short stumbling there in the middle, but overall a smooth thought flow. Or at least, in my opinion. Now let's have your opinions.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Sat Nov 13, 2004 4:13 pm

Alright, since that last one didn't go over very well, maybe I can slip another one past without anyone noticing.
Just To See Your Smile

Outside the broken structure,
He sits with blood-stained hands.
And waits for things to come about,
Return unto his lands.
He goes before the officers
Who praise him for his style;
Still he'd give it all up
For a little while,
Just to see your smile.
He with the others now commune,
With unprecedented speed,
His life takes on a softer tune,
"What does my brother need?"
He lives to make life easy,
To go the extra mile;
And still he would yet
Give roof and tile,
Just to see your smile.
To know he's not forgotten,
To be with you for a while
And, just to see your smile


I would tell the story behind this poem, but Kanrad would probably give me a lesson concerning just exactly how mortal I truly am. I'm not ready for the hard learning just yet.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Hari » Wed Nov 17, 2004 10:30 am

Hey, good stuff!

You actually remind me of a gentleman in my Honors English evening class. Do you teach martial arts, by any chance? (and if you ARE the gentleman from English, feel free not to ID yourself)

Deep poetry, stream of consciousness-type stuff. Cool. I can't write poetry for anything, I'm a prose kid all the way. I like short prose, though, bordering on unrhyming poetry.

So... Write more! Do you have any prose up? I should look, but I'm feeling lazy today (I'm exhausted). Feel free to pm me with links, or just chatter! I'd love to talk shop with another writer!
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Postby Magekind » Thu Nov 18, 2004 1:53 pm

To put it in one sentence, I do not teach martial arts.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Hari » Fri Nov 19, 2004 10:29 am

Aha, poetry only, then.

(makes me feel better, because the martial arts instructor is a wee bit on the violent side!)

Did your one sentence, by tacet implication, mean that you do not have prose up?

With less verbosity,
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Postby Magekind » Sat Nov 20, 2004 5:34 pm

Stillholde Grove

Still stands the tree, and stiller the rock.
O, hearest they not the lifeless man's talk?
Are they deaf to the winds, whose sad, low song,
Informs us yet, of ages long gone?
Nay, it be not so! The mourn they heed,
and know how the fighting man's soul was freed.
They know the wind, its sad, low cry,
that tells of nations who soon shall die.
And though they stand with breathless still,
these memories in them forever they seal.
So gone in the future, as soon in the past,
The hundreds of years they've been blessed to last,
and thousands they have yet to see,
'Til earth shall pass to eternity.


I think I posted this one on the other thread, but here it is again now.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Mon Nov 29, 2004 1:16 am

The Unwilling Guest

Three men 'round the table sat,
around the table, they did,
They saw one standing mostly out,
and, "Enter, Sir," they bid.
Reluctantly he forward stepped,
and gained a foot or two,
and finally, he answered them,
"My friends, I know not you."
"O, be it so!" they quickly cried,
"You need not be afraid!
For we are friends, we have not lied,
And sit to speak and trade!"
Yet still he stood, and waited there,
and would not come and join,
and he said, said he with patient air,
"I knowest not your coin."
"Ah, what of that!" the young men spoke,
"You know the language yet!"
The man stood still, yet silence broke,
"Mesirs, I've naught to bet."
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Mon Nov 29, 2004 1:19 am

Another poem, this one a bit of a stumble.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Wed Dec 08, 2004 2:45 pm

Look, a poetry thread, with my name on it, bearing many poems that I have written. Just for lack of else to do, I'm going to post a bit more.

Nothing to Die For

It was a highlight, was a time
When all these thoughts were free.
Mortalities now fill my mind
Nor leave of haunting me.
I couldn't bear to see this pain
Which now I'm made a part
My will is now a hollow grain
It died then with my heart.

Nothing-
Nothing to die for.
To see a sunrise
Turn to set
To live a day
Just to forget that there is nothing-
Nothing to die for.

As now a victor proud I stand
Nothing is real to me now.
Still no regret for the blood on my hands
And nothing to get me to show.
Wonder ye fiends how I made myself thus
Or ponder your doom yet ye more?
All in one sentence I'll give it ye just
In truth there is nothing-

Nothing-
Nothing to die for.
To see a sunrise
Turn to set
To live a day
Just to forget still there is nothing-
Nothing to die for.

Nothing-
Nothng to die for.
To live in a cloud
Of misgiven lies
To come from that shroud
And think I realize I have nothing-
Nothing to die for.

Live for-
Die for.


Don't go getting any wrong ideas. This poem was inspired by a circumstance given in the Nafa-Talamh story.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Sun Dec 12, 2004 3:50 pm

And a bit more. This is fun. A nice, private corner to come and put all my thoughts.

Holding My Hand

I kneel here in wonder
Has it been so from the start;
Is the pain that you're feeling
Like the pain in my heart?
Is it true that I have questioned
Everything I ever had,
Just to see the things unmentioned
Let me think I'm going mad.

When you're holding my hand,
I feel so alive.
The dreams I've had forever
Let my imaginations thrive.
The truths given help me to stand,
To know that you're holding my hand.

The enemy among us
That brought you this pain,
Is no longer above us
With all that we've gained.
To feel that we're growing
To know that it's real;
To believing and knowing
To the strengths I appeal.

Holding my hand!
Will to survive!
To bask in your smile,
All the good that's alive.
And work with me, I'll understand
I know that you're holding my hand.

Never dreamed that I'd cry,
But this is goodbye;
Now I understand.

You're still holding my hand.
When you look from above,
Remember your love;
The things that will help me to stand.
The life that I live
With this second chance you give
Now I understand
And know that you're holding my hand.

And know you're still holding my hand.


Another poem inspired by the Nafa-Talamh story. This one is primarily about the events occuring during Kaelan's little excursion into the Ronin base on Nafa-Talamh.
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Postby Magekind » Fri Jan 07, 2005 3:55 pm

One for the risen
One for the fallen.
One for the bliss
One for the call.
Given a moment
Given a try
What a man would do
Just to survive.
The life's blood runs freely
I can only pray
That I will see
Yet another day.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Sun Jan 16, 2005 3:22 pm

This one for a friend in an interesting situation.

Near To Me

Is this only me
Are we falling apart
Are there no ties to the one
Who is closest to my heart?

No longer a stranger
Can you hear my plea?
In a life full of danger
Come near to me.

To have only seen your smile
Hear the softness in your voice
It isn't only you now
You make my heart rejoice

Say it aloud
Speak the truth and see
Through the immense and seething crowd
You're the one that's near to me.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Kanrad » Fri Mar 04, 2005 1:04 pm

Do you still do these, Magekind?
-Self control is the greatest power posessed by mankind-

BE EMPOWERED!
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Postby girlninja » Sat Mar 05, 2005 1:27 pm

i'm very impressed Magekind...tho of course i could not expect nothing less...
lol Hari...i'm a martial arts instructor we are not violent! :P well ok maybe a little :P

anyways,
you have a unique style...personally i find your first poem interesting.
it had a nice flow and i think could go very deep...very nice

u have a nice structure and can keep a nice rhyme in your poetry that i never am able to do lol but i suppose thoughts come out into different ways ^^

i am looking forward to reading more of your poetry and i am also looking forward to learning from it as well *Bow* *ninja poof out* heh everyone has to have a trademark i suppose
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Postby Magekind » Tue Mar 08, 2005 2:35 pm

The Rainbow In The Rain

The sun shines brightest at the time of noon
At the moment when you're happily alive
Somehow we know that moment's passing soon
And then you'll have to struggle to survive.

Still can't you see the glory in the pain?
I've never seen a rainbow without rain.

Just 'cause you can't see the light, still it is true
Somewhere someone is smiling just for you.
And though the rain's above you still look high
It's somehow much more pleasant in the sky.

Then smile and see the glory in the pain;
I've never seen a rainbow without rain.

Don't give yourself the rain without a rainbow
It's when joys are past and troubles come the colors glow.


Still try and see the glory in the pain
I've never seen a rainbow without rain.

"Nevertheless, Thy will be done"
In pain our savior cried;
Then on that night upon the cross
For us he died.

He glorified His Father, though in pain
He must've seen the rainbow in the rain
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Tue Mar 22, 2005 2:16 pm

girlninja wrote:i'm very impressed Magekind...tho of course i could not expect nothing less...
lol Hari...i'm a martial arts instructor we are not violent! :P well ok maybe a little :P

anyways,
you have a unique style...personally i find your first poem interesting.
it had a nice flow and i think could go very deep...very nice

u have a nice structure and can keep a nice rhyme in your poetry that i never am able to do lol but i suppose thoughts come out into different ways ^^

i am looking forward to reading more of your poetry and i am also looking forward to learning from it as well *Bow* *ninja poof out* heh everyone has to have a trademark i suppose


Thanks, girlninja. Structure and rhyme, unfortunately, almost seems to take precedence. I also have been doing this really weird song-thing that I've been trying to get away from. I'm writing poems, not songs.

Anyway, I will. One of these days.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:20 pm

A Promise

A young and vibrant soul
Still climbing to the top
Like the stories that were told
They have a power that won't stop
When he was near
Life just got brighter
But now a tear
Catches the light and
After all these years
A tiny ray of hope
Washes away with the rain
Leaving this soul in the darkness
Alone.

The horrid news
The ruthless truth
Placed a greater burden
On this glowing youth
And through the years
The horizon as was planned
By this child's eyes
Was unendingly scanned
Still nothing stirred
Not the faintest gleam
As time moved on
Refusing to flow with the stream.

More years still passed
Gone is the peak
The best time of life
Yet still a youth at heart
This child seeks.
There'll be no rest
No lasting happiness
'Til he returns
Though the dust this soul has claimed
The child that still yearns
With a heart that has been maimed.

Now hear this truth
Though the passions rise
In this tender youth
Place you no lies
His promise never meant
To make such great impact
Yet now the years are spent
And there is one who
Willingly, longingly, sincerely
Waits for you.


This one is just as spontaneous as my sudden accidental discovery that Kalen's "social experiments" weren't all as fruitless as he'd hoped.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Death of the Magekind

Postby Magekind » Sat May 21, 2005 5:39 pm

1:
A purpose once was granted
A path had once been marked.
A God stretched out his hand and said,
"My son, hear ye, yea, hark"

Long since the time is passing
The line seems now so blurred
Our life so short in lasting as we've
Forgotten what we've heard.

Chorus:
Death-
Of the Magekind
The End
To its flight

The power-
That kept it moving
has been put to rest
Tonight

2:
The blur and streak of motion
Is still with this new scene
And yet through the commotion
Was this end not unforeseen

Still it seems as though it lasted
Through the hardest trials yet
Its faith has to be blasted
Know the demons don't forget

(Chorus)

3:
And so
With the passing of life
To know
All the truth and the right
Become
One with your philosophy
A passing, short-lived entity
the end.

(Chorus)
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Mon Jul 11, 2005 4:54 pm

I know it's evil of me, but I'm bumping these in case I ever use them again.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Wed Jul 13, 2005 2:30 pm

A little warped reality
A lens that puts you close to me
This visual anomaly
May not be so untrue.
We've worked so well
It's natural, I tell
You; can you hear the bell
Like I do?

No, don't believe everyithing you see
But close your eyes and count to three
And the illusions
Will disappear
While the reality
Beomes more clear
And you will see what is
Was
Meant to be.

Like an endless hall of mirrors
Works my heart reflecting tears
Of joy; to think that all these years
I couldn't see.
Still just a little patience give
We'll fight the good fight and we'll live
To be forever just with you and me.

Don't believe everyithing you see
But close your eyes and count to three
And the illusions
Will disappear
While the reality
Beomes more clear
And you will see what is
Was
Meant to be.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby girlninja » Thu Jul 14, 2005 4:08 am

YAY mage posts again!!! hey bro this is awesome ^_^ a little different in rhythm then you usually do ^^ very very very good ^^
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Postby Magekind » Sun Jul 17, 2005 3:05 pm

Yes, I apologize, I've been gone for forever. Honestly, I wrote Death of the Magekind thinking it was going to be my last one, but I just had to come back.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Thu Sep 29, 2005 3:48 pm

The Thief's Trial

Now rise the sun on prison scum,
and ye behold this thief.
Who thru the night all pity-like
plead thus unto his king:
"My life ye spare, for wrongs I've done
not for my sake nor good;
But for my ailing friends I've sought
this cursing men call food.
And lo, I'd but have kept my paths,
and not have gone astray,
Had not the guards and keepers-of-law
called out my name that day.
And follow certainly I must,
lest had they found my den;
'Twas not a case of wanderlust
that put me in thy pen.
Now see my folly, hear my plea,
my importuning cry;
That my dear friends again I see
Before the time we die."

Then still the court and silence fell
The words considered he
Who oversees his land and still
Unto his people king.
"Tonight a-prison shall ye rest,
Remaining there the day.
And on the morrow, acid test
Your loyalties display.
For child mine has streetward moved
And at the inn she'll sleep
Now bid unto you, ere you've proved
In safety she ye'll keep."
Now silence falling once again,
Broken by moving chains.
Unto his rest he went to keep,
And fear the coming day.

Now rise the sun, as once I've said
Upon this lowly thief;
And lo he rises to his fate
And to his promise keep.
The day now passes, hot and dry
The thief his charge well keeps;
And now the darkness coming nigh
And monarch's child sleeps.
Still at the inn our hero stands
He watches at her door,
And keeps the outer walls as well
His promise keeps, no more.
Then in the night, a wail arise
From in the darkened room
This hero unto charge now flies,
And sees not but his doom.
The night obscures, but not so much
as to never give a glimpse.
Our hero only can he cry,
And curse those evil imps.

No greater effort could he give,
No more could he exert
To ascertain that she would live,
Returning home unhurt.
But now he kneels beside her bed,
Her fate to soon be known
To pine for one that now is dead
Thus coming soon his own.
And rises now the morrow's sun,
This thief back in his cell.
The king's tears dry, and now he comes
To give the sentence fell.
Need more be said? There rolls the head
Of this misfortuned thief.
Who gave his best, but now is dead
For causing royal grief.
Too long have I now taken
To tell you of this thing,
Yet we know that he'll find justice
In the courts of a greater King.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby girlninja » Fri Sep 30, 2005 4:34 am

*claps* welcome back bro

Nice prose ^^ I like it a lot and though this may be considered morbid found it slightly amusing. I liked it alot and as always look forward to reading more ^_^
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ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

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Postby Magekind » Sat Oct 01, 2005 10:07 am

My next poem is going to be a treatise on that. Almost anyone that tries to really get into it always gets lost. Although, seriously, it's a shallow poem. And yes, it was fun. I must be morbid too.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby Magekind » Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:11 am

Sorry, the treatise never happened. This is to remind myself not to get too set.

I see a little prairie
'Neath a dark and heavy cloud
I see a little creature
Voice displeasure now aloud
I see a little sunshine
Though I feel a little rain
It's all these little visions
Make me wonder if I'm sane.

I tell myself I'm talking
To some other person now
And the vision in the mirror
Strangely looks exactly how
They all say I appear,
But it's another entity
Because that slab of glass could never
Show inside of me.

I see a little prairie
'Neath a bright and sunny sky
I see a little angel
Figuratively fly
I see a little heaven
Though I feel a little pain
Yet I know that here beside me
Is what keeps all of me sane.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby creed4 » Tue Feb 14, 2006 9:16 am

Very good poems! I notice that many of them use an abab rhyme skeam in them. Nice, That is a feat I know it's very hard to do. Most of my poems are freeverse. Anyway good work
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
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Postby Magekind » Wed Feb 15, 2006 3:40 am

Actually, it's generally xAxA, with x being no rhyme.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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Postby creed4 » Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:07 pm

I see.
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
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Postby Magekind » Wed May 03, 2006 3:53 pm

Will to keep an illusion
You can't justify
The game you keep on playing
Until something dies
To live upon the outskirts
Of reality
Is summoning a danger
Though you cannot see
How it breaks through the surface
Like a tempered glass
And you start to realize
Exactly what you asked
For there's just one turn
In this old wheel
That's made for you,
You've got to feel
The path to Heaven
Cut by the walker's hand
And your shoulder to the wheel
Is the tallest you can stand.

There's just one place
In reality
One place for you,
One place to be
One end of time
One call to rise
One chance to break
Your chain of lies

List to your heart
Hark to your mind
You know there's truth
Only you can find
Bring out the best
There is in you
Now comes the test
You must stay true

This isn't real!
Again we say
How can you wait
What makes you stay
The truth has never
Aught to hide
It's so much better
On the other side.
There's deeper there
Than you'll create
In your fantasies
Are why you're late
To come unbound
From hell's old clasp
Take the iron rod
With an iron grasp
Look to the light
The scriptures give
And know for yourself
Why Jesus lives.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.

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