Haiku Thread...

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Haiku Thread...

Postby Taro » Tue Sep 21, 2004 1:57 pm

I wanted to just start a haiku thread, lets try to use the lord as our topic.
Rember 5 7 5, that is the syllable count. I will join in once I have written one.
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"No one ever lost out by excessive devotion to Christ."
~ Henry Allan Ironside (1876-1951)
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Postby Ssjjvash » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:15 pm

An outcast of Earth
Unrestrained, I'll serve the Lord
You cannot stop me.

(Hey, I like this idea! I haven't had a lot of practice with this, but it's still fun.)
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone
And so hold on when there is nothing left in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!' ...you'll be a Man, my son!

Rudyard Kipling


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"You are not who your mistakes say you are; you are not the sum of your failures!"---Rev. Billy Miller

Proverbs 18:24
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Postby shooraijin » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:23 pm

Moved to writing.
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:23 pm

Half-Life 2, how wonderful
It will beat the crap outta Halo 2
Don't even try arguing...
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Postby olorc » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:39 pm

Omnicient being.
Forgives all who come to him.
With him, fear nothing.

not quite sure if nothing was 2 or 1 syllables. hmmmm oh well
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Postby Esoteric » Wed Sep 22, 2004 8:33 pm

Dreary is the day
How the hours drift away
As I work, work, work.

(its been a long one)
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Postby Ssjjvash » Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:17 pm

Man, I haven't come here in a while. Meep!

I feel like I've slipped
Way too many times to count.
Your mercy endures!
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone
And so hold on when there is nothing left in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!' ...you'll be a Man, my son!

Rudyard Kipling


Satan, bite the dust!Image

"You are not who your mistakes say you are; you are not the sum of your failures!"---Rev. Billy Miller

Proverbs 18:24
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Postby CreatureArt » Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:22 pm

5 7 5.... 5 7 5....

Vision of my life.
Because of your sacrifice -
I am heaven bound

Haikus rock :grin: . Praise God!
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Postby Htom Sirveaux » Sun Dec 05, 2004 9:04 am

Satan can't have me
My soul belongs to Yaweh
My Lord and Saviour
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If this post seems too utterly absurd or ridiculous to be taken seriously, don't. :)
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Postby plutogrl03 » Sun Dec 05, 2004 1:18 pm

Excellent haikus
Short, sweet, simple, and funny
Look, I made one too!
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Postby perelandra » Sun Dec 05, 2004 9:38 pm

The moral of the story (an interactively punctuated haiku)

Pride a sin only (period here?)
To those who do not know it (or here?)
Honour need not sneer.
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Postby perelandra » Sun Dec 05, 2004 9:40 pm

p.s. nice metafiction plutogrl03
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Postby Photosoph » Sun Jan 16, 2005 1:55 pm

Times do not change thee
You are still good in bad times
Your love endures always.
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