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Postby true_noir_chloe » Wed Apr 13, 2005 5:49 pm

Fantastic Aka! :thumb: You should be an art teacher. And like Sunako wrote, you have really pretty penmanship.

Wow, :wow!: I just can't believe how great an artist you are. You just improve every time I see something of yours.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Danyasaur » Wed Apr 13, 2005 7:32 pm

O_O *stares at the eye* so. . . pretty *.* *touches* you should be an art teacher indeed ~_^d
[color="DimGray"]I don't believe that I would die if I saw you face to face;
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.

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