i'm a poetry buff so i figured i'd try some poetry on ya ^^

[Rachel]

Wow...your poems are really good. Please continue to write and post.

[girlninja]

The celestial beings
all shout their song
silent to the hearer of ears
but loud to the hearer of souls

They dance among the palm of God
illuminating on their own nothing
but together they light up the night sky
proclaiming His magesty

They also teach
for they enforce a lesson that so many forget
they teach us to look up
they force us to wonder
they force us to think
they make us feel small
even among the giant of us

They silently scream
they silently praise
they are witnesses
they are proclaimers
of a Desighner and Creator
they are art upon the night sky
that which our God holds in the palm
of his Divine hand

[girlninja]

Why did you chose such a life Lord?
leaving yoru throne of righteousness
leaving the free and the wise
leaving the peace and the joy
instead you brought it here

in a world consumed by desire
in a world consumec by lust
in a world consumed by greed
you came hare?
why?

Are we really worth the trouble?
all we do is abondon you
is it possible that you love us that much?
can our minds even fathom?
can our hearts hold all that in?

you tell us you know the number of hairs
that you can free us in a instant
even if teh chains are bound too tight?
even if all i have says no?
can you free me from even that?
will you?
am i worth that?

i know you smile at me now
and you point to a lone man on a hill
precious blood dripping from his wrist
from his side
i don't want to look
the sight is too much
but i have to
because that's you on that hill
and the answer is "yes"