A Cycle that Endlessly Flows...

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A Cycle that Endlessly Flows...

Postby Dragon Master » Thu Oct 07, 2004 7:08 am

A life lived at home Knowing nothing to do
In my own little world with few friends
A good home a good family a good church with good friends
but a life constricted to no end.
Day after day living life heartlessly following routine
go to school eating meals doing work playing guitar
its a cycle that endlessly flows...
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A piece I just felt inspired to write. My life isn't that depressing though so don't go off thinking "oh yeah shes some depressed freak"
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Postby shadowblade » Thu Oct 07, 2004 9:59 am

Nah, I don't think you're a freak. I think that was a pretty cool poem. :) Keep up the great work!

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Postby Dragon Master » Fri Oct 08, 2004 4:46 am

Thanks! shadowblade I like you! :Clicks shadowblade's name: :goes down to option "add shadowblade to your buddy list": :clicks!: (off topic) Do you have any writing/art around here? PM me or something if you do! I would love to see it! :) (On topic) I'm glad you like my poem!
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Postby Ssjjvash » Fri Oct 08, 2004 1:28 pm

ACK! I once had a cycle kinda' similar to that. wake up. do schoolwork. watch tv. play on comp. eat food. go to bed. repeat.
lol, then I got set free from that.

Anywaz, that was pretty good.
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone
And so hold on when there is nothing left in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!' ...you'll be a Man, my son!

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Postby Jaltus-bot » Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:07 pm

cool. No, your poem isn't very depressing and I don't think you are a freak. Some of my poetry is more depressing. Can I be your buddy to? Can I? Can I? Pleeeease?
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Postby Dragon Master » Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:33 pm

Sure! :does everything done to put shadowblade on buddy list in sheherazade's name: Done! :) I like it here!
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