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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:23 pm

“Facesâ€
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Authority3000 » Tue Aug 15, 2006 10:48 pm

*wipes tears from eyes*

I'm not sure what it means at all times, but it is quite emotional, indeed.
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Postby Anna Mae » Wed Aug 16, 2006 6:23 pm

At first I was trying to piece together a conversation, but I soon abandoned that effort. Good poem. I really like it. It sends a message that our society needs to hear.
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]

[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:

“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Postby Chu-Chu » Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:53 am

So.....good.........
I really like your poems. :)
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