my first posted poem

Postby **DaughterOfZion** » Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:19 pm

any comments?

Remembering you

I stare at the sky on a cool September night,
gazing up at the stars as they twinkle in the sky,
remembering you.

I watch as the crowd goes by wrapped up in their daily lives.
While I walk alone wishing you were still on this earth with me.

I sit alone in my room, music filling my ears.
Remembering the things that you taught me, the things I now hold so dear.

I stand in the church lifting my voice up in His praise.
When I finally remember the last and probably the most important thing you taught me -
That when Iâ€™m hurting, when I feel I cannot carry on, when I feel empty inside,
The only One that can - truly - heal my pain, help me carry on, fill that void in my heart,
is God.

And with that last thought, I know I can carry on with God by my side.
Though I still miss you and still, on occasion, I mourn your death, I know I will find comfort in Him. And I await that day, up in heaven, when I will see you again.

Postby **Takuya** » Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:25 pm

YAYAYAY!!!!

Wait... did... someone pass?

Postby **DaughterOfZion** » Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:27 pm

no. it was origonallly written about starfire. but it turned in to what it is now

Postby **Takuya** » Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:31 pm

Ohhhh... okay...

Starfire?

Postby **DaughterOfZion** » Thu Jan 19, 2006 5:33 pm

yep she left.

Postby **creed4** » Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:29 pm

It's nice keep it up.

Postby **Tommy** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 2:00 pm

I thought you meant the character herself. XD

Postby **teen4truth** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 3:50 pm

That was pretty good^^ It has a very strong message, rock on!

I thought you meant the character herself. XD

Postby **Takuya** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:43 pm

Tom Dincht wrote:I thought you meant the character herself. XD

I wasn't sure either... *GOES TO WATCH TEEN TITANS* Oh... no... she's there... yet she and Robin STILL have yet to confess their feelings for eachother... HOW LONG WILL THIS TAKE?!

Postby **Artist4Jesus89** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:47 pm

Postby **DaughterOfZion** » Fri Jan 20, 2006 5:00 pm

thanxs guys ^^

Postby **Tommy** » Sat Jan 21, 2006 10:09 am

Matrix Kage wrote:I wasn't sure either... *GOES TO WATCH TEEN TITANS* Oh... no... she's there... yet she and Robin STILL have yet to confess their feelings for eachother... HOW LONG WILL THIS TAKE?!

Teen Titans already aired its last episode.

How many little kid shows have people confessing their love to each other?

Little boys hate it, little girls like it.

Little boys wach action shows, little girls watch princess shows and little Tommy Dinky once again goes completely off topic.

Postby **fairyprincess90** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:02 pm

thats lovely i def like it ^_^

Postby **DaughterOfZion** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:12 pm

yaay! thanks beth!

my first posted poem

my first posted poem

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