poem for the lost

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poem for the lost

Postby Guardianking500 » Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:56 pm

this is for those who loose their way
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light guides the many
but guide yourself
you can
with lord of heaven
and god above
let not
your mind and heart
cloud your way
together you stand
with the lord and god
your strength will come
guiding you ever more
to the path
he wishes you to take
let not your mind wander
or your heart lead astray
for in god your path
will be revealed
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Postby Stephen » Wed Jan 10, 2007 11:09 pm

Moved to the writing board.
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Postby faithfighter » Wed Jan 10, 2007 11:11 pm

brovo!! I luv it! you really pulled off a great freestyle peom. thats actually really hard to do, but yours is great! keep up the good work
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Postby Wind » Thu Jan 11, 2007 12:05 am

well done on the poem Danny keep up the good work
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